Scorpion's Fatals/Hara-Kiri:

Fatal 1: Scorpion pulls of his mask, revealing a skull blazing with a mixure of holy and unholy flames, and takes a deep breath before spewing a huge gout of flame onto the opponent, literally burning them to ash.

Fatal 2: A more extreme version of his Deception fatality. Scorpion takes his spear and proceeds to spear/rip off the opponent's limbs, one at a time, leaving them flat on their back on the ground, squirming helplessly to get away. Scorpion then walks up to the opponent, pins them to the ground with his foot, and then spears/rips off the opponent's heat at close range, holding it up as a trophy as he stands over the opponent's dismembered body, chuckling.

Hara-Kiri: Scorpion takes out his spear and proceeds to cut himself open in various places, lava-like ooze spilling out of the wounds like in the first movie. After a few seconds, Scorpion bursts into flames, and then explodes entirely, molten flaming goo and charred body parts flying everywhere.

*frowns* Where is everyone?

I COMMAND you to read my posts, to LIKE them exeedingly, and to comment on them in a constuctive manner. If you do not do these things for me, I shall have to perform the most painful fatality in existence upon your pathetic soul. So sayeth I!!!

*grumbles* Ungrateful little... I post my stuff on here, I'm told it's awesome and everyone needs to see it, but NO ONE EVER FUCKING DOES!!! What, are you guys on strike against any fan submissions on here that does NOT contain a pretty picture? C'mon, people!

My computer was on virus scann for a few hours, don't know what eveyone elses deal was. I like your work, man. But I do think its over looked for lack of pictures. I like'm anyway.

Perhaps. Apparently everyone on this board doesn't check out anything if it doesn't have a pretty picture to go with it. How sad...

Well, I'm not planning on drawying anything anytime soon, so you'll just have to deal with my text descriptions, alright?

Fine with me. Just keep up the good work and I'll be fine. Maybe you should encourage people on other threads to come read your work.

I like it. There are plots and characters what I do not like, but still very good.

Thanks for making this.

Well, what plots and characters don't you like? Don't leave me hanging, here.

Well, this thread's dead. Best to close it and leave it be. I've been occupied with other things to keep it alive, and most of my ideas seem to be similar to those of everyone else's, anyway, so there's no real point to keeping it open.

Actually, since this board seems to be going back to its policy about ONLY catering to fan art instead of any other type of submissoin, I would like to kindly ask the mods here to transfer this over to the Future MK Games Discussion board. Thanks.

If you are planning on abandoning this thread, i ask you to visit my version of the story. it is a more expanded one (considering that my MK7 has chap-ters in storymode, and at least 39 characters at first sight)

Find it in the new Future MK...whatever forum. your help would be greatly velcomed. Plus, I'm thinking of adding my drawn pictures to keep interest in the thread.

Cool as to what I want to know. Is Liu Kang alive or dead in this game? I mean you said he's a super unlockable character. As I would really like to see what his ending is after all, I'd imagine his battle with Raiden would be a really emotional one.

maybe more people will come if you promise cookies in the title. it worked with my movie dream cast thread in movies&media.

Since I'm having better luck with replies here than down inther Fan Submissions board, I'm not going to abandon it just yet.

As for your questions about Liu Kang, I'll get to his bio/ending/fatals soon enough, but one thing I can tell you is that he will NOT be battling Raiden in this game, story-wise. The ONLY characters that take an active involvement with Raiden is Fujin, Stryker, and Scorpion. The rest...well, let's just say that they've got their own problems to worry about...

Hay, Im still here man. I haven't given up on your work yet. And before you ask, no I have nothing meaningful to do and yes I live in front of my computer.

Okay, the first of an all new line of Endings/Bios for the remaining characters:

Ermac (Ending)
"Ermac had safely guided Liu Kang back to Earth and the relative safety of his allies, but one thing still nagged at his mind: the ominous presence that he had felt ever since his release from Shao Kahn's control. Inquiring me as to the source of this disturbance, I had told him truthly about the One Being, how the Elder Gods had shattered him with the Kamidogu, and his plot to use the ancient weapons to reunite the Realms and absorb all of reality into himself. Appalled by this, Ermac asked what he could do to help foil the One Being's plans. Although I did not know what the amalgamous ninja could do to aid in the One Being's destruction, I told him about the Kamidogu, and how their destruction would ensure the One Being's plan failed.

No sooner had I told him this that he had suggested a plan to destroy the Kamidogu. It was simple, yet very dangerous: he would take the Kamidogu and merge them with himself. He believed that his tue nature as an amalgam of spirits would upset the process of the merging and annihilate the Kamidogu completely, their powers and their influence over the realms rendered non-existent and out of the hands of the One Being forever. After much consideration, his plan was deemed good enough to try and, after acquiring the Kamidogu piece that we had harbored, made his long trek to Onaga's palace, where the other pieces laid.

It was easy for him to sneak in unawares and grab the other Kamidogu pieces from their resting place in Onaga's private chambers, but he nevertheless alerted the guards to his presence when he merged the ancient weapons within his being. But by then, it was too late: the pieces were absorbed and, as hoped, the paradox of his existence as single entity and legion of individual souls unbalanced the Kamidogu to the point of self-destruction. As the ethereal blast from the Kamidogus' destruction tore through his body, Ermac could feel the individual souls that made him become scattered to the four winds, free to ascend to the Heavens or be dragged down into the depths of the Netherealm. Yet he did not die, for as the final annihilation of the Kamidogu burned itself out within him, he could feel life - TRUE life - rush through his veins. When the chaos finally ended, he was the only one standing in the now-ruined palace, one and alone, the entity from the amalgam given its own soul and chance at life. Although he will never comprehend the full extent of his actions, his brave and unusual sacrifice gave victory to two wars that day: turning the tide to the one against Onaga and the One Being, and ending the one for freedom for the amalgam and the gesta;t..."

And...it died, again. Okay, now this is getting a tad annoying.

SynjoDeonecros don't start . A thread can't go on forever. Now I come to see your work every time I come to this website. You have good work, but there can be slow days you know.

Slow days, he says *rolls eyes*. Yeah, right.

I'll try to think of some more stuff to put on here, but I can't guarantee anything. Things have gotten crazy on me offline, again...

Majorly sick, brain not working right, so I'll just post some fatality ideas for the other characters:

Kung Lao
Fatal 1: Kung Lao throws his hat behind the opponent, which boomerang's back around and tilts on edge, slamming into the opponent's back and sawing itself into them until it slices them straight down the middle.


Tygaras
Fatal 1: Tygaras grabs the opponent by the head and proceeds to forcibly wrench their jaw open, farther and farther, until it gets irrepairably dislocated, stretched to the point where Tygaras can stick his head (or, at least his face) into their mouth before releasing them.


Sub-Zero
Fatal 1: Sub-Zero punches the opponent in the chest, forcing his hand into it and freezing their body from the inside out in the process. Once the opponent is fully frozen, he twists his hand and yanks it out, shattering the opponent.

Fatal 2: Sub-Zero fires a small Ice Burst at the opponent's head, which gets absorbed and, eventually, freezes their head, the opponent squirming and screaming as it does so. The opponent then drops to their knees as Subby brings his leg up and Axe Kicks the opponent in the head before they fall over, shattering it.


Khameleon
Hara-Kiri: Khameleon tilts her head up and spews a fountain of acid straight up in the air, which rains down on her and melts her flesh off of her bones.

Jax
Hara-Kiri: Jax essentially performs his Head Clapper fatality on himself, charging his fists up with purple energy before bringing them up and slamming them against his head.

I like them! Hey maybe you could do an interactive thing. You know give a slot of characters your considering to do and do who get the most votes.

...Why? I've pretty much got all of the kombatants everyone wants in my lineup, and I highly doubt an 'interactive' element to this thread will do any good in bringing in any more responses. If I get any requests to do any characters not in my lineup, I may consider it, but I don't really see a point to it, here.

This thread did have a good run though. It lasted 3 pages! Well anyway why don't you look for my work now. I am Shao Kahn's #1 fan! My work is in the same section as this one.

Right. Three pages, spanning four months, with only a handful of people actually responding to it and you being pretty much the only person to have responded to it this month. Uh-huh. Sorry, doesn't cut it with me.

The main thing that bugs me about it, though, is the fact that almost all of the posts have been 'Oh, you're so good, you should apply to Midway, etc", but if you haven't noticed, they're ALL from the SAME COUPLE OF PEOPLE, with hardly any newcomers. If my stuff is as good as they say it is, why haven't they spread the word? As a struggling author IRL, this makes me wonder if they REALLY think my stuff is all that, or if they're just saying that just so I wouldn't feel bad when everyone ignores it.

Hi, I'm a new guy here but I did read your stuff as a guest. If you would like, I can give you my honest opinion: They are good. Now in the case of Smoke and Raiden, I'll be the first to admit that I would like to a nice little happy ending where Raiden becomes himself again and Smoke rides off into the sunset with Subbie. However, your endings do provide closure, one thing that has been eluding Smoke for years. Now I would like to ask something: First off, I am a HUGE MK nut or else I wouldn't be here, but there has always been one person I felt most ignored: Rain. Do you have any thoughts on doing something for Rain because the way I see it, they turned Ermac around why the hell can't they do it for Rain?