I need to read over Krimson, Mr. Mute, etc, will be back wirh my thoughts shortly.


Thanks for your feedback guys.

Thanks, I wanted to make him the best I could like that.
Mostly the storyline, appearance, and rivalry with Stryker stuck out to me, but everything as a whole was good.

A well done mercenary character,though someones should tell her killing the employer even after getting payed is bad for business lol.

But seriously good job.

Well looks like I'm probably going to win round one against Jered, but assuming Lorsid wins her round one this could get interesting.

Which one are you again?

You guys are super nice ! Thank you for your kind words . Now to give some comments on the other requested characters:

Krimson: I think she looks splendid daryui is a very talented artist and I think her backstory is really well written her ending flows perfectly with the overall design.

Marek: As previously mentioned I LOVE the mysticism surouning this character.It fits him very well! The firestorm super move is awesome but as you can see I am a rather big fan of fire

Mr Mute: His name alone gets me pumped :D I am in love with the amout of characteristics you were able to pack in this KREATION :d

Ire, bracket one, bottom

I sent my final draft to you and I think I gave you the wrong image URL for my other costume image so I will post the images here for everyone. You can link them from photobucket to the MKO character sheet if you want. Thanks Crow.

Revised Image of Costume 1

Special extra treat,Costume 3 (Eclipse)

Gee, all this praise for my character's mysticism makes me regret giving him an axe throw as a special. Guess that's what happens when you work on something on the spot, lol.

Loving what I've seen so far.

Deon Bordeaux:

Loving this modernized wizard-y feel I'm getting. And his ending is pretty great.

Ekimaru:

Badass costumes. And babality.

Mr Mute:

The comic book elements make a a somewhat hilarious addition, and a nice change of pace from seriousness.



Lol. Thanks. I guess she likes double-crossing her bosses...

I loved all the connections you made to the established canon and expanding upon it by explaining Kano's injury, also love how she started off being wary of her father then descending into his world later on in her life.


I'm a huge fan of her design, the arm band designs, straps, and vest like top look superb, really love your artwork.

I love her taunts, so much attitude= win

Fatalities are pretty good, really enjoy the name of the first.


Ending tied in nicely to a possible MK10 scenario

Thank you for the kind words. Krimson is flattered.

So much reading to do, I'm ecstatic.

So far I've read a couple that I didn't like, won't say who (No one here though, so that's good news)

Would love to get some more feedback on Merrick.

Deon has a solidly non-intrusive story. Connects to a character in a way that is relevant to the kreated kharacter, but not some HUGE MAJOR thing to the canon one. Good. Same goes for Ekimaru too. I consider it pretty important that if you mention a canon kharacter they should be relevant to your kharacter's plot.

Dayyyyyyyum, Ire is hardcore awesome. I, I am just speechless. Bravo.

Why, thank you!

If you are talking about the right one, I prefer her alternate [the one on the left], but I think it's still good..

Her X-Ray, and First fatality names reference C. Viper from Street Fighter, and Assassin's Creed...

Mr. Mute His special are great, reminds me of a comic strip and School House Rock (in a good way)


X-ray is unlike anything I've read or would of possibly thought of, great originality.

fatalities are very outside the box as well, very memorable.

I love the intro with the "hahaha's" made me laugh.


Cliffhanger ending leaves him with something to do in the future.



Marek.

A nice twist on the Shadow priests.


The soul rush and teleport he has in my mind's eye are superb looking/ sounding specials.

X-ray is gory and also nice because it targets the kneee caps and we haven't seen much of that before.


Nice to see he isn't a blind folllower of Kahn and in the interests of self preservation, broke away from him.

Hey guys why don't we tweet spam Ed Boon in order for him to see this contest and maybe it will become easier for him to make the 4th dlc character and please a lot of fans .

I thnk 90% of the characters in this contest deserve to be dlc ALOT more than Skalett . If mister Boon considers this a possibility , he will gain internet fame and the respect of gamers worldwide for the dedication and trust that he is givving to his loyal fans.

Thanks, I remember there was a thread where someone asked for a Shadow Priest character, so I was inspired to make one. And the Soul Rush was mostly inspired by a move the SP's used in MK:SM, so it's sort of an homage I'd guess. And thanks, hadn't noticed that tidbit about the lack of kneecap targeting, lol. Good luck in the tournament.

No problem! I do think that was a good choice.

@Spider804 Totally got and loved the MKSM Shadow Priest reference[s].

Crow, I have like 2 more sentences for my character ending that reveals a little more, like allies and enemies and clears up who Im talking about earlier in Shiku's ending. I get it if its too late, but since voting hasnt started, could I send it to you?

If it is too late I can just drop it in this thread I guess.

Oh and this Tourney is gonna be stupid nuts lol lookin great, cant wait to start and get feedback...

I have read through Krimson's information.

She appears to be a cross between Sonya and Kira with darkened hair. Gameplay is well thought out and pretty unique. I see a few downsides to her special moves, namely the enhanced version of the free hit bombs would probably only be useful in far screen opportunities. The xray description took a bit of thinking and modification on my part to make it work in my head.

Over all however I'd say this would be a very balanced character in the game, I'd love to see her fight my entry.

I look forward to her first match so I can throw a much more detailed description of my thoughts into the mix.

@Daryui: Thanks, I was aiming to pay as much homage to the Shadow Priests thoughout the years as I could, particularly with Marek's winpose being the floating praying thing they've been known for, all while kicking ass and taking names in the high stakes game of Mortal Kombat. Unlike the rest of those losers who just stood there floating and praying whiel they got their asses beat by a couple of Shaolin Monks.

I already see some heavy competition, not only for my self but a very high portion of the entrants. Just had a real quick look through of everyone and it appears that "its goin down".

ps JackJackDani; Ail is a really unique character good luck, ill give u my thoughts sometime later.

Nobody read my suggestion :c

Anyway I checked Ire and I gotta say that he is one well tought out character the ONLY thing missing for me is pictures I would love to see his awesomeness , but that doesn't put him in a disadvantage because he is so well described!