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06/25/2011 05:52 AM (UTC)
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Snake
Black widow
Sapheera


I know I've been saying I will put feedback, but like Crow I am too backed up a bit, so if you want me feedback, just ask and shall do a long one personally. Thank you.
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jpetrunak
06/25/2011 05:53 AM (UTC)
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Match 1: Snake

The only thing I dont like is the name Snake, should have just used Atticus. Also, I would have used the scythe instead of a sword.

Match 2: Krustacen

Wins on a technicality, I liked the other character better, but she had like 500 special moves and that killed it for me.

Match 3: Sapheera

Now THIS is what I was hoping the competition would be like. You made a new character but actually tied it to the existing story, added to the cannon, and made a character that I would play as. Best entry I've read. A good example of how you can tie a character to the universe in a more meaningful way than " one day X person was attacked by Y MK character, and now they are in the game.

Bravo !
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06/25/2011 06:03 AM (UTC)
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jpetrunak Wrote:
Match 1: Snake

The only thing I dont like is the name Snake, should have just used Atticus. Also, I would have used the scythe instead of a sword.

Match 2: Krustacen

Wins on a technicality, I liked the other character better, but she had like 500 special moves and that killed it for me.

Match 3: Sapheera

Now THIS is what I was hoping the competition would be like. You made a new character but actually tied it to the existing story, added to the cannon, and made a character that I would play as. Best entry I've read. A good example of how you can tie a character to the universe in a more meaningful way than " one day X person was attacked by Y MK character, and now they are in the game.

Bravo !


Completely agree on Snake and Sapheera. I fell in love with Snake the moment I saw him, and yes shoulda kept the scythe and another name, other than that it was GOOD. Same with Sapheera, though I was a bit weird out about her being Kitana's real mother, but doesn't bother me cuz my KAK too ties with a MK character in a big way that ppl may or may not like, but Sapheera is AWESOME and love her moves.
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Shesgotclaws
06/25/2011 06:26 AM (UTC)
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Match 1: Eternus. ( although I think you meant 'ancestor' of king Jerrod)
Match 2: Krustacian.
Match 3: Sapheera.
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Espio872
06/25/2011 06:36 AM (UTC)
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1. Snake


2. Black Widow


3.Sapheera
Snake
Krustacian
Sapheera
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Ekimaru
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06/25/2011 07:51 AM (UTC)
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Snake

Black widow

Sapheera
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06/25/2011 08:10 AM (UTC)
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Snake

Krustacian

Sapheera
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MKNewb
06/25/2011 08:21 AM (UTC)
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Snake
Black widow
Sapheera
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06/25/2011 08:41 AM (UTC)
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Snake
Black Widow
Sapheera
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06/25/2011 11:08 AM (UTC)
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Snake
Black widow
Sapheera


I liked krustacian but I just thought it was a joke character. A well dine joke character though. I'd much rather have this than meat or mokap
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06/25/2011 11:24 AM (UTC)
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SNAKE
easy choice for me, eternus is just an orange ninja. there was always gonna be at least one *insert colour here* ninja. snake is pretty cool, even if just a little similar to noob saibot.

BLACK WIDOW
wasnt there some sort of limit on special moves? black widow takes it anyway, whilst krustacean's gameplay i thought was better, black widow's story was far superior. i have to say, krustacean's first fatality was...interesting.

SAPHEERA
the nude thing was kinda unnecessary, but a very cool character.
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acidslayer
06/25/2011 11:46 AM (UTC)
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my votes goes to
snake
black widow
sapheera
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roguelocke54
06/25/2011 12:51 PM (UTC)
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Snake
Black Widow
Sapheera
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RealMeenaMileena
06/25/2011 12:57 PM (UTC)
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I think Komodo's round is next! I'm so exited!!

I should vote too!

Eternal
Krustacean
Greyia

They were hard choices but I like all of them except Black Widow. Too many moves.
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JackJackDani
06/25/2011 01:44 PM (UTC)
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Round 1: Eternus

Round 2: Black Widow..but get rid of the sais, that's Mileenas trait. Krustecean made me laugh though.

Round 3: Greyia
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Rockchalk5477
06/25/2011 01:49 PM (UTC)
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1. Eternus
2. Black Widow
3. Sapheera

Awesome stuff, guys!
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TheGil-Monster
06/25/2011 02:44 PM (UTC)
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1. Snake.
2. Krustacean.
3. Sapheera
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SystemSCSnake
06/25/2011 03:04 PM (UTC)
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I missed the last three voting rounds Jesus, I should atleast make it to mine.

-Snake

I reread Eternus several times and he's a well made character, but Snake just seems to stick to me more. Snake seems to have more character depth and a bit more originality. Also, I'm the first person (I think) to have a character that is part of the Brotherhood of Shadow, cool tidbit.

-Krustacean

I liked the other character alot, and I can see lots of effort was put into it however, 1st thing the name has got to go. "Black Widow" is quite the trademark name for a Marvel character, it was also obvious you knew about this when you threw in "Poison Ivy". I think you could have cut down on the specials moves way more as well, that probably would have gave you my vote. (Also enough of the holograms) Krustacean is perfect for a joke character, (and is obviously made as one) I just think Moonlantis should be called Moonrealm instead.

-Sapheera

Sapheera is near perfection, but there's things that bother me. Like her being a zombie sandwoman, being nude, and a few other things. I think making her more lively (and dressed) like the woman "ninjas" that are in MK with the power of sand would be a great character. If Greyia didn't have a STORY ending, some more move details, and a better detailed alternate, I would be alright with him.
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BarronOrcus
06/25/2011 04:16 PM (UTC)
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Snake

Krustacean

Sapheera
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06/25/2011 04:29 PM (UTC)
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Eternus
Krustacean
Sapheera
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06/25/2011 04:35 PM (UTC)
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Match 1- Eternus

It was a battle between two ninjas in this one. I went with Eternus because I thought that Snake was a little too much like Noob IMO.

Match 2- Krustacean

I have a feeling Sanguinius didn't take this character too seriously. I mean Moonlantis, Krab-Maga really? But you know what his character is too damn entertaining to go out so early so I say go Krustacean!

Match 3- Greyla

Honestly I thought Greyla was way too powerful but I have to vote for him because I didn't like Sapheera being Kitana's real mom. I have a hard time liking fan characters who change the cannon around too much confused Not to mention there are several characters in this tournament with similar stories. I know Greyla is overpowered but I could seem him as a boss character.
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SystemSCSnake
06/25/2011 05:04 PM (UTC)
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Also just my last word,

Atticus could very well be the name instead of Snake, Snake is just his codename from being part of the Brotherhood of Shadow/Black Dragon.

I really did intend for his main weapon to be a Scythe but I didn't for two reasons

Main Reason: I wanted Snake to still utilize martial arts as described in his fighting style. Lugging that big scythe around would really get in the way.

Second Reason: The grim reaper thing is really cliche, I didn't want to stray to that completely.

However I could still use the scythe for him too, it would have to be upside down at an angle, and attached to his waist.

Also yeah there may be some similarities with Noob since....y'know they are both part of The Brotherhood Of Shadow, and he was basically Noob's apprentice (suggested by the context but not stated), however they are two completely different characters, none of the moves are alike. (Even his teleport, it's a barrage of shadows and there is no grab at the end) They are pretty much only connected by story. Snake is a swordsman.
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06/25/2011 05:11 PM (UTC)
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snake

krustaceon

sapheera
Now this is what I'm talking about!

Two tight races with no easy winner. I think game 5 is going to be a good one.
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