My MK: Armaggedon storyline
My MK: Armaggedon storyline
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posted10/17/2005 07:13 PM (UTC)by
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Sub-Zero_7th Wrote:
Hmm, well, I think that overall, you have some pretty good ideas. I like the main storyline and the bios themselves are nicely done so far. I would've liked to have seen Kenshi, Rain, Sindel, and Khameleon in your list. I will point out some things regarding your main storyline. First off, it's spelled Kamidogu, not Komidogu. Secondly, there are 6 Kamidogu and Shinnok's amulet, which btw, isn't a Kamidogu. Lastly, well, I wouldn't use the word revival. Merging the Kamidogu with the help of Shinnok's amulet brings the shattered consciousness of the One Being back together thus making reality cease to exist though I guess you're trying to find a loop around the loss of reality thing...at least for the time being.. Anyway, onto the bios.
Liu Kang
This is actually nicely done and very fitting, imo. I think that Bo' Rai Cho should be included in Liu Kang's allies list. I do have two questions regarding Liu Kang's bio. How is Raiden being influenced by the One Being? How did he unwittingly aid in the One Being's revival?
Kung Lao
This is excellent! It's one of my favorites so far and fitting to Kung Lao's character. I will note that like with Liu Kang's allies list, Kung Lao's allies list should also include Bo' Rai Cho.
Scorpion
I think this one is nicely done as well though I will note that from something that Tobias said regarding Scorpion's vow, it didn't happen, even despite there being the backstory in Scorpion's UMK3/MKT ending...I think that until Scorpion learns the true identity of Noob Saibot, he will continue to think that there is only one Sub-Zero.
Sub-Zero
I think that overall, this is good, but I would like to see an explanation as to how and why Sub-Zero went to the Netherrealm. Did he see Noob Saibot and Smoke in Outworld and on their way to a portal to the Netherrealm in which Sub-Zero followed them? What about him going back to Earthrealm? I thought he and Kenshi were traveling together to find a way back to Earthrealm. Did the two warriors go their different ways after a while? What became of Hotaru who was following them? I think that it would make sense to have Raiden and Kenshi listed in his allies list along with Sektor, Quan Chi, and possibly Shinnok under his foes list. I think that with Sub-Zero back in Earthrealm and with the threat of Sektor and his Tekunin growing that there'd be a mention of it somewhere in his bio. I guess that you'll perhaps cover that when you do Sektor's bio, yes?
Johnny Cage
Well, the bio is at least more than the craptacular storyline of his from MKDA. I don't think having Johnny Cage wanting to marry Sonya like that is quite a good idea. I think it would make more sense for the two to get hooked up before ever getting as far as marriage. Overall, I think that a bit more should be done for Johnny Cage's storyline to give him a bit of a new direction but at the same time, not straying away too much...I guess however for now, things are pretty good. I do wonder why you listed Kintaro as one of his foes.
Sonya
Well, I don't think it's exactly a bad bio, but it takes Sonya's storyline on the same path it's pretty much been. I would definitely like to see something new and exciting for character. On a bit of a smaller note, don't forget about Jarek as one her foes.
Kano
Before talking about his bio, I'd like to point out a couple of minor things. 1. I think Shang Tsung should be listed under his allies and 2. There's a spelling error on Kabal in the foes list. Anyway, I think the bio is ok. It's going in the right direction in terms of what you put for him, but I think that he needs more to his storyline if he were to return.
Raiden
The bio is good and fitting for him. There's not really much else to say for this one.
Hmm, well, I think that overall, you have some pretty good ideas. I like the main storyline and the bios themselves are nicely done so far. I would've liked to have seen Kenshi, Rain, Sindel, and Khameleon in your list. I will point out some things regarding your main storyline. First off, it's spelled Kamidogu, not Komidogu. Secondly, there are 6 Kamidogu and Shinnok's amulet, which btw, isn't a Kamidogu. Lastly, well, I wouldn't use the word revival. Merging the Kamidogu with the help of Shinnok's amulet brings the shattered consciousness of the One Being back together thus making reality cease to exist though I guess you're trying to find a loop around the loss of reality thing...at least for the time being.. Anyway, onto the bios.
Liu Kang
This is actually nicely done and very fitting, imo. I think that Bo' Rai Cho should be included in Liu Kang's allies list. I do have two questions regarding Liu Kang's bio. How is Raiden being influenced by the One Being? How did he unwittingly aid in the One Being's revival?
Kung Lao
This is excellent! It's one of my favorites so far and fitting to Kung Lao's character. I will note that like with Liu Kang's allies list, Kung Lao's allies list should also include Bo' Rai Cho.
Scorpion
I think this one is nicely done as well though I will note that from something that Tobias said regarding Scorpion's vow, it didn't happen, even despite there being the backstory in Scorpion's UMK3/MKT ending...I think that until Scorpion learns the true identity of Noob Saibot, he will continue to think that there is only one Sub-Zero.
Sub-Zero
I think that overall, this is good, but I would like to see an explanation as to how and why Sub-Zero went to the Netherrealm. Did he see Noob Saibot and Smoke in Outworld and on their way to a portal to the Netherrealm in which Sub-Zero followed them? What about him going back to Earthrealm? I thought he and Kenshi were traveling together to find a way back to Earthrealm. Did the two warriors go their different ways after a while? What became of Hotaru who was following them? I think that it would make sense to have Raiden and Kenshi listed in his allies list along with Sektor, Quan Chi, and possibly Shinnok under his foes list. I think that with Sub-Zero back in Earthrealm and with the threat of Sektor and his Tekunin growing that there'd be a mention of it somewhere in his bio. I guess that you'll perhaps cover that when you do Sektor's bio, yes?
Johnny Cage
Well, the bio is at least more than the craptacular storyline of his from MKDA. I don't think having Johnny Cage wanting to marry Sonya like that is quite a good idea. I think it would make more sense for the two to get hooked up before ever getting as far as marriage. Overall, I think that a bit more should be done for Johnny Cage's storyline to give him a bit of a new direction but at the same time, not straying away too much...I guess however for now, things are pretty good. I do wonder why you listed Kintaro as one of his foes.
Sonya
Well, I don't think it's exactly a bad bio, but it takes Sonya's storyline on the same path it's pretty much been. I would definitely like to see something new and exciting for character. On a bit of a smaller note, don't forget about Jarek as one her foes.
Kano
Before talking about his bio, I'd like to point out a couple of minor things. 1. I think Shang Tsung should be listed under his allies and 2. There's a spelling error on Kabal in the foes list. Anyway, I think the bio is ok. It's going in the right direction in terms of what you put for him, but I think that he needs more to his storyline if he were to return.
Raiden
The bio is good and fitting for him. There's not really much else to say for this one.
Thanks. Well yes Tobias said the vow wasn't canon, but he's not exactly in charge of the MK storyline anymore is he?
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I agree with some of these Idears but also think that Goro should not be a Sub Boss. I think that Kintaro would make a much better fit since he has been gone so long.
I also think that there could be more than one Sub Boss fight. It could either be 2 different matches like on MKT's "Master" ladder or You could fight 2 huge Sub Bosses at the same time. It could actually be Goro and Kintaro together now that I think about it. I would love to see those two team up together for once.
I also think that there could be more than one Sub Boss fight. It could either be 2 different matches like on MKT's "Master" ladder or You could fight 2 huge Sub Bosses at the same time. It could actually be Goro and Kintaro together now that I think about it. I would love to see those two team up together for once.
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^Right. Of course I should start taking into account everything Shaolin Monks said and did with every character.
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Yes, Tobias is no longer in charge of the MK storyline, but if you observe the way Scorpion's MK4 ending and primary MKDA bio along with some of the stuff mentioned in Scorpion's and Sub-Zero's Konquest storylines, it seems rather clear that there was no vow made and that Scorpion thinks there's only 1 Sub-Zero. The big brawl idea for the end of MK2 may not be something I'd like to see. It works for MK1 but I think when it comes to MK2, the fights should be more separate as opposed to one big brawl. I think Liu Kang would've been the one fighting Shao Kahn along with Kung Lao fighting Shang Tsung or Kintaro or Jax fighting Kitnaro and Sub-Zero fighting Scorpion. When Jax frees Sonya and Kano, there's no fight. Kano pretty much escapes into Outworld and this is of course after the heroes return to Earthrealm so I don't think having Sonya and Jax fight Kano would make much sense. Anyway, moving on to your other bios...
Kitana
Well, her storyline sounds fitting, but I think that its a bit linear unless you have something else planned for her storyline like mentioning something in her ending or another character's ending.
Jax
Well, I think he has an ok storyline. It's relatively linear like Kitana's, but maybe it could possibly open up to something a bit more.
Noob Saibot
Hmm, the part about feigning loyalty to Onaga sounds a wee bit similar to VainQueur's storyline for him, and like I said with his, I don't quite like this concept as I feel it slows down Noob's storyline a bit. Which part of the Netherrealm is Onaga in anyway? If he's in the lower planes, especially for too long, he can be trapped there forever...Well, hmm...at least his spirit could...I don't know...Now although this is in the Netherrealm, what exactly happens to Ashrah? Does she die and get transported to a lower plane of the Netherrealm? Does she change back more into her demon self? I'd like to know. When it comes to the Sub-Zero/Sareena romance thing, I don't think it's accurate to say that the two love each other. They really never got to know each other or anything though there did seem to be a bit of an interest. How does Noob know exactly what Scorpion thinks of himself? What are you planning to have Noob plan for Sareena or will that be revealed in his ending? Overall, it's not too bad.
Sareena
Like I said in my review for Noob's bio, I don't think they really loved each other. I think it's really more of an odd attraction that possibly could've developed into something more given that Sareena wasn't killed and sent to the 5th plane of the Netherrealm and Sub-Zero not dying at the hands of Scorpion and being turned into Noob Saibot. I'm a bit curious as to why you have Smoke listed as one of her allies. What do you plan to have Sareena do when she accompanies Sub-Zero and Scorpion? Does she want to save Noob and try to change him back or something else?
Cyrax
Well, it sounds linear like Kitana's and I think it's a bit too soon for Cyrax and Sektor to see each other again. That sort of thing should more likely be for each others' endings.
Sektor
How does Sektor know of the One Being? Since when has Cyrax been an enemy to Sektor in the past? Overall, it's linear like Cyrax's. I'd think that there'd be a mention of plans for Sub-Zero and the new Lin Kuei in his bio.
Smoke
I'm not sure if and where this is going. If there is something going with this, I look forward to it.
Ermac
This is a fitting bio for him. I look forward to seeing what his ending is like.
MIA characters
Kintaro: Ok, that would make sense for him to be dead but I think him dying at the hands of Kung Lao or Jax would be better.
Rain: Eh, I don't like this idea as it's wasted potential, imo. I would like to see Rain return and be a redeeming character like Ermac, but with a bit more to him such as maybe an interest in Kitana.
Khamelon: Like with Rain's, I think this is a waste of good potential. She could return and try to find Reptile so the two can unite and repopulate the Raptor race. Maybe even having Nitara in her storyline would add something interesting.
Motaro: Ok.
Sheeva: Ok.
Hsu Hao: Ok.
Kobra: Ok.
Jarek: Ok.
Sindel: Although she hasn't really had too much of a storyline in the series so far, I do see potential for her character and I wouldn't want to see her get killed anytime soon.
Havik: Eh, I really don't like this idea. No offense, but it just sounds lame and uninspired. I think that a lot can be done with Havik.
Kenshi: I look forward to that...
Shinnok: Well, I don't think Gods can actually die so I guess a different form of punishment would be taken to deal with the likes of him.
Tanya: Yay!
Stryker: Woohoo!
Kai: Although I'm not really much of a fan of him, I can kind of see a bit of potential in him.
Reiko: I think having him die isn't too good of an idea and is wasted potential like Rain and Khameleon. I think having Shao Kahn and maybe Noob Saibot have some part within his story could be good.
Bo' Rai Cho: Well, this would make sense, but I don't know if I'd want him dead, at least of yet. *shrugs*
Li Mei: I don't know...I like Li Mei and for her to die like that and so soon is something I don't like. I think that her struggling between good and evil to the point where she goes insane would be a bit of an interesting story for her.
Well, that's all I have to say for now. Thanks again for the heads up on your new bios. I look forward to hearing your feedback as well as some more bios.
Kitana
Well, her storyline sounds fitting, but I think that its a bit linear unless you have something else planned for her storyline like mentioning something in her ending or another character's ending.
Jax
Well, I think he has an ok storyline. It's relatively linear like Kitana's, but maybe it could possibly open up to something a bit more.
Noob Saibot
Hmm, the part about feigning loyalty to Onaga sounds a wee bit similar to VainQueur's storyline for him, and like I said with his, I don't quite like this concept as I feel it slows down Noob's storyline a bit. Which part of the Netherrealm is Onaga in anyway? If he's in the lower planes, especially for too long, he can be trapped there forever...Well, hmm...at least his spirit could...I don't know...Now although this is in the Netherrealm, what exactly happens to Ashrah? Does she die and get transported to a lower plane of the Netherrealm? Does she change back more into her demon self? I'd like to know. When it comes to the Sub-Zero/Sareena romance thing, I don't think it's accurate to say that the two love each other. They really never got to know each other or anything though there did seem to be a bit of an interest. How does Noob know exactly what Scorpion thinks of himself? What are you planning to have Noob plan for Sareena or will that be revealed in his ending? Overall, it's not too bad.
Sareena
Like I said in my review for Noob's bio, I don't think they really loved each other. I think it's really more of an odd attraction that possibly could've developed into something more given that Sareena wasn't killed and sent to the 5th plane of the Netherrealm and Sub-Zero not dying at the hands of Scorpion and being turned into Noob Saibot. I'm a bit curious as to why you have Smoke listed as one of her allies. What do you plan to have Sareena do when she accompanies Sub-Zero and Scorpion? Does she want to save Noob and try to change him back or something else?
Cyrax
Well, it sounds linear like Kitana's and I think it's a bit too soon for Cyrax and Sektor to see each other again. That sort of thing should more likely be for each others' endings.
Sektor
How does Sektor know of the One Being? Since when has Cyrax been an enemy to Sektor in the past? Overall, it's linear like Cyrax's. I'd think that there'd be a mention of plans for Sub-Zero and the new Lin Kuei in his bio.
Smoke
I'm not sure if and where this is going. If there is something going with this, I look forward to it.
Ermac
This is a fitting bio for him. I look forward to seeing what his ending is like.
MIA characters
Kintaro: Ok, that would make sense for him to be dead but I think him dying at the hands of Kung Lao or Jax would be better.
Rain: Eh, I don't like this idea as it's wasted potential, imo. I would like to see Rain return and be a redeeming character like Ermac, but with a bit more to him such as maybe an interest in Kitana.
Khamelon: Like with Rain's, I think this is a waste of good potential. She could return and try to find Reptile so the two can unite and repopulate the Raptor race. Maybe even having Nitara in her storyline would add something interesting.
Motaro: Ok.
Sheeva: Ok.
Hsu Hao: Ok.
Kobra: Ok.
Jarek: Ok.
Sindel: Although she hasn't really had too much of a storyline in the series so far, I do see potential for her character and I wouldn't want to see her get killed anytime soon.
Havik: Eh, I really don't like this idea. No offense, but it just sounds lame and uninspired. I think that a lot can be done with Havik.
Kenshi: I look forward to that...
Shinnok: Well, I don't think Gods can actually die so I guess a different form of punishment would be taken to deal with the likes of him.
Tanya: Yay!
Stryker: Woohoo!
Kai: Although I'm not really much of a fan of him, I can kind of see a bit of potential in him.
Reiko: I think having him die isn't too good of an idea and is wasted potential like Rain and Khameleon. I think having Shao Kahn and maybe Noob Saibot have some part within his story could be good.
Bo' Rai Cho: Well, this would make sense, but I don't know if I'd want him dead, at least of yet. *shrugs*
Li Mei: I don't know...I like Li Mei and for her to die like that and so soon is something I don't like. I think that her struggling between good and evil to the point where she goes insane would be a bit of an interesting story for her.
Well, that's all I have to say for now. Thanks again for the heads up on your new bios. I look forward to hearing your feedback as well as some more bios.
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