I kinda like the sound of it, but please, take it easy with the new characters. Make them interesting and completely unique.

Yo. Godslayer from Kami here. Due to my PSP's restrictions, I'll only go through the intro.

It's okay in all respects. It catches people up on current events and sets up the war. What significance will Quintine's crossbreed hold? Big bad boss or Lethal subboss? Also, if the CB is only a subboss, Who is the big figure in this situation?