Mortal Kombat 9: Vengeance

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Hey guys, this is the sequel to MK8: Betrayal. If you have not read my MK8 series fret not for hear is a re-run in this spoiler.

Spoilers: (Highlight to reveal)

MK8 took 8 earth years after Armageddon. Black-Ice (the fusion of Sub-Zero and Scorpion) had been deceived by Havik into getting a sacred sword located in the Lin Kuei temple. This sword was said to help one travel across the realms including the heavens and hells, but only if the user would slay as much people the sword desires. Black-Ice obtained the sword and used it to destroy the Lin Kuei Temple. The Forces of Light joined in and they chased Black-Ice throughout the realms. They finally caught him in Orderrealm after finding out about Mileena’s charade and what Kitana have been through. Scorpion had destroyed Black-Ice and it was revealed that Black-Ice was the least of the realms worries.
An ancient spirit known as Oregon had resurfaced thanks to the cunning of Tanya, and the stupidity of a Tarkatan servant of Queen Mileena. Oregon had waged war against Edenia while Lord Reiko and his troops were invading it in the process. It was a four way fight: Outworld, Forces of Light & Seidan guards, Mileena and her tarkatans, Oregon.
But in the end, the forces of Light were victors. Though they lost a few members the realms are safe. However, the forces of Light are now a few in numbers and they need recruits.

For the direct mk 8 story click here http://kamidogu.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=2761&start;=0

Here is the intro to the sequel.

MK 9: Crossbreed

Camera: *Shows sceneries of different realms*
Fujin : “Mortal Kombat has always been, and always will be”
Camera: *Quickly shows a fight scene and one of the warriors impale the other with their sword*
Fujin : “For several millennia, the Forces of Light and Darkness have battled fiercely. And darkness had its share of victories.”
Camera: *Shows the death of Liu Kang, and Onaga’s triumph*
Fujin : “But in the end, Light struggles and succeeds”
Camera: *Shows the death of Kahn and Shinnok*
Fujin : “Ultimately, darkness somehow finds its way to resurface across the realms. And it has just done so.”
Camera: *Turns silent*
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*Shows the temple of Chaos and Havik speaking to fellows*
Havik : “Fellow people, my brethren in Chaos. Our time of rejoice is near!”
Camera: *circles around the crowd slowly, as people cheer*

Havik : “Comrades, it is our time for milk and honey. It is our time for fun and laughter. Soon my friends...”
Camera: *Zooms out and captures the whole audience*
Havik : “... Soon the realms will tremble in fear, and chaos shall rein”
Camera: *Shows the crowd cheering*
Town’s person: “You talk big, but how are we going to accomplish those great and wonderful tasks?”
Camera: *Shows the crowd whispering amongst themselves*

Havik : “Comrades! Fear not, for we will accomplish these tasks together. Joining us on our mission is a skilled Asian warrior named Munashii. *Munashii steps forward* And joining us is the crazed killer that is wanted in all of Orderrealm... Frenzy! *Frenzy the clown/joker appears and laughs maniacally as the towns people rejoice.*
My comrades, we have all the help we need.”
Town’s person: “What will be our weapon?”
Havik : “Chaos... and a dear friend.”
Camera: *Slowly shifts to the curtain behind Havik and a male scientist appear*

Havik : “Behold, Dr. Quintine Theophilus Beckstay, A master in science and an expert in the studies of crossbreeding”
Town’s person: “HIM? What in the WORLD can he do?! He just has a fat tittle”
Quintine : *Pulls out a ray gun and shoot the civilian down, the civilians dies immediately. The crowd screams in astonishment.* “Does any body else want to speak?”

REMAINS SILENT

Quintine : “Good. Physically, I am of no use, but that is why I have my creations”
Camera: *Views a robot standing behind the scientist*
Quintine : “The tool that we will use to spread Chaos across the realms is a crossbreed I call Gorgous. He is a fusion of both...*silent* Why talk, when I can show? *Snaps fingers*
Camera: *Loud thuds sound and the crowd anticipates. The curtain opens and the beast appears shackled, with four arms and four legs.* *Crowd cheers*
Gorgous : *ROARS as he hits his stomach with four arms*

Town’s person: “Where will we start?”
Havik : “Outworld. The one who calls himself Emperor Reiko has been a failure and a disgrace to the Outworld throne. He is no where near the fierceness of Kahn. We will destroy him for his insolence but first we will warn him of our invasion. So fear can run through his veins and throughout the realms”
All: *Laughs together as the screen zooms out and fades black*
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Camera: *Shows Fujin speaking to warriors of Light around a campfire*
Fujin : “Reiko has already been threatened. Word has spread of this creation and this monster must be stop, before it gets too powerful... Peace must remain.”
Camera: *Forces of Light rise from their seats and screen fades black.
Metallic MK Logo appears and the best part of the MK theme song sounds.
MORTAL KOMBAT!
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Well that's that. I hope you guys enjoyed it. And please remember to post your feedback. I will start with the bios later. Here are all the characters I have so far. In counting, there are 30 of them. 20-25 main characters, as well as a few secret and minor characters.

V1LLA1N

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Im banned from mko

•01/10/2008 09:38 AM (UTC) •

-storyteller- Wrote:
Hey guys, this is the sequel to MK8: Betrayal. If you have not read my MK8 series fret not for hear is a re-run in this spoiler.

Shouldn't your topic say Mortal Kombat 8, not Mortal Kombat 9?

•01/10/2008 01:06 PM (UTC) •

Hi. Umm... I believe the first sentence states, that this is a sequel to my version of mk 8. And the spoiler also states the events that took place in MK8.

Now, here is the first character bio in my series.

Here is Fujin
Fujin (Foo-gyn)
Origin: Heavens/Earthrealm
Alignment: Good
Status: Protector of Earthrealm, enforcer of Peace
Costume 1: Alt costume in MKA, is just that his hairstyle is in ponytail form
Alt Costume: Primary costume in MKA, hair is cut low and short boyish bangs
Weapon: Staff of Winds
Allies: Forces of Light, Hotaru
Enemies: Forces of Darkness, Chaos followers

Bio 1:

Spoilers: (Highlight to reveal)

Once again the realms are in danger, more specifically Outworld. I have heard of the Chaosrealm ambassadors and what they threaten to do to the Outworld throne. If this happens, Outworld will become permanently tainted with evil. I believe that if we help it in their time of need they will realize that darkness is not the way of life. However, the numbers have dropped in the forces of light and it is a futile effort to try and stop Outworld with the members we currently have. That is why I will search all of Earthrealm and locate new recruits to join the Special Forces, I have already had my eye on a few, and I am sure Edenia will be willing to pass on a few. Hope is not obliterated yet.

Bio 2:

Spoilers: (Highlight to reveal)
I had succeeded in finding new recruits, and we had our meeting near the campsite close to the Special Forces. It was very interesting, and the personalities of the younger members were very different from the previous generation of heroes. Sadly Sonya won’t be joining us on our mission as it seems that she is needed in Earthrealm to fulfill a different task. However, that is not our issue. I have already informed the new members of our mission and I informed them that this will be our hardest task. God knows what the crossbreed might look like. We must stop them before it is too late. We leave at sunrise to Grandmaster Chou a fine trainer in Martial Arts, then to Chaosrealm once strengthened.

My Thoughts: I decided to bring Fujin back simply because he didn’t die in MK8 and Earthrealm needs a protector.

•01/10/2008 05:58 PM (UTC) •

-storyteller- Wrote:
Hi. Umm... I believe the first sentence states, that this is a sequel to my version of mk 8. And the spoiler also states the events that took place in MK8.

Now, here is the first character bio in my series.

Here is Fujin
Fujin (Foo-gyn)
Origin: Heavens/Earthrealm
Alignment: Good
Status: Protector of Earthrealm, enforcer of Peace
Costume 1: Alt costume in MKA, is just that his hairstyle is in ponytail form
Alt Costume: Primary costume in MKA, hair is cut low and short boyish bangs
Weapon: Staff of Winds
Allies: Forces of Light, Hotaru
Enemies: Forces of Darkness, Chaos followers

Bio 1:

Bio 2:

My Thoughts: I decided to bring Fujin back simply because he didn’t die in MK8 and Earthrealm needs a protector.

Showing people how to pronouce "Fujin" is the only thing that made me laugh. Your story is not too exciting. It actually bored me.

•01/10/2008 10:03 PM (UTC) •

Hi, I would just like to state from now that I would appreciate constructive criticism and not meaningless ones, like what you just contributed.

How was it boring? Why was that funny seeing that there are new characters to the series?

Anyways, hopefully more will post their ideas and share their thoughts and opinions. Until then here is another character.

Kimono (Key-mo-no)
Origin: Edenia
Age: 18 turning 19 (Ages first 20 years as a normal Earthrealm civilian)
Alignment: Good
Status: Princess of Edenia
Costume 1: Kimono no longer wears a kimono, but she instead wears a warrior outfit just like her mothers MKA alt. Instead her costume has white wear the blue should be. And blue where the Black should be.
Alt Costume: Young Kimono, wearing a kimono.
Weapon: Staff given to her by her mother. Said to have belonged to Jade
Allies: Kitana, Forces of Light, Nobunaga
Enemies: None

Bio 1:

Spoilers: (Highlight to reveal)

I had been training non stop over the years, and I had made my mother proud. I excelled in politics, and matched my intelligence with my fighting ability. I defeated my mother in combat and she rewarded me with her best friend’s staff. It was an honor. My mother must really think the best in me if she has sacrificed the last item she had to remember her friend. I will not let her down. My dream had finally arrived. Lord Fujin had paid a visit too my mother the other day and he told her of the upcoming event. He told her of the Chaos Ambassadors and the creature they possess. More importantly, Fujin required new members to join the forces of Light. My mother was not able to go because this would be the time Edenia needed her most. So I insisted that I go, she disagreed thinking that it was too dangerous. Infuriated, I stormed off and left a note telling her that I am going to help. It was the grace of the gods that helped me arrive at the campsite Fujin spoke of in Earthrealm. Soon I will show my mother my capability.

Bio 2:

Spoilers: (Highlight to reveal)

The meeting was over, and we were ordered to go get some rest for we leave tomorrow at sunrise. I don’t know what lies in the future but all I know is that I cannot fail. We will be leaving to a training site tomorrow and soon my chance will come. I must admit that I am a bit afraid, but I know that this is my destiny. Mother will be proud.

My Thoughts: I decided to bring Kimono back because I felt that she was misjudged. Hopefully she will be seen differently.

•01/10/2008 10:35 PM (UTC) •

-storyteller- Wrote:
Hi, I would just like to state from now that I would appreciate constructive criticism and not meaningless ones, like what you just contributed.

How was it boring? Why was that funny seeing that there are new characters to the series?

Anyways, hopefully more will post their ideas and share their thoughts and opinions. Until then here is another character.

Kimono (Key-mo-no)
Origin: Edenia
Age: 18 turning 19 (Ages first 20 years as a normal Earthrealm civilian)
Alignment: Good
Status: Princess of Edenia
Costume 1: Kimono no longer wears a kimono, but she instead wears a warrior outfit just like her mothers MKA alt. Instead her costume has white wear the blue should be. And blue where the Black should be.
Alt Costume: Young Kimono, wearing a kimono.
Weapon: Staff given to her by her mother. Said to have belonged to Jade
Allies: Kitana, Forces of Light, Nobunaga
Enemies: None

Bio 1:

Bio 2:

My Thoughts: I decided to bring Kimono back because I felt that she was misjudged. Hopefully she will be seen differently.

I hate it when some user beleives that everyone is going to give them basic constructive critisism, I gave you my thought, I don't need to be paragraphic with my reasons why I thought your story was boring, it was just boring tha's all. You keep ordering the people on this site to always tell you discritiptively on what they thought of your story, you may as well forget about having people giving any critisim at all. I am not being rude here, but it's just annoying when someone always need to have constructive critism. All I need to hear if someone gave me crit, is "it sucked" or "it's cool" that's all I need. That's just crap that you people always want constructive not just basic crit.

•01/10/2008 11:11 PM (UTC) •

Well I am not you, I want constructive criticism to know what I can fix and what I can do to make it better. "It's cool" or "it sucked" Doesn't do jack for me. I find that a waste of my time and the users time if they wrote that.

Being descriptive is important, it gives the author more of a say on where to go from here. So pardon me if you cannot do something as simple as that.

•01/11/2008 05:13 PM (UTC) •

-storyteller- Wrote:
Well I am not you, I want constructive criticism to know what I can fix and what I can do to make it better. "It's cool" or "it sucked" Doesn't do jack for me. I find that a waste of my time and the users time if they wrote that.

Being descriptive is important, it gives the author more of a say on where to go from here. So pardon me if you cannot do something as simple as that.

I find your insult lame and pathetic. I don't think I'm a stupid one on this site. There are WAY others that are on here that is more stupid than I am.

And its also pathetic to fight with someone, who you don't know, about a story that basically anyone can create. So I'm ending this fight right now.

CHEERS!

•01/11/2008 05:42 PM (UTC) •

No one is fighting, and you should stop jumping to conclusions.
You made a statement, and I told my expectations. DONE.

Anyways, I'm through.

•01/13/2008 01:59 PM (UTC) •

Harrison (Hear-ri-son)
Origin: Earthrealm
Age: 19
Alignment: Good
Status: Member of the Forces of Light
Costume: Opened black dress shirt, showing his chest and abs. He is tall, average built, green eyes, and a boyish haircut (Zac Efron’s)
Alt: Topless, black Kung Fu pants.
3rd Costume: Sacred golden armor of his village.
Weapon: Devestator (Given to him by Fujin)
Allies: Forces of Light, Nobunaga,
Enemies: Forces of Darkness.

History:

Spoilers: (Highlight to reveal)

Ever since the day of my parent’s deaths, I swore to destroy the forces of Darkness. I trained night and day, and at last it paid off.
The God of Wind, Fujin, appeared before me during the period of my afternoon training. I was shocked to see the divinity standing before me. He told me that he has had his eye on me, and it would be a necessity for my allegiance to the Forces of Light. I was thrilled. Finally my years of training and determination had paid off. I will not fail in this upcoming mission. I will destroy any evil that stands in my way.

Bio 1:

Spoilers: (Highlight to reveal)

The meeting was adjourned, and we were told to get some rest. I was excited to finally be a part of the Forces of Light, but a bit worried about the outcome of this whole situation. Why would one create such a menacing monster? Why would they threaten a next? I don’t know what we’re up against but I am sure that this is not going to be an easy task.

My Thoughts: Harrison is a character that I created. I wanted to bring him in the series as a potential hero.

Int3rmission

@Int3rmission

•01/15/2008 01:37 AM (UTC) •

Black-Ice?????

Start by changing that ridiculous name.

Tekunin_General

@Tekunin_General

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•01/15/2008 09:55 AM (UTC) •

was balck ice a result of...

FUUUU.......SHION.........HAAAAA!

hahaha, sorry, thats the one thing that would kill mk if thos 2 fused.

•01/18/2008 10:46 PM (UTC) •

This is what you wrote to me Storyteller:

I didn't mean for you to feel disrespected.
I just wanted you to feel stupid. For I pitied you.
I asked for specific crit, not bullshit crit like wat you gave. (Excuse my french)

I would just like to state, that your opinion didn't mean anything to me because it never had any substance. So please, the next time you decide to get feisty or fucking renk (Once again, excuse my french) I will report you. :)

Cheers

Nice message. I forgot to add on my comment back to you that why would you report me if I don't give you the right crit? You honestly think that the people who take care of reporters would actually report someone who doesn't give them constructive crit? I'm trying not to sound like an ass here, but that is the stupidest thing I have ever heard. And I never got fiesty towards you whatsoever. I can't write "It was boring" to you? That is constructive, becuase it was boring. You wanted my opinion so I gave it to you. I don't have to give basic crit if I don't have to. You are not gonig to get people to always listen to what you want happen.

Honestly, I didn't have to wrtie anything on this thread, but I did. And I wrote what I thought and I thought it was boring. Enough said.

But that message was out of line. And you had no right to say that to me becuase I didn't give you "crit" you want crit. Talk to Zentile, I'm sure he'll give you something to choke on becuase he can crit good. But I don't. I don't have to do anything what you said. And the only reason why I posted this message out in public because I thought you were way out of line.

As I mentioned before though, it is pretty much worthless to fight with a man/woman I barely know. I take back my apology and therefore call this little "fight" my win because I didn't do anything wrong. You went overboard. And if I somehow get skulled for what I had to say, well then goahead. But I will let you know that this whole entire thing is not my fault. I stated my opinion about this guy's story and he didn't like it. Where are you going to go in life if you can take bad crit? So I have nothing else to say to you. I stated what I wanted to say and enjoy it. Because I'm not changing my mind about MY opinion about your story. I'm sorry you cannot handle bad crit.

CHEERS!

•01/18/2008 11:28 PM (UTC) •

Why do you continue to pester me, I mean I know you like arguing, but it is just done.

Wow. You are one of a kind. Besides, you can clearly use common sense to figure out that you were being retarded. First and for most, you have the facts mixed up. I asked for constructive crit. If you can't give me that, then don't give at all. Jesus Christ! is that so hard to understand. Don't be get fuckin feisty with me. Just watch yourself, cuz I am not in the mood to get angry with a person that I don't even know.

This is just the net, you stated your opinion; I asked you if you had anything more to add. You then went PMS.

•01/18/2008 11:32 PM (UTC) •

girls cannot go pms over the internet buddy. Don't be calling me fiesty, you don't know the meaning of it. Besides, i wasn't having it during the time i wrote that whole thing to you. You don't even know what pms does I bet you. And I'm not "pestering" you, you don't know what Im like, I'm only trying to tell you to stop juding others when you clearly don't know them. I'm being retarted? Please, if you don't know me, quit insulting me. I haven't insulted you yet.

You're one of a kind, not me.

•01/18/2008 11:35 PM (UTC) •

Well... You clearly can't expect me to be the blame for this fuckery. Can You?
We all have issues sweetheart and you are just gonna have to deal with them. My mom has a tumor, and heart problems. I am still living, though she is the closest person to me.
My father is a tyrannical beast who is careless, but he still pays the bills.
My brother is an annoying fuck, and my Grandmother gets on my nerves, but nonetheless I still love each and everyone of them, and still carry on with my life.

Look, I just wanted more from your reply... that's all. It gives us author's a better say in where to go from here. I didn't mean to come of as a bitch, but I did and no regrets.
You do not have to apologize, you have your opinion, and I have mine.

Cheers, for you won a game that only you wanted to play.

•01/18/2008 11:41 PM (UTC) •

Yeah I have a medical condition and someone close to me passed away. trying to deal with stress at school with all the work i missed from the days i was absent... we all have problems, its not just you.

•01/18/2008 11:48 PM (UTC) •

This is what Sub-Frost said to me.

[I never wanted to play anything. I just hate it when people on this site thinks that they're going to get things handed to them on a silver platter. You can't expect the world to be fair to you. So quit asking for constructive crit because everyone on here won't always give it to you.

Insulting people while trying to make your point will never get anyone to think you're serious, You're just another one of those people who tries to say what they want to say by calling them a "fucker" you're not going anywhere by insulting me so you can forget about trying to act like a hero on this site by defending you when your obviously not a hero.

And Buddy Don't ever call me sweetheart. ]

I really don't understand you. You seem like a nice person, but then you go all berserk. I was just making peace and you took what I said and turned it into a war once again.

You just don't understand that if you keep doing this, you are going to end up proving my point. I am sorry that you are facing these unfortunate events. But that DOES NOT give you ANY right, WHATSOEVER to bitch at other people.

•01/18/2008 11:53 PM (UTC) •

You never stated anywhere in the message that I deleted that you were trying to say you're sorry. No where in that. I already made my apology to you, but you had to go and insult me and now I took mine back. So for your information bud, you're the one that jumped first, not me.

Sub-Zero_7th

@Sub-Zero_7th

•01/19/2008 12:40 AM (UTC) •

Ok, you two. That's enough.

Sub-Frost, I thought that I talked to you about all this. You are most certainly entitled to your opinion whether -storyteller- likes it or not. However, I think it is fair that he gets some kind of constructive criticism. Like I said, I've been working on a next-gen fanfic as well. The link is beneath each of my posts and is even in my profile.

The reason why constructive criticism is important towards these things is because it helps the writers better themselves so that they can improve the quality of their storytelling. This is something that Paragon and I expect in regards to the responses to our project, especially since that we have put a lot of hard work into it.

For someone to simply say that "It sucks!" or "It's boring." doesn't really help us at all. I happen to be -storyteller-'s harshest critic when it comes to his stories since I've read and replied to them over at Kamidogu. But even when I'm harsh, I try to help him understand where I'm coming from with my problems, concerns, etc.

So bottom line, I want the both of you to stop this. If you have personal issues with each other, sort it out through the PM system. For this to continue would lead to it being closed.

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•01/19/2008 08:49 AM (UTC) •

Sub-Zero_7th Wrote:
Ok, you two. That's enough.

Ah, beat me to it.

But yea, what he said, keep it to PM.

P.S. -storyteller-, asking for thoughts to begin with and then saying that you only want to hear constructive criticism is asinine. If you want to only hear positive feedback, talk to your parents.

mkflegend

@mkflegend

•01/19/2008 11:13 PM (UTC) •

I think a more appropriate sub-title would be MK 8:Reborn or Rebirth since it's starting fresh personally but Vengence is a cool name, perhaps MK9 should use that or something

Sub-Zero_7th

@Sub-Zero_7th

•01/19/2008 11:20 PM (UTC) •

mkflegend Wrote:
I think a more appropriate sub-title would be MK 8:Reborn or Rebirth since it's starting fresh personally but Vengence is a cool name, perhaps MK9 should use that or something

This is his MK9 fanfic. He had finished his MK8 fanfic already. Btw, XiahouDun84's MK8 fanfic is called MK: Rebirth, so it'd be strange for -storyteller- to be using that name.