its good but there is sum error in it. if Hederoashi was made by the lin kuei he should have a chinese name. Hederoashi is a japanese name. and scorpion isnt a sensai hes an assassin. and the first prototype made by the lin kuei was sektor.

It Is Fanfiction

Yeah, as OngBak said, Hedero was the 4th prototype!

FANFICION!

Scorpion trains alot of ninja's...

MMhh. Hedeo must codname himself "Tai Kwon Chei". And BTW, Scorp's part assasin, part trainer.

I agree in full with OngBak. Also, why do they have to teach robots? They are programmed. And isn't Scorpion against the Lin Kuei? Why would a robot designed to fight build other robots.

My favorite part of the biography was when he mentions that Sub-Zero has gone haywire. I couldn't stop laughing. I was like, "Uh oh. Watch out now! Sub-Zero has gone... h... a...y...w...i...r..e."

Hahaha I rated it 0/5 , don't like the way the cyrax wannabe is drawn.. the chest is all weird and the head is sooo big ... U could have done alooooooooooooot better.

That's tres bad, to be honest.

But I like how you use "it's fanfiction" as an excuse.

Hey if You Didn't Like It Then You Didnt Have To Rate it!!!

I Made A Sub Zero Robot Bambino

To be honest you are one of the annoying members around here because you get angry that your art sucks.

Oh and i rate it 0/1000000

The body is very skinny. So is his head. The whole drawing si horrible. Try coloring it with Photoshop or something like that,cause with Paint it looks horrible. Try doing different stuff to him. Cause he looks like Cyrax, Sektor, Smoke just colored differently. Try doign more stuff to his body. Shading, Details etc. Right now it looks like an unfunished art work. Take your time on doing this. Dont rush them. Cuase this looks like a very rushed work. Take time on doing the drawing. Dont just rush things. Make a better story. Something that will bring plots to his story. Like he was build to serve Shao Kahn to defeat the warriros of Earthrealm. Something different. Take your time on doing stuff. Think out your story. Make sure it sounds good. 1/5

i didnt do it with paint, sektor i did it with flash 5.0

i didnt do it with paint, sektor i did it with flash 5.0 and besides it is hard to draw with a mouse

First of all Flash is NOT an art program so no wonder ur thing looks like crap. And that is true, u always bitch at ppl when they tell u the truth, ur picture is horrible, looks like all the other cyborg ninjas. Most ppl when making a custom char dont draw the same exact robot. How boring is that, do u have any orignal thoughts that rnt as shallow as ur story ideas?? Doubt it

Wow! You are talented!

1000000000000000000000000000000000000000000/5

Way too many spelling errors, storyline errors, and they drawing is less than good. You just made some weird shapes and put it on the body. Your head is way too large for the body.

1/5

This is utter shit

haha dude im sorry, but were you drunk or somethin when you made this..i know its a fanfiction, but nothing in it makes any sense and it looks horrible.

It stinks an awful stunch in my opinion. The art looks lik eit was doen my a child. The story itself is full of lorical errors, and your grammer isn't that great either.

Oh guys, come on, take it easy on him. Maybe English isn't his native language and he didn't get to express what he was trying to say...

I sent him a private message asking if I could take a stab at this character. I too have been working on a Prototype Cyber Ninja and I wouldn't mind one bit to hand it over to him, as long as I get the credit for the drawing.

So... if he gives me permission, should I try my hand at "Hederoashi", or keep him as my original?

o woops, i didnt even realize that ur profile said u were from japan. that probly explains the errors. so sorry about that part, but i would say to maybe use a different program on him, or even draw him and send him in. It might help a little. then people might not go quite as fanboy on u, but im not 1 to talk.

Well, since your form japan I supose the gramical errors are okay. But there's no excuse for lorical errors, unless you're extremely new to the series. If you work on this character it can become soemthing really good.............. Then you can make him in KaK!