Sub-Zero Accepts Shang Tsungs Offer
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09/23/2012 04:43 PM (UTC)by
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MastaRoe
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Unknown265
08/31/2012 04:04 AM (UTC)
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This is a nice little fanfic for tying up that story detail the MK movie swerved away from. It is written pretty good too!
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Jerrod
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08/31/2012 07:00 AM (UTC)
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Short, well-written, enjoyable, and works with the film canon; therefore, it works for me. 5 DPs!
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Zentile
09/04/2012 12:56 AM (UTC)
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Would've been better without the spoiler title.
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Jerrod
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09/07/2012 12:27 AM (UTC)
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Zentile Wrote:
Would've been better without the spoiler title.

Zentile has a point; without the opening question and the title, there would've been an interesting dimension added, especially for those on the site who've not seen the film... The whole two users perhaps, but revealing that Scorpion's working for Shang Tsung without introducing us to the fact that this is an idea from the film would trigger an "oh shit, it's a film reference" cue from users like me, and generate a more surprised reaction from readers. You don't necessarily have to do it, but it's something to consider for future submissions. smile
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MastaRoe
09/23/2012 04:43 PM (UTC)
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Duly noted. Thanks for the constructive critiques.
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