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Ok Man this was a nice effort but here are some comments:

Pay attention to details, as I've posted in other newbie threads you need to concentrate and be delicate in your traces in "hot spots" like face, fingers and feet, your traces are to thick to identify correctly some of this parts.

You need to check proportion, your scorpion seems like he's wearing 4 pairs of shoulder pads, his chest looks abnormal, try to stay within the limits of proportion of your character,

The color has very poor quality even though you can imporve this fast with any software or someone in the site.

1/5 good effort.

thanks alot i have posted my images so i can get comments on how to improve i appreciate your comments

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it is a good effort and I like it but you really need to see more detail on the scorpion character maybe make him wider at the shins etc but maybe you could make him hold the spear in a diffrent way it looks a bit gimpy but it is a good effort not the best drawing but regardless its worth a 3.5/5

not bad i agree with what the others say good effort

Practice makes Perfect buddy!~
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its ok

Good try dude. I like the costume, imo the best part. The blood looks decent, but the main thing you should fix is the proprtions. The body look too big, and the head is misshapen. Still, you still did a decent job; do those tweaks and you'll have a hell of a pictures. 2.5/5