i like it, the design is very nice, you very good at drawing, so that makes up to 2 and a half, the coloring is good making another half going to three, and the fact that its my favorite character boosts it up two more dragons, so i rate this picture, 4 and a half dragons, since it is a very cool picture

Ok heres his Bio: After defeating Goro he returns to the Hidden Shao Kahn, Kahn grants him a suit he found in the same temple the Dragons Kings army was raised from while he was tracking Shang Stung and Quan Chi, while searching with the Brotherhood Of The Shadow and Kahn, they run across the Dragon King, the Dragon King and several of his combatants slay the most of The Brotherhood Of The Shadow and Kahn, but Noob is spared after the Dragon King recognizes the symbol on Noobs Armor to be his own, Noob joins the Dragon King recognizing his great power and what it could do for him self, if he had control of it...

This is an interesting design, I like the fact you tried to make Noob Saibot somewhat original, and not just another ninja. The story is alright, though it could use a bit more depth I think, though that really isn't the focus of the fan art forum. I just would like to see MK6's characters all have diverse, but intertwining storylines, and not have any characters that don't really fit in with the rest of the storyline.

As for the drawing, like I said its pretty original, looks pretty nice. I like the facial details, and the head looks pretty well in proportion. There seems to be a crest on top of his head, and up from his chin as well, I can see some slight rise as the textures are different. Looks pretty nice, though I'd like to see some more development for the mask. Other than those rises, the mask still looks too similar to a standard MK ninja mask.

The outfit is interesting, this "suit" idea isn't so bad really. With all the individual sections, it makes this appear too scale like though. It may not be such a bad thing though, since this isn't colored you could have shaded a bit to show the "shimmering" propertires perhaps, I think that would have looked cool. The "spikes" on his shoulders are original, they seem well positioned and look in proportion to one another. Another thing I would have liked to have seen focus on is this jewel, it seems to play some larger role and it should be more detailed somewhat in my opinion. The cloth hanging from his waist seems stiff in a way, however the length is nice, something different than other characters with similar attires.

The body "melting" in places is probably my favorite idea about this, seems to fit Noob quite well. The effects on the hands look very nice, I think the upper arms are somewhat thin though. I wish this was a full body sketch also, I'd like to see a similar effect on his lower body, but as is you really can't see too much of the legs. And them not being shaded all too much makes them look bulky. The weapon is nice, the handle is sort of long to carry on his back, but in a game it could have great reach, so its pretty nice.

One of your better submissions overall I think, keep up the good work.

i really like the concept for this man,

the drawing
it a little weak, pretty good sketch to start off with though, could turn into something really awsome with another draft. good ideas with the melting thing, although i don't see any melting on the pic?????

i like his weapon on his back, ready if he needs to use it,

storyline, very kool if you ask me, i like when people give a little background to the characters makes them more reason to look at them,

the hole red jewel thing is nice, giving his body a red tint or glow is a kool, idea. i'd LOVE to see this conept worked on, and then colored,
seeing nood with a red glow.

ohhh ahhhh. makes me smile like a little skool girl. hehehe


bottom line:
concept:4/5
drawing:3/5
story:4.5/5

original, which is always good.
i do have one small quam, his forearms look a tad too small, though its really not too noticable.
small imperfections aside, its great.

well, im working on a updated version with a little "cleaner" design because this is kind of rough with all the changes along the way, and i must say it was a little rushed since i wanted to get something on the board since i had the time, but now i have more and i plan on working on it very hard, and give him a little sharper apearence. I like looking at him as my own character since he has no set appearnce and i think it helps.

I was just backtracking to compare to your latest pic.

I've got to say, that is the best way to cover not wanting to draw his hands and the rest of his body.

Good concept
Wyatt

hehe, ive always had trouble with the legs, mainly the knee placement i guess that helped in the costume design . I guess i would be better at legs if i didn't draw the head in the middle of the page lol.