Random factoid:

Krimson did not have red effects to her moves originally, that was just tacked on 'cause I oculdn't think of anything..

Random Factoid #2:

I haven't voted yet for this round...

...@daryui Random fact #3..IM STILL HOLDING MY BREATH lol...no worries tho, Im sure your interpretation of Shiku will be well worth the wait. I just hope it doesn't come along with news of a loss :S...all kindsa nervous now haah

I simply found Deon's story and Finch abilities more interesting. Both are still very good entrants, though.

Lol, I have to redo the line art all over since my computer got unplugged while I working on it, so it will be another delay..

I want to be fair, so I'll show WIPs/Line art of both characters at the same time...I may not do the line art in GIMP, tho

I really think you'll enjoy, though..

Is anyone going to do a sketch of Lorsid for me?

Well don't admit defeat yet!

And well honestly i personally got confused reading your story.
Deon was easier to read

But based on gameplay and moves both are very good

Yeah, i can see how that could happen. And Im definately not admitting defeat. I think with a little more careful thought and organization my guy could be very strong. But I still think I have a shot at moving on, never count me out ;)

If there's anything this tournament has taught me, it's that anything can happen.

Spider and TBM, expect a WIP shot in around 2-3 hours from this post..

Please, give me your Crits/comemts

7:30 to 8:30 it is.
*sits patiently in front of computer*
I need a Dr. Pepper Cherry.

^^Nice..ill be around. Should give me something to null my nerves for a while lol

Please be brutally honest in your critiques, Spider, TBM, and everyone. It will help me improve...

Marek:

I need to work on his face, left leg, and right arm a lot more. As I look at it more, everything about his face is off, so I need to fix that. The position I tried putting it in failed horribly. I think he looks a little girly, as a result.

The belt is designed that way because I felt it connected to his story of having a vision, and around his gloves and boots, I added accents to match it.

Shiku:

I tried re-creating something similar to the texture from my source material, and his arms look a bit too skinny. The face is not that great either.

The boots/shoes are revamped from the HeroMachine artwork, and his eyes, I tried to make them appear similar to the ones in his primary...
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I have alot to fix, but I may redraw it all since I'm not too satisfied with the basics.. The designs are fine, in my opinion, though..

Yeeeuuhhh.. that is bad ass daryui!! thanks alot...I like everything except the fact that he kind of looks like hes doing ballet. But thats alrite, he be nimble lol. I like all else with the pose, and I think the face is fine. The only real problem I have is his feet. Do you think you could maybe etch in some black veins in his right arm? I want it to look sick and poisoned.

But that is WICKED stuff man, I wish I could draw like that. Thanks again for taking time to do that, I cant wait to see it finish! I know it will look awesome! EDIT: And btw Marek looks sick too. Like a sith apprentice almost haa. iLLn...I am now very pumped to see ur finished stuff

Lol, Glad you like it.

I'll fix the feet and add the veins in his arm for you.

^^ krispy..thnx :D

Internet acted wonky so I went over to the rehab center to spend time with pop, and come home to awesomeness.

Loving the hair, the glowing eyes, the fire around the hand, and the vision belt the most. The robe's not too shabby, either.

Cannot wait to see it in color. Excellent.

And I think I'll bring Marek back in the next tourney regardless how I finish in this one, I've already been brainstorming stuff to do. lol

Anyone else certain on bringing back their character for another Tourney?

Also, The matches today are too hard for me to decide a winner from each bracket....

Great Job, all of you!



Thank you!

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Same here.

Yeah, I've already even figured out a storyline too, assuming we're still talking about a Netherrealm invasion of sorts that is, otherwise it's back to the drawing board, haha.

Krimson's story doesn't need much changing, but I'll try added more FLAVAH.

I need to rethink her moveset, though. I plan on keeping her weapons and maybe one of her specials.
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'Where there is Krimson, there is a Viper.'

*Great intro idea me thinks.
**Points if you get the reference.

Street fighter lol points for me!

and i might use Serenity again depending on how she does here
if the reception for her is good ill bring her back with a even BETTER bio/story

Street Fighter.
Smoke Fire.
LMAO.

Points for ya'll!

YIPPIE!
Pizza party!
God dammit, I want some pizza so much right now.

mmmmmmmm, Pizza.

*drools*

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I should make moar Krimson art, maybe even Lorsid while I'm at it....

Has anyone commented on my character, Cerastes?
Sorry, I'm being lazy for not wanting to go through this whole thread.