The drawing looks good but you went too heavy on the texture effects. Mostly the cyclone and the skirt texture. If you added shading to those then they would fit in better.

The character overall looks good but there are a few things that make her look a bit awkward. The fans could use some improvement. I dont like her neck. A Bit too long. Also on her knee the line defining her knee doesnt look so great. Her face and her character design looks pretty good. Overall this gets a 4/5

Nice.I too think you went to heavy on the texture effects.If you add shadows to it,it will make the picture better.Out of that,nice job.

cool pic man. just gonna throw out some contructive criticism. as stated above necks alittle long, move the knee up coz the thigh is too long and the shine and foot are out of proportion. Lastly the left eye needs to sit in because its flat and hangs out of the face. but like i said i like the pic