Well its nice but there are a few things you might work on. The arms are too skinny. The brests are not right. Also the coloring is poor. Maybe learn some photoshop coloring. I love the face and hair. Nice job.

born-again-vampire Wrote: Well its nice but there are a few things you might work on. The arms are too skinny. The brests are not right. Also the coloring is poor. Maybe learn some photoshop coloring. I love the face and hair. Nice job.

I think B-a-v said it all, although Kitanas left arm looks slightly fatter than her rigth arm. Otherwise, good job.

She's got squiggly grandma tits.

Obvious anatomy problems as mentioned before. No shading, highlights.

What was this colored with? It looks like crayons but it might be pencils. Either way, I notice on her chest in the blue area lines indicating where it was colored. Now I realize that it's a large area to color but you've got to follow the contours of the drawing. It's not everywhere just in that and a few other spots. Doing it that way will also make it easier when you try to shade and tint afterward.

Wyatt

Go look at a set of boobs before you try to draw them. I've never seen boobs like that.