He has a somewhat funny look to me. I like the lightning, keep it up.

The funny looks is your mind adjusting to it not being a shoddy manga rip off.

MANGA MUST DIE.

Khardynyl Wrote: The funny looks is your mind adjusting to it not being a shoddy manga rip off. MANGA MUST DIE.

No, that's not what it is at all.
I was talking about his facial expression, not the style of drawing.
I usually don't draw in maga style myself either.

Too late, I have spoken

If by spoken you mean porven yourself as a colossal ass and an idiot all at the same time.......the yes you have. Congradulations, I salute you........dumb dumb.

It looks very good, but like with everything, It can still be better.

Here are some ideas for improvement.
What is the mask made of? Cloth, or plastic. I can't tell. If it is made of cloth, then put some wrinkles on it, so you can tell. If it is made of plastic, make it shine more. Exaggerate a bit, so you can get the point across easier.

Then I would make the diamond pattern on his suit 3D, as in make every little one look like it is sticking out a bit. From the way you did the lighting, I know you can do that easily.

And finally make the drawing lines on his face more noticeable. You have too look kind of hard to see the lines for the eyelids. I think this is why somebody said that the eyes look strange. They look good, but you can't see the eye lids very well.

So just make the lines darker, like pure black.

That's it, other that those things I mentioned, the pic is awesome.

Ok, Bleed is the only one allowed to criticise my work as it isn't bullshit like what everyone else said.
For me personally I like the picture exactly how it is. It is my first attempt at true colouring in with Paint Shop pro so I am still learning the best way to go about things. Saying to me like "the eyes are screwed" is extremly aggrivating. Having some talentless fool say something like that after I spent ages doing the picture caught me off guard.
Anyway, I like it how it is. I wouldn't have posted it if it wasn't finished.

I like it, especially his expression.

Bleed Wrote:
It looks very good, but like with everything, It can still be better.

Here are some ideas for improvement.
What is the mask made of? Cloth, or plastic. I can't tell. If it is made of cloth, then put some wrinkles on it, so you can tell. If it is made of plastic, make it shine more. Exaggerate a bit, so you can get the point across easier.

Then I would make the diamond pattern on his suit 3D, as in make every little one look like it is sticking out a bit. From the way you did the lighting, I know you can do that easily.

And finally make the drawing lines on his face more noticeable. You have too look kind of hard to see the lines for the eyelids. I think this is why somebody said that the eyes look strange. They look good, but you can't see the eye lids very well.

So just make the lines darker, like pure black.

That's it, other that those things I mentioned, the pic is awesome.

what he said but i dont really think its awesome

That is damn good, for your first try. I remember, the first time I colored something with Photoshop. It sucked real bad, yours came out way better, than my first.