I'll be doing bios soon.

I really like it, the idea of the war between realms I love because it holds so much dramatic input into everything and causes so many ties between everyone involved. And it involves alot of greed and chaos, too big things in Mortal Kombat.


I can't wait to see who's involved. :)

Thanks man, yeah that's my main goal. I'm trying to make it really epic. (P.S to everyone, I thought about this title before i even heard about War of the Worlds)

Exactly how many realms are there now?

Shujinko

“The Man belied by the Dragon believes he shall see Light when he slays the Dragon. But he shall soon discover that the only thing he will receive is Darkness” Words of the Prophet Nightwolf

Story

An intense battle took place between Shujinko and the deceptive Onaga, the Dragon King, in the lurid Dragon Temple in Outworld. Strike after strike, both Shujinko and the Dragon King executed potent blows against one another. A weakened Shujinko was the result of these blows, for the Dragon King was a formidable opponent. Ironically, not even a dent could be perceived on the Dragon King’s body or armor. While Onaga piously taunted at Shujinko, Shujinko lay in a pool of his own blood, with countless broken bones.

Hoping to kill Shujinko fast, Onaga quickly grabed Shujinko and throwed him at the other end of the Temple. Not to Onaga’s inclination, Shujinko landed on a piece of the Kamidugu, the one he found in the Netherealm. As soon as Shujinko made contact with the Kamidugu, the Dragon King bled his own blood for the very first time in many years.

It had seemed that the Dragon King’s Invulnerability derived from each piece of the Kamadigu and Shujinko had discovered this. One by one, Shujinko createed miniature, but dazzling fireballs that emitted bright sparks that shattered each piece of the Kamidugu. With each shattering of the Kamidugu, the Dragon King screamed in excruciating pain. “Fool! Do you have any idea what you are doing?!” screamed Onaga. Shujinko would boldly reply by saying “ending your rule,” and with this statement Shujinko sended another dazzling fireball to scatter the last piece of the Kamidugu, the Kamidugu of Ouworld.

As soon as the aura of the fireball made contact with the Kamidugu, an enormous and fearful earthquake could be felt within the ground, which seemed to stretch extremely far. Soon after, the Temple started to crumble rapidly and cracks formed within the ground. “In the name of the Gods, What is happening?!” cried Shujinko. “Fool! Each piece of the Kamidugu is an actual representation of each Realm. What ever happens to each piece of the Kamidugu happens in actually. You see fool, Outworld is separating into more Realms!”explained Onaga.

As the palace deteriorated, Shujinko gloomy looked down and melancholy said “What have I done?” With a grim, the Dragon King utters “Imagine how many countless people are going to die due to the separation of the Realms. Imagine how chaotic your home world must be right now. Tell me Shujinko, were your people’s lives really worth killing me” Shujinko quickly dashed as one of the main pillars collapsed on the ground and replied to the Dragon King by saying “We shall re-build and heal our wounds. And I will personally find the pieces of the Kamidugu and mold them”. With scorn, the Dragon King laughed at Shujinko’s remark.

Shujinko became more infuriated due to these complications and the palm of his right hand began to glow. The glow within Shujinko’s palm grew and emitted many brilliant colours. Once small, the glow had grown into and enormous, powerful inferno. Also, the inferno created a gentle breeze, which caused Shujinko’s clothing and hair to flow in harmony. Shujinko then directed his arm, which was now filled with potency, to the weakened Dragon King.

“What you see within my hand is the very essence of many worthy fighters combined in to one. You see Onaga I’m going to kill you with the very ‘gift’ you cursed me with,” explained Shujinko. Erratically, the Dragon King smiled and said “You may have been able to stop me, but you will never be able to stop ‘her’ ”. Confused, Shujinko asked “Who is her?” but the Dragon King only replies with a nefarious laugh. “Argh!!!” Shujinko screamed, “Who the hell is her!?” Yet again, Onaga laughed at Shujinko’s desperation and anger. The anger within Shujinko’s soul could no longer be contained, and Shujinko screamed “You Dragon Bastard” and the inferno within Shujinko’s hand was then finally released.

The inferno resulted into an enormous blast that could be heard all over Outworld. The deteriorated Temple was now filled with a bright light. When the bright light vanished, the Dragon King was no more, and the entire Temple had completely collapsed.

Shujinko had been buried within the debris for days. Slowly, Shujinko emerged from the surface of the debris. When Shujinko could finally stand, he whispered to himself “Why am I in pain? What happened? Why am I here?” Strangely, it had seemed that Shujinko had lost his memory. Shujinko wonders to himself why he sees Outworld in disarray. Shujinko then walks through the darkness, searching for reason and purpose.

Hotaru

“Order is the harmony between nature, powers, forces, and laws. If there is not a consensus within this harmony there is dissonance. Therefore, those who seek to disturb the harmony of Order shall be extirpated” 1st amendment of the Declaration of Order.

Story

A small boy gazed out of the windows of the Tower of Order. He was watching the fireflies which oscillate in a very spectacular pattern. Amazed, the boy admired the ‘orderly’ fashion of the fireflies, and praised them. From a distance, the father of the boy saw his son’s fascination of the fireflies and approached him saying “Yes son, the fireflies are amazing creatures. It is truly remarkable how they dance every single night in the exact same fashion”. The father then bent down to his son, and with a stern look said “It would be disappointing if something hindered the harmony of the fireflies, wouldn’t it?” Turning his head , the boy’s joyous face soon turned into an impassionate face and said “Those that wish to disconcert and bring chaos to Order, I will kill” With a smile, the father responded “ I have taught you well”.

The boy was named Hotaru, and he grew in both mind and spirit and became the Chief Guardsman of Order. Without mercy, Hotaru killed those that wished to bring ‘chaos’, and blessed those that wished to bring ‘order’. It was for this very reason, that Hotaru pledged allegiance to the Dragon King.

In recent times, Hotaru single handedly slaughtered Dairou, a traitor, and the Resistance, rebels led by Darrius. With the killings of these infidels, Hotaru got on his horse and rode back to the Dragon Temple. As Hotaru galloped back to the temple, the enormous earthquake took place and the lands started to separate into realms. “Oh no, the Kamidugu has been broken!” cries Hotaru. It had seemed that Hotaru was well aware of the mystery of the Kamidugu, and with his horse he rushed quickly to the Temple.

When Hotaru reached the Temple, tears fell from his eyes for he saw that the Dragon Temple was in ruins. He had also discovered that the Dragon King had been killed for Hotaru could not feel Onaga’s spirit. “Shujinko” whispered Hotaru. Hotaru contemplated that Shujinko was the only person that could win a fight against the Dragon King. Anger boiled in Hotaru’s face and he screamed “Damn you Shujinko, you’ve exerted more chaos upon this universe!” Crying, Hotaru bends down to the ruins and says “Master, Im sorry I didn’t defend you. But I promise I will finish what you started, and I swear Shujinko will die for this”.

Hotaru decides to put a bounty on Shujinko’s head, dead or alive, and makes a vow to reunite each piece of the Kamidugu. Raising his arm, Hotaru marches off and boldly says “The harmony of the firefly must never disconcert”. Hotaru would then claim war against each realm that refused to surrender its piece of the Kamidugu. The War of the Realms had begun.

Kai

“Neither weary nor stopping, the No-Mad roams from place to place” No-Mad’s Cry, Benjamin Pain, 1548

Story

During the unrelenting invasion of Shinnok’s army, Kai fought intensely. Kai had displayed the true spirit of a shaolin monk, and he triumphed. Although Kai was a worthy fighter, a feeling of discontent plagued him. In order to fight this dissatisfaction, Kai went on a journey to find himself. Aiding Kai, Raiden, the God of Thunder, gave Kai a staff. It was said that the staff would guide and bestow wisdom upon Kai during his journey. Also, if used properly the staff could guide its wielder to immortality.

Soon after, Kai became a nomad, and searched for himself and satisfaction. Kai had also become a vigilante and placed the law in his hands. From the soaring mountains of the Himalayas to the dangerous streets of New York, Kai fought successfully against bandits, dictators, and terrorists such as the Red Dragon. Even with all these accomplishments, Kai’s soul and heart were not satiated, and he searched desperately for the ‘thing’ he had been looking for.

Currently, Kai had been sailing through the magnificent dunes of the Sahara. It was during this time that something bothered Kai greatly. For the past few months, Kai had noticed that the staff Raiden had given him was steadily losing its power, and it was darkening in appearance. Fearfully looking up at the Heavens, Kai whispered to himself “Lord Raiden, is everything all right?” Kai got more anxious, for he could clearly feel Raiden getting weaker and experiencing pain.

When Kai decides to meditate and pray about Raiden, the earthquakes takes place. When Kai feels the ground shake excessively, a sense of thrill flows through his veins and he asks to himself, “Is this what I have been searching for?” As people on Earthrealm run in fear, Kai smiles to himself and a sense of satisfaction fills him.

Many days after, rumors of a war between Realms reaches Earthrealm. Kai performs a holy ritual and paints his body with white paint that resemble tiger marks. After this ritual, Kai goes on a journey to find his old friend, and he also decides to participate in the War of the Realms, hoping that it is the ‘thing’ his heart and soul have been longing for.

I'll be adding an all new 'pirate' character to the story soon.

Savage.

“The Beast travels through the seas of the Realms devouring the sinful”. The inscription found on Savage’s 2nd ship, the Beast 2.
Story

Centuries ago in Edenia, Ho-Han worked as a faithful and assiduous sea merchant under King Jerrod. With his own bare but powerful hands, Ho- Han built his mighty and massive ship which he named the "Beast". Due to Ho-Han’s intellect and his knowledge for the science of Realms, Ho- Han was able to create a special device for the ship. This special device could create portals for which the ship could easily pass through other Realms. Outstandingly, the ship also had the ability to sail through the skies. The "Beast" was Ho-Han’s greatest invention and it had also become Ho-Han's home which he and his family lived on.

Ho-Han was truly an elated man for he had everything a man could ask for. He had money, a beautiful family, and he had the greatest ship in Edenia, but unfortunately this would all change in one dreadful night.
During one stormy night, Ho-Han was traveling through the grisly seas of the Netherealm. It was here that Ho-Han was ambushed by a group of relentless, demonic pirates. In that night, Ho-Han lost everything he had worked hard for, including his most treasured item, his family. In grief, Ho-Han watched his crew and family get slaughtered one by one. Ho-Han tried to fight back, but he was no match for the formidable Netherealm pirates. The pirates had destroyed the ship, and the treasures of the ship were stolen. Ho-Han, the captain of the ship was then thrown into the sea of blood to be eaten by the vicious, sea creatures of the Netherealm. Ho-Han became dramatized from the experience, and he accepted death to overpower him. But destiny had a change of plans for him.

The next morning, Ho-Han was amazingly found lying on the shores of the Island of Netherealm. It had seemed Ho-Han had miraculously survived his dramatic experience, but at a terrible consequence. Ho-Han had discovered that he had lost his left arm and right eye. Anger could then be perceived on Ho- Han’s face and he screamed “Why did I not die?!” Ever since the incident of the death of his family, Ho-Han's life was never the same again. Ho-Han was now a depressed man, and he contemplated suicide. When Ho-Han prepared a rope to hang himself, he decided that killing himself wouldn’t make a difference, and he decides to seek for vengeance.

During his stay on the island, Ho-Han wrestled and slaughtered many creatures that tried to kill him. Fighting these vicious creatures had toughened Savage tremendously, making him stronger, faster, agile, and brutal. During one of his fights, a Netherealm hound puppy tried to kill him. Instead of killing the dog, Ho-Han captured and trained the dog to be a ruthless fighter, which would defend him at all cost. Ho-Han named the dog "Kroza" meaning in Edenain language "Son of the Beast".

Around the island, the ruins of other defeated ships could be perceived all over the shores. With the ruins, Ho-Han made a mechanical arm as his left arm, armor and a new magnificent ship that he named "The 2nd Beast". With the ship, Ho-Han along with Kroza escaped the hellish Island. Every night since, Ho-Han had nightmares that depicted the night where he lost everything. With a frown, Ho-Han whispered “I want my vengeance”.

In order for Ho-Han to obtain the revenge he sought for, he became a bounty hunter so he could kill those who killed the good and innocent. Without mercy, Ho-Han killed many that had bounties on them and he made precious money for it. He was named "Savage" by others because of his cruel nature.

In recent times, Ho-Han has discovered the Realms in disarray. He also hears that a being named Shujinko is responsible for the anomaly. He then discovers that this ‘Shujinko’ has a very high bounty on his head. Savage sails across the disarrayed Realms with Kroza to obtain his bounty and vengeance.

Appearance: Savage is a large, gruff man, filled with anger. He is bold, and has an untidy, black beard. Savage wears a heavy, bronze, chest plate which states in crimson in an ancient Edenian language "Beast" in the center. He wears bear fur which cover his shoulders and back. He has ropes wrapped around his waist where he places his pirate sword. He has a mechanical arm which as been disguised to look like his other good arm.
Kroza, Savage's pet is a vicious Netherealm hound who is very large, vicious and has spikes running down its spine.

Special moves:

Rope swing- Savage unties the ropes around his waist, and swings it across his opponent which then gets tied to the person's leg. Savage then pulls the rope which causes the person to trip, and he then swings the opponent to the other side of the arena for additional damage.

Hound attack- During the match Kroza fights along with Savage. Savage can summon his hound to attack his opponent.

Cannon blast- Savage's mechanical arm is detachable. When Savage detaches his arm, a hidden mini - canon is revealed. With the canon, Savage can send powerful blasts of gun powder. He can send 2 or 3 at the same time.

Fatalities:

Fetch- Savage pulls his opponent's head off, and throws it far in the sky. He then commands Kroza to fetch. Kroza leaps in the air and eats the head, a nice gruesome mess.

Rope trick- Savage throws his rope to his opponent's leg which then gets tied to it. Savage then swings the rope in circles extremely fast which causes the opponent to go around as well rapidly. You can then see the skin pilling off, eyes going everywhere, organs flying off. When Savage stops swinging, all that his left of the opponent is the skeleton.

These are incredibly enjoyable stores to read. Keep working on more, I am very impressed by how much thought and depth you put into those bio's and the quotes that you put on are very unique and fit each character's personality perfectly.

I really appreciate the nice comment. I'll continue writing stories any time I have time to spare. I'm glad your enjoying the quotes ( I was kinda worried it would be cheesy, but it acually adds styles). I have a couple of ideas for a Fugin story, so stay tuned for that.

Fugin

“Thou flies and wavers with the winds. With anger thou fights, and with honor thou defends. And behold, an inscription is found on thy armor, and the inscription whispers ‘God of Wind’” excerpt from the Nevekaraza, the Holy Book of the Elders

Story

Fugin, the God of Wind, was created in order to serve as a subordinate for Raiden, in case Raiden’s assistance was ever unavailable. During the feud between Raiden and Shinnok in the Heavens, Fugin was in Earthrealm gathering Earth’s greatest warriors, as well as protecting Earth. After Raiden triumphed over Shinnok in the Heavens, Fugin’s assistance was no longer needed, and he lain in a dormant state for many years, until now.

With the sound of the trumpet, Fugin was summoned to the throne room of the Elder Gods. Fugin rose from his sleep and floated to his destination. As he floated, Fugin rigorously contemplated about why he was summoned, and he feared that Raiden was in some sort of danger. When Fugin reached the threshold of the throne room, Fugin held the door knob and opened the mighty door. And behold, the magnificent room was revealed. The room was lit with a strange, mysterious, vivid colour, and enormous thrones were aligned through out the grand room, and at the center of the room was the place of the Holy of Holies, and a being was meditating in it. The being looked very familiar to Fugin, but Fugin couldn’t quite remember the being.

Within each massive throne, an Elder God could be perceived sitting on it. The Elder Gods were truly giants, for they were so tall that Fugin could not even see the faces of the Elder Gods from where he lay. Each Elder God had a different appearance, some had fur, others emitted vivid energies, others were made out of rock, and so on.

Bowing down, Fugin proudly yelled “It is an honor to serve you yet again Elder Gods!” One of the Elder Gods responded with a very deep, loud voice “You serve us well Fugin, but we have to inform you that the Realms are in peril”. “Please explain my Lords” said Fugin with concern. The Elder Gods would then explain to Fugin everything that had happened for the past 7 years, including the formation of the Deadly Alliance, the return of Onaga, and the scattering of the Kamidugu.

Fugin gaped and was bewildered with what had been going on during his time of absence. Timidly and with a broken voice, Fugin asked the Elder Gods “What of Raiden my Lords. Is Raiden all right?” The Elder Gods then looked at one another, and after a long pause, one of the Elder Gods responded rather sluggishly “Raiden is dieing”. “What?!!” exclaimed Fugin with shock. “Due to Raiden’s obstinacy, Raiden did not listen to our advice and in vain he sacrificed his Godhood, thinking it would kill the Dragon King” said an Elder God. Another Elder God continued by saying “Now Raiden, gradually becomes weaker. Since he is no longer a god, he will continue to become weaker till he eventually dies”. The Elder Gods said all these things in an indifferent manner which infuriated Fugin.

Holding back anger and tears, Fugin bowed down and said “My Elders, Raiden has saved the Realms many times. Please restore his godhood, for if it were not for him we would...” “Silence!!” interrupted an Elder God “Would you like to suffer the same consequence Raiden is suffering?” With realization, Fugin responded “No my Lords.” “Good” uttered the Elder God “Now Fugin, we declare you the new Protector of Earthrealm and your mission is to gather up Earth’s greatest warriors and to formulate a plan to protect Earth at all costs” “I will not fail” declared Fugin.

As Fugin leaves the throne room, he finally recognizes the figure lying in the Holy of Holies. During the invasion of Shinnok, he remembered a Hell Spawn seeking for revenge, who called himself Scorpion. It was this Scorpion that was now lying in the Holy of Holies. Not even Fugin himself was allowed in the Holy of Holies, and he was surprised that the Elder Gods had allowed a being of such vileness to lie in the Holy of Holies. With perplexity, Fugin asked “Why is there a Hell spawn lying in the Holy of Holies?” Erratically, all the 100 Elder Gods responded at the same time “All shall soon be revealed”.

So, through a portal, the God of Wind arrived at Earthrealm. And with anger the God of Wind fought in the War of Realms, and with honor the God of Wind protected Earth.

Actually it's quite professional for the level, and the only thing what I found wrong is ...that the god of wind is Fujin (japanese mythology counts him as a black skinned demon)

Black skinned demon? Sweet.

Flawless... victory.

Good goin', King Jolly. So, here is the bosses and arenas. The bosses first.

Onaga the 2nd

Son to the deceased Onaga. His tactics are clever, his strength is unlimited, and his look can bring fear to the unprepared. He vows to destroy Liu Kang, and he fears that if he let Liu Kang get the 6 Kamidogus, that would mean disaster to the Onaga Family tree. Can be found in Onaga's Lair. Fought in Ultimate mode.

Rhinnok, Shinnok's descendant

When Shinnok was eliminated by the EarthRealmers, his son Rhinnok swears revenge. His powers are far more enhanced than Shinnoks, although he suffers from the weaknesses Shinnok has. If he let Liu Kang get the 6 Kamidogus, then there will be no future for him. Fought as boss in Bloody Hard mode. Fought as sub-boss in Ultimate mode. Can be found in Shinnok's Crypt.

OK, enough bosses for now on. Onto the arenas:

Sky Temple (DT)
2nd Onaga's Lair (DT)
Shinnok's Tomb
Quan Chi's Castle
The 4th Pit (DT)
Temple of the Final End
NYC Streets
Collapsing MK3 bridge (DT)
Commander Cyrax's HQ
Captain Sektor's Quarters
Portal Temple (Leads to 6 temples in 6 diffrent portal gates)
Shang Tsung's Arena
Shao Kahn's Arena

Note: DT on some arenas means there are death-traps in here. Pay attention.

Since I have been busy lately, I have not been able to update the story, but I'll be posting some new bios soon. By the way UltimateKombatter, I appreciate your comment, but please take note that I'm the guy telling the story.

I have to say, I like your writing style but some of your facts are a little off.

#1
Kai is not and never was a Shaolin monks. He is/was a member of the White lotus society, they are not the same thing.

#2
it's not Fugin, it Fujin, with a "J." And Fijin is Earth's god of wind and the realms protector, why is he sleeping? I would think he'd be working.

and #3
It seems you believe that there are only 6 realms (the ones represented in MKD's Konquest), when in fact, and it's proven, there are/were many more. The Heavens are one of them. Also, remember the Outworld is a fusion of many different worlds, I can only think of 2 right now, Zaterra and the Vampire realm, but there are more than likely many more.

Also about the kamidogu, if the pieces were broken down more, I don't see how or why that would create more realms. As you already know, the realms are the shattered conciousness of the one being, how could or why would a realm be created from an object forged by the Elder Gods?

Nevemind,I think I just aswered my on question. Your saying that the One Being's conciousness and the Kamidogu are connected. When the One Being was shattered into the 6 realms, the Kamidogu followed suit.

This cannot be the case. Like I stated above, there are more than six realms, so the Kamidogu and the realms can't be related like that. Further more, each piece of the Kamidogu have been said to represent one of the Elder Gods, not the realms. Maybe I'm wrong, but I was under the impresion the gods hid the pieces within the realms later on.

MKD's konquest stated (and this is not a direct quote), "the Elder Gods summoned sorcerers from accross reality and commanded them to create portals to connect each of it pieces." During this time the Elders probably hid the pieces of the kamidogu within the realms.

Why would they hide the piece of the Kamidogu in the realms? Simple, the Kamidogu is can be a very powerfull artifact that can be used to create or destroy. They probably don't trust themselves. **cough** Shinnok **cough**

Like I said before i like your style but I hope you take into concideration what I've said. I believe your story could be better.

Written pretty well. I like the quotes and how your stories build up. You also provide your characters with background and context, which is something MKD failed a bit at. You clearly have good ideas. Your pirate character is well thought out, he came to life as you described him.

However, mind your tenses. Sometimes you start your story in simple past and switch halfway to simple present. Also, importing dialogues within your story isn't bad per se, but hold back on the bombast and cheese if you want to convey true emotion.

One more detail: Savage is described as a former Edenian captain working when Jerrod ruled Edenia. That's not "decades" ago as you state, because Edenia was invaded by Shao Kahn more than 10 000 years ago.

VQ

Havik

“CHAOS!...CHAOS!...CHAOS!...” the chants of the Sons of Wrath

Story

I had righteously gained access to Order Realm through my blessed friend, Darrius! A smile could be perceived on my face as I prepared to orchestrate havoc upon the Realm, but then something miraculous happened. All of a sudden, enormous earthquakes erupted from the ground. Adrenaline flowed through my veins as I became elated with the sweet Chaos that was taking place. “The Gods have blessed the Realm for me!!” I screamed to my self.

The enormous earthquakes had been the best form of Chaos that I had ever seen in my life, for it satiated each of my senses tremendously. Firstly, the earthquakes exerted the greatest tremors I had ever felt in my body, and my body shook in wondrous delight. Secondly, the sounds emitted by the Chaos were as disconcerted as ever! The hodgepodge of sounds consisted of dreadful screams, collapsing buildings, shattering mountains, and sweet Death! Ecstasy filled my heart and soul, and I was truly satisfied. It was all so joyous to see Chaos triumph in a realm driven by Order. My Goodness, the Chaos was all so beautiful. The Tower of Order crumbled into pretty pieces, the skies turned into sweet blackness, and behold, the lands separated into other lands! It was all just so dazzling to watch. Was this a sign that the evil Dragon King had been killed? I had hoped so. During that time, my joy had reached its pinnacle, and I began to shed tears of joy.

The best gift that the Chaos had brought was the gift of Death. Death gave to those who were worthy transport to a place called the Netherealm, a place where the true essence of Chaos lies. Many of my beloved soldiers, the Sons of Wrath, had died during the turmoil. I wished I had died with them, but perhaps I had been spared in order to exert more Chaos upon the universe. It was truly amazing to watch all these deaths. By far, the most enjoyable fatality I perceived was when I saw a beautiful and pregnant lady who feared Chaos cut open her own womb in order to free her child. “You will live my dear child!” cried the lady. I simply smiled at the lady’s sufferings and frustrations. Of course the lady bled to death, but she successfully freed her child. With a smile, I approached the baby, who was now all covered in blood, and with my Morning Star I mutilated the baby relentlessly. Even though the child had died, I continued to batter it. I exhibited this cruel nature, for I truly despised the people of Order realm, for they were people that wanted to seize the amazing delights of Chaos. Damn them all!!

As days past, the disharmony grew. I had recently been informed that the cacophony was due to the separation the Kamidugu. “May the Gods bless the honorable person that separated the Kamidugu” I said to myself. But it disheartened my heart, when I heard of people that were trying to fuse the Kamidugu back, especially the foolish Hotaru. Therefore, I have sent my Sons of Wrath to each realm to find and obtain each piece of the Kamidugu. I have also commanded them to shatter each piece of the Kamidugu further, which in theory , I hope exerts more Chaos. May Chaos bless us all!!

Havik's was done in first person in order to capture the mood of a mad person. Yeah, I know I mess up with tenses. I didnt bother to change them, because i thought nobody would notice. As for the debate over the accuracies and inaccuracies of the story, all i have to say is that the purpose of this story is not to capture the most acurate mk story ever, but merely to create an entertaing one. But I'll definiley alter Savage's story slightly

Raiden

"As long as breath flows through my lungs, I will always protect Earthrealm" Raiden's last words before he relinquished his position as Elder God

Story

Shinnok, the evil Elder God, stood on his hideous throne and smirked at the weakened Raiden.Shinnok's vile presence emitted an ominous aura, which caused the lurid chamber to have an eerie feeling. The evil Elder God then began to speak words of bitterness. The evil Elder God screamed "You have failed my dear Raiden! You have failed to save Earth! You have failed to save the Heavens! You have failed to save yourself! And, you have failed to stop me!". After Shinnok uttered his last acrimonious remark, Raiden woke from his horrific nightmare with a tiresome gasp, and realized he had been dreaming.

Raiden was truly in tremendous pain. He could feel his muscles deteriorating, his blood boiling, and his powers diminishing. And his nightmares also attributed to Raiden's suffering. Raiden was under so much stress and pain, that he actually began to sweat blood. It was hard to imagine, that this decaying Raiden was once an Elder God.

As Raiden breathed heavily in agony, he soon discovered that he was not alone. Beside Raiden's right hand side, Fujin, the God of Wind comforted Raiden with gentle breezes. "Raiden, my dear friend, I thought you would never awake from your sleep" said Fujin softly. "I see. So the Elder Gods have sent you to protect Earth," Raiden said to Fujin. Raiden slowly stood up on his feet, and looked at his surroundings. He discovered that he was in Mount Fuji, Raiden's favorite place for meditation. Raiden gaped in shock, as he saw the once great mountains of Japan piles of ruble, as well as the uncanny colours in the skies, the enormous cracks within the ground, and the countless corpses that lay on the ground. Referring to Shujinko, Raiden with a broken but stern voice said "The Fool shattered the Kamidugu. Did he not?". Fujin would then concur with an impassionate nod.

"My Chosen Ones Fujin, I would like to see my Chosen Ones," said Raiden impatiently. With a smile, Fujin responded "I know you would my old friend. Behind you, your Holy Ones are all behind you". Raiden turned his head sluggishly, and behold, the Chosen Ones, who were also known as the Holy Ones, were all present. The Holy Ones were Sonya, Jax, Cage, and Kung Lao, and they all stared in apprehension at the dieing Raiden. The Chosen Ones were free from the Dragon King's imprisonment and influence, since Onaga had been killed. The Chosen Ones stood in a wearied state, for they had been through hell and back. Fatigue was burning in their eyes, scars could be perceived all over their bodies, and their armor and clothes were immensely torn. The Holy Ones were in both physical and emotional pain, and no sign of optimism could be perceived within them, and Raiden despised this. Since they had failed to save Liu Kang, failed to stop the Deadly Alliance, and failed to prevent the resurrection of the Dragon King's army, who could blame them for being pessimistic? The Holy Ones were so ashamed of their terrible failures that they shed a few but very dramatic tears.

Disgusted, Raiden exclaimed "Have I taught you all nothing?! Why have you all lost hope?!". There was silence for a moment, and Jax finally responded by saying "We've been through a bucket full of shit man. I remember dieing, and being resurrected. And Onaga then controlled me...". Jax stopped for a second and continued "...I've killed many good men. I deserve death". When they were controlled by the Dragon King, the Chosen Ones were forced to kill the innocent that rebelled against the Dragon King. The Chosen Ones had taken many lives away, and they couldn't bare the fact that they were responsible for it. But was it their fault? Kung Lao then commented with uneasiness by saying "I failed to avenge Liu Kang's death," and the once jocular Cage continued by saying "and it seems we have failed to save you".

Raiden gaped in shock, for he thought he'd never see his Holy Ones in such a weak state, but he soon acknowledged what his Children had been through. "These are times of great tribulations for all of us, but there is no reason to give up hope. We may have lost some battles, but that does not mean we have to stay down. I have not lost hope my Children, and you must no lose hope either," said Raiden. The Chosen Ones were amazed that Raiden could speak with such optimism at times of hardships, and they were strengthened and inspired by Raiden's words of wisdom. The Chosen Ones would soon wipe their tears away.

Fujin, who had now been quiet for quite some time spoke "We are in period, now known as the 'War of the Realms'." Fujin then opened the palm of his left hand, and a rock like item was revealed. Fujin continued "This is a piece of the Kamidugu. People are willing to kill one another for this item. The reasons for obtaining this item vary among those willing to seek it, but it all has to do with greed. We have to prevent the Realms from assembling all the pieces of the Kamidugu." "What happens if all the pieces are assembled," asked Sonya with curiosity. With grim, Raiden answered "It will bring all power to 'her', and the War for Omnipotency will continue". In perplexity, Jax tightened his metallic fists and said "What the f***k are you talking about? Who the hell is her?". The other Chosen Ones were also greatly confused. Fujin replied by saying "She is the 'One-Being'. She is 'Everything'" .The Chosen Ones still did not understand, and they asked numerous questions. "We shall explain later. Do we have any allies Wind God,"asked Raiden. "Yes Raiden, we have a few. The remnants of Edenia's army have agreed to aid us, as well as the newly established Lin Kuei. And I'm sure we can gather all of Earth's forces in unity," replied Fujin. "And our enemies?" asked Kung Lao. Fujin turned his head to Kung Lau's direction and simply replied by saying "Everyone else". Cage's enthusiasm returned and he bombastically exclaimed "So, what do we do?! Whose ass do we kick first?!". "We protect Earth, and prevent the pieces of the Kamidugu from falling into the wrong hands. That is all we have been told to do," answered Fujin.

As Raiden, Fujin, and the Chosen Ones roamed around and contemplated a plan, Fujin noticed Raiden holding back pain. Fujin then placed his hand on Raiden's shoulder and said "My Friend, you are dieing. Please, spend you last days in rest". With anger, Raiden shoved Fujin's hand away, and he boldly said "Fujin, I once made a vow saying this: 'As long as breath flow though my lungs, I will always protect Earth'".

You might as well write a novel, and save yourself the time.

Is that a compliment?