Sub-zero and Noob become an Alliance?? Read!
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posted08/08/2008 10:42 PM (UTC)by
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06/01/2008 12:46 PM (UTC)
Well i want Sub-zero to change what hes like. I want him to become evil him and his brother Noob make an Alliance called 'The Dark Brothers' and they'll have a proper storyline?

Who Agrees?


Anyway.

Storyline: After MKA Sub-zero and Noob face off but you never see the end so this is what i want to happen, Sub-zero charges at Noob with his Kori Blade slashing him across his body. Noob drops to the floor and disappears but Sub-zero freezes the room leaving Noob stand frozen. Sub-zero slides at Noob knocking him through the ice and the wall to the next room.Noob throws his Shorukens (Or something like that) which pierces into Sub-zeros armour. Noob releases a cloud of dark smoke from his hand disabling Sub-zero for a few seconds letting Noob strike him in the chest the snapping his arm leaving him defenceless. Sub-zero drops on his knees but Noob doesn't do anything. ''Brother, I've tried to much to show you the light!'' Sub-zero states ''But but i...'' Sub-zero is rudely interupted by Noob ''Let me tell you something brother, what do you gain from being good? nothing. What do you gain from being Evil? EVERYTHING! Us together we will rule Outworld Earthrealm no one will be able to stop us!'' Noob shouts ''GO TO HELL!'' Sub-zero shouts at Noob ''Ok thats a trip for 2 then'' Noob states as him and Sub-zero are vanquished into the Netherealm. ''WHAT? HOW! I AM NOT EVIL HOW CAN I BE IN NETHEREALM!'' Sub-zero screams. ''Because you are EVIL its in your blood and there is no way to get it out. Well maybe you could fulfill your evilness by joining me'' Noob asks Sub-zero lays on the floor there is silence as a big demonic thing jumps out of no where Sub-zero and Noob jump out of the way. Noob throws his Shorukens and while in the air Sub-zero freezes them as they land on the monster they pierce through his skin and at the same time freezing him. Noob and Sub-zero jump up and flying kick the demon knocking it off the cliff. They jump off following battling it through the air but the demon spreads his wings out and just in time Noob releases dark smoke from his hand disabling the wings so he can't use them. He drops to the ground in pain. ''Finish him brother'' Noob states as Sub-zero pulls out his Kori Blade ''AHHHH!'' Sub-zero impales the demon in his neck the lifting it up dropping it on his neck slicing it off.
''Well well well brother you have gotten stronger. So what do you say?'' Noob asks Sub-zero grabs his hand and shakes it as they teleport out to Outworld. ''We start here BROTHER!'' Sub-zero shouts!

What'd ya think?

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Chrome
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08/07/2008 11:16 AM (UTC)
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Badly written.

Bad concept.


Everything is doomed to fail when the whole idea starts out from " what I want? "
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Nightcrow
08/07/2008 12:22 PM (UTC)
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Crap.
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lastfighter89
08/07/2008 01:09 PM (UTC)
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actually you were too though with him guys.
Try to be sincere but try to find "sweet" words.
i don't like the concept and i found it unoriginal,but knowing ed boon since 1992 let me think that a similar solution will be used in MK9.
so yeah..i don't like it but this is the direction MK will take,Noob-Zero!
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08/07/2008 04:14 PM (UTC)
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lastfighter89 Wrote:
actually you were too though with him guys.
Try to be sincere but try to find "sweet" words.
i don't like the concept and i found it unoriginal,but knowing ed boon since 1992 let me think that a similar solution will be used in MK9.
so yeah..i don't like it but this is the direction MK will take,Noob-Zero!


"Sweet" words? Ha, ha... critising work doesn't mean trying to be so "sweet" on the creator. That's not how it works at all.

Chrome basically has it covered. And the whole idea of Sub-Zero turning evil is completely preposterous if you ask me.
The way it is? No.

If I made this idea, I would have Noob forcing Subby to an alliance in order to "return" Smoke to normal. In truth, Noob's just using Subby to eliminate any thorns to Noob's agendas and never plans to follow the deal.
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