Fujin's ending sound pretty interesting.

Nyx having connections with Sub-Zero's ancestors? Pretty nice.

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Fujin: I like this ending as it sets up for more interaction between the two gods. It's cool how you had Raiden offer Fujin an alliance as opposed to outright attacking him. Maybe Fujin will actually think about Raiden's offer since there's been so much chaos going on.

Hotaru: I'm glad that you thought of something more to do with Hotaru, and I really like the direction you took in his ending. I was sort of thinking the same thing with Hotaru seeing Raiden as someone who can restore peace and order. I look forward to seeing how this goes.

Sub-Zero: This is kind of an interesting ending in which it sets up for another story arc, I suppose. I'm glad that you're setting up Sub-Zero's story in the path of delving more into his ancestry. I do feel that it is something that needs to be explored and that it should be part of Sub-Zero's story in the games to come.

Ermac: Hmm, this is definitely a bit of a strange but interesting ending. I'm sure you'll eventually explain the connection between Jackal's death and Nyx's return.

Morgana: This is another weird ending. Morgana seeking out to warn Sub-Zero of Nyx? Hmm... I do kind of like the ties between Quan Chi and Nyx.

Li Mei: I don't know what to say here, but I do like the ending.

Overall, this is really good stuff like usual. I hope you plan on doing another story taking place after this.

I agree.

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Pure Genius!

Overall, pretty interesting stuff. I admittingly would've done a few things different, but it all works in the end. Good job. (Please get rid of Tanya soon)

Very good indeed. I am looking forward to Mileena's role in your next work. PS: As S-Z_7th and PNF said, please kill Tanya.

Scarack: It's a pretty interesting ending that has a good plot to it. I wonder who'll be the sucker that'll win it.

Dietrik: Ah, hmm...This sort of sounds like one of those endings that just might happen.

Mileena: Interesting how Scarack chose Mileena out of all females...

Anyway, really good story overall. I'm glad you're going to make a sequel to this. And yeah, like PNF said, please kill Tanya.

You know, something suddenly hit me when you set Raiden and Scorpion on a course for conflict in the sequel to this, and I don't know if even you had considered it, but...

I recall that in your storyline for MK7 pre-Armageddon, you had a character named Raven (originally Wraith, but I had pointed out that a wraith is a different species of undead, a'la Noob Saibot and possibly Reiko) who was a spectre henchman of Quan Chi, sent after Scorpion.

I'll try to spoil as little as possible for those not familiar in case you like this idea, but something that had bothered me about the backstory is the character wasn't a sinner in life and Quan Chi should not have been able to create Raven.

Well, Raiden can resurrect souls from Heaven (Johnny Cage in MK4, Vogel be damned), and now that the ends justify the means for him, who's to say what he can get away with doing to them after that?
The only question is, what's Heaven's equivalent of a Spectre? A Valkyrie or something? That might be an interesting race to add to the mythology, especially a corrupted one.

Oh no!! Please don't!! Tanya must live!!!

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Hi this is my first post ive been a member of mko for a couple of months now but i never posted anything up until i reas this awsome story youve planned. I also had some ideas in mind characters wise and i was thinking of a female sorcereor as well but with Shang Tsung as her master , I like the fact that you have made Quan chi it though. BTW youve got a nice gift for writing stories, keep it up

i read threw all the post and everything was great
keep up the good work

just amazing! How did you come up with all of this?

Are you kidding me? I'm almost unable to say anything. How come YOU'RE not working for them, and we have that punk VOGEL instead?

Wow, this must have taken a LOT of effort, but I imagine some pleasure, too! Thanks for sharing it with us! I can't even really. . . I'm dumbfounded.