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Ah, finally, more endings.

Amaya Rin: She sounds sort of like the next-generation Liu Kang only younger and female. I'm glad you delved into her personality with her wanting to live up to Liu Kang and Kung Lao as well as set up for her feeling regrets and things like that. I can't wait to see what you do with her.

Jackal: It's not too bad of an ending. I'd like to see where his story goes.

Jax: It wasn't really surprising to me that you'd take this route with him. I wonder what you plan on doing with him.

Well, good stuff overall as usual. I look forward to more.

Great stuff as usual.

I agree.

Amaya Rin: A next generation Liu Kang whose female. Feel sad about Kung Lao in the end though...

Jackal: Cool. Guess Jade has something else to worry about while being a slave the that wench Tanya.

Jax: He has gone very mad! What is up with him? He and Selene should fight.

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One more thing did you really you have to kill kung lao?
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Fantastic as usual.

Excellent Endings!

Interesting twist for Jakal...can't wait to see what you do with him!

I love how you used the words for Havik '" It was worth it..."

Sareena: This is a pretty good ending. It shows Sareena's self-confliction, and I hope to see what you do with her when she finds herself in the Netherrealm.

Havik: Nice touch on the ending. It was definitely a unique ending, that's for sure..

Kagato: He seems somewhat Kobra-ish, but I like him.

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Excellent. I am starting to like Doremo.

It's stuff like this that makes you such a respected user here. I love the whole storyline, it gives the feel of a new beginning yet remembers where it came from. The structure of the tournament coupled with the continued storyline reveals what Mortal Kombat has lacked in the last few years.

Charcter bios are great, you have some very interesting and original ideas and fresh charaters that don't feel recycled. The mythology adds a sense of mystery that I have always loved about the MK series. I love the choice of new characters, and though I think the artistic concepts could have gone farther in some instances, the storyline for each is genius, the intertwined characters fit perfectly with other new characters as well as returning. The mystery behind characters like Jax and Raiden reminds me of the things that drew me to the MK storyline in the first place.

As far as endings so far. I think the path with many of the characters is exactly what needs to be done. Sareena was a bit predictable (especially after reading some of your other works), but not in a bad way, it is a neccesary path for her. Also the way the endings are written is excellent, though many are what-if, many do not contradict each other and allow for the storyline to progress in the next installment. However what you have done to Jade is a tragedy, lol!

Anyways, excellent work and I look forward to your future works. Keep on Keepin' on, we're impressed. Cheers!

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Great endings i cant wait to read more. Will drahmin even know how to use the amulet? If not who will help him? What are kira's long term plans? and does she et aay with them. What will khan do? damn the suspense damn it to hell!

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Samn, your good at these. YOU just might be better than Pnf...

Ok, more reviews:

Doremo: I like how you have sort of the "next-generation Kung Lao" thing going on with him. He's kind of one of those characters who is essentially a good person but is rather conflicted with his path in life. I'd like to see what exactly you'll do with him in the future.

Tanya: I kind of like the twist you had in her ending with the intervention of Mileena. Interesting stuff...

Kynkaid: This ending was alright. I'm not really into this character that much, but that's not to say that he's a bad character. At least he died a happy death (sorta) by killing Kira.

Drahmin: I like that you're setting up Drahmin for bigger things, kind of making him one of the more major characters. His ending makes me wonder who exactly you'll have him interact with in the future. Overall, good stuff.

Kira: This is a pretty decent ending. I don't have much to say about this one except that I wonder if Kira and Havik will come to an eventual conflict with each other due to the contrast in their brands of chaos.

Kenshi: It's a nice touch you put with Kenshi having to kill someone who he sees potential in.

Ashrah: I do like the big sister role you have for her and sort of setting her up to possibly heading back to the Netherrealm, the very place she worked so hard to escape from. I wonder if you're going to have any interaction between Ashrah and Ermac in the future. Overall, this is a pretty good ending.

Selene Cage: I understand where you're coming from regarding this ending. It is kind of cool how you've established Jax as a different kind of villain. I'd definitely like to see where all this goes.

Kung Lao: Well, given that he is much older now, I suppose it is indeed fitting for him to "pass the torch" onto Amaya Rin and I guess also Doremo.

Still goood stuff. I was wondering if one of you guys could tell me how to post images that i have drawn myself. I am so confused i would really appreciate the help thenk you much.

I've forgot all about this thread... lol


Awsome Endings XD84!


Thats it ! Tanya has gone way too far! Calling Mileena a freak of Nature is just...That Bitch!!!!


A Mileena/ Tanya rivalry would be interesting...I just hope Mileena wins!

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These are some interesting endings. Raiden's ending is basically like the one you wrote for him in your MK: Armageddon story.

I agree. Good stuff as usual.

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