Excellent as usual.

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The Talisman's back story is pretty cool. I really like what you are doing with Smoke here.

Yay! More endings.

Doremo

I think that you did the right thing for Doremo's story by wanting him to kill Nyx but not quite be a defender of Earth.

Hotaru

This was an interesting ending. I actually thought that you might have had Hotaru defeat Sub-Zero, take the Dragon Medallion, give it to Raiden, and give us readers some insight into his plans for it. I have some pretty good ideas as to why Daredin wants Sub-Zero to be spared, so I probably won't be so surprised when you post his ending.

Drahmin

This ending was kind of funny in that he and Sareena are at a sort of stalemate. I think it's cool that you have bits of his old self return to his mentality.

Ermac

I'm glad you gave a bit of backstory into the Viduus Talisman (cool name, btw) unlike the mystical artifact Shao Kahn used to clone himself. A part of me thought that you might've had Shang Tsung return in Ermac's ending, but thankfully, I was wrong. For the last part of his ending, it seems that you're slowly setting things up for the One Being, yes?

Killian

Having the Seidan characters involved better with the main plot is a good idea. I'm not entirely sure on the whole Raiden vs. Nyx thing, but then again, they are major threats to each other.

Smoke

Smoke's story you have for him is a bit strange, but kind of cool. Did he choose to act as a guardian of the Netherrealm or something? I kind of figured that Raiden would try to gain as much power as he can and Shinnok's amulet is an important piece. I will point out that even before his transformation into a cyborg, he was still a pawn for evil since the Lin Kuei, back then, were pretty bad. The Kriss is more of a dagger as opposed to a sword.

Anyway, can't wait for more endings. Keep up the good work.

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Ashrah: I do see where you're coming from. I guess it is the way to go as you essentially are building Raiden up to become the main villain of the next-generation MKs. The interaction between between Ashrah and Sareena should be interesting. I wonder if you'll even have Ashrah and Ermac cross paths as they seem to will eventually end up once again on opposing sides.

Fujin: Once again, I'm glad that you had Fujin think about what Raiden said as opposed to quickly making a decision. I liked what you had Fujin say, and I can't wait for an eventual showdown between the two gods.

Scorpion: Awesome ending. I of course knew you'd have Azrael be in it and make Scorpion wonder about where his loyalties lie. I wonder where you'll take it from there.

One thing I forgot to bring up before was about Hotaru's ending and how I thought it was interesting to see him show signs of chaos.

Well, I look forward to more of your endings. I have a feeling that Sub-Zero's and Daredin's endings will come soon.

Impressive as always.

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Hmm... so Raiden was the one responsible for ending Khameleon's race.

Azrael's and Raiden's were really interesting, too.

Raiden: Cool ending. I kind of saw it coming with Raiden taking power for himself through things like the Dragon Medallion. Is this going to be a trilogy story like PNF's, btw? It kind of seems like it.

Khameleon: Ah, yes, that's right. Raiden trying to make amends for his part in the near destruction of the Raptor/Saurian race is an interesting angle. Will we find out what exactly became of Reptile? When you mean joined, you mean allied or something else? Sorry, I didn't pay much attention to little bits like that...lol on the "sss's" though there were parts that could've used those. It doesn't really matter though. I'm just glad with what you did with her.

Azrael: It's an interesting ending. It makes Azrael seem rather zealous, not unlike how Hotaru was zealous during his servitude to Onaga. You say that he kind of knows more about what's going on than anyone else which leads me to believe that he knows about the One Being and that he's going to stick with Raiden regardless.

I'm actually quite surprised that you did these endings now, but I guess perhaps you're REALLY saving something special for endings like Sub-Zero's and Daredin's, right?

Well, I can't wait.

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Man, I want to see a collab from you and like Bleed or Aceleus or something. Like the Meat FanArt Acleleus and Jerrod did.

Any chance of a conference of any sort? Something like that hasn't been done in a little while and I think it would be wonderful to see happen again.

Fantasic job, no real comments yet as I have some catching up to do.....

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Impressive. I like where Li Mei and Jade's directions lead.

Nyx is really interesting too.

Yup, definitely for Brutus.

Lol @ Tanya's ending.

Ahhh, I think I might see where you're going with Brutus. Maybe Jairus knew he was only going to get in the way if he helped Katrina?

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Sucks for Katrina. :\

For Daredin: Hmm...

*Imagines Nyx pulling out a Latex Clove and Smacking Katrina*


Keep it up!

Jackal: Huh? That's what I kept thinking. I must say this is rather confusing. I take it that you'll explain things in the next installment, yes?

Tanya: lol, wow...what an ending. She hates Mileena so much only to end up becoming her personal servant. The interaction between the two should be priceless.

Morgana: I can't really say much on this one...

Jade: Well, there wasn't too much going on here for Jade, but it does reveal about Mileena's feelings.

Li Mei: I like the Li Mei/Jade alliance, and I can see where you are going to go with it. I'm sure you'll eventually have them or just her run into Synclaire.

Brutus: Um...uh huh..*shrugs*

Katrina: lol...well...too bad for Katrina...

Jairus: Ok, I see.

Daredin: Yeah, I sort of saw this one coming. I'm just really looking forward to what exactly you'll do for Sub-Zero's ending.

So, if I'm not mistaken, that only leaves Sub-Zero's and Scarack's endings left, which I'm sure you did on purpose. I can't wait!

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I can't wait for Mileena's ending!


Damn, the "good" guys are getting screwed left and right! lol

Scarack: Is this sleeping power supposed to be the One Being or something else? Well, I really look forward to what goes on in your next story.

Sub-Zero: Ah, grim ending for Sub-Zero. It sort of reminds me of Liu Kang's ending in your MK: Armageddon storyline.

I forgot about Mileena's ending. I wonder what exactly she'll do.

Sucks for Sub-Zero big time. :\

Anywayz, can't wait for Mileena's ending!

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I understand your thoughts behind Mileena's ending. It did seem like there was a higher possibility for her to turn against Nyx. Since you're having Nyx and Raiden both be the bosses if you were to do another story, it really does seem to me you want to make this a trilogy. I really hope you go with it considering the build up of the stories.