My new game. MORTAL KOMBAT DAMNATION. Please read. Open to all comments.
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My new game. MORTAL KOMBAT DAMNATION. Please read. Open to all comments.
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posted07/07/2006 05:03 PM (UTC)byMortalKombatRedemptionMember Since
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Well, I've been thinking about new ideas... so here's my new game.
MORTAL KOMBAT DAMNATION
Good has prevailed... Armageddon has been stopped... and peace returns to the realms once again... for a time...
One year has passed since the side of good prevented the end of the realms, but evil has once again returned. Shinnok travelled to the Nethrrealm in search of an army. He found the 3-headed god of oni, Kochal, and awakened him. Kochal created an endless army of oni for Shinnok, and in return, was freed from his stone body to walk again.
Shinnok used this endless army to storm the realms and dominate them. Warriors must put their differences aside and team together to stop this new threat. If we let the Damnation army take over the realms, the balance between good and evil will be destroyed, and the realms will cease to exist. We must stop Damnation at all costs.
THE CHARACTERS
1. RAIDEN
Place of origin-The Heavens
Status-Thunder God
Alignment-Good
Age-Eternal
Allies-Fujin, Kung Lao,Sub-Zero, Scorpion
Enemies-Shao Kahn, Shinnok, Kochal
Height-7'
Weight-290
Fighting Styles- Nan Chuan, Ba Gua
Weapon-Staff
We survived Armageddon... now we must survive Damnation. Seeing how well the people of Earthrealm dealed with Armageddon, I will settle down. We must work together to stop this threat, and we can't work together if I'm scaring everyone. I will help the warriors to stop this threat.
2. KUNG LAO
Place of origin-Earthrealm
Status-Shaolin Monk
Alignment-Good
Age-28
Allies-Scorpion, Raiden, Ermac, Bo Rai Cho
Enemies-Shao Kahn, Shinnok, Baraka
Height-6'
Weight-215
Fighting Styles-Shaolin Fist, Mantis
Weapon- Dao(Dao is the proper name for CHINESE broadsword)
Armageddon was a hard battle, but alot of us survived. My cousin Liu Kang was not very fortunate. He died an honorable death, weakening blaze to the point where we could kill him. Now I have been chosen by Raiden to help lead these warriors. I promise I will make Liu proud.
3.SCORPION
Place of origin-Earthrealm
Status-Champion of the Elder Gods
Alignment-Good
Age-Eternal
Allies-Raiden, Kung Lao, Sub-Zero
Enemies-Shinnok, Drahmin, Moloch
Height-6'2''
Weight-230
Fighting Styles-Shukokai, Mei Hua Quan
Weapon-Daisho
We have once again prevailed! We survived the Armageddon and destroyed Blaze. As the champion of the Elder Gods, I know we can stop Damnation. Kung Lao and I will lead the warriors to victory! Shinnok and his oni army have no chance against us. We will save the realms.
4.HAVIK
Place of origin-Realm of Chaos
Status-Cleric of Chaos
Alignment-Good
Age-5,003
Allies-Hotaru, Bo Rai Cho, Reptile, Rain, King Jerrod
Enemies-Drahmin, Baraka
Height-6'1
Weight-220
Fighting Styles-Hung Fut, Snake
Weapon-Morning Star
It is strange how when their is a big threat, you are forced to put your beliefs aside to survive. Although it's against the ways of Chaos, I have sided with Hotaru and Seido. He's not as bad as I thought, and now we are good friends. We will use our armies to stop Damnation.
EvanjiAxu •07/04/2006 07:36 PM (UTC) •
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The whole Havik - Hotaru thing is kinda WTF. They'd be more likely to barely contain their hatred of one another. Joining forces with an enemy isn't usually that nice and civilized.
And what's Jerrod's eye color? I've got him inked and am ready to color him.
And what's Jerrod's eye color? I've got him inked and am ready to color him.
RaisnCain •07/04/2006 09:13 PM (UTC) •
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I like it, except for the death of Liu Kang . . . he is the only one who can defeat Blaze, no one else, I don't care what anyone says.
MortalKombatRedemption •07/04/2006 10:21 PM (UTC) •
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Jerrod has Blue eyes.
I like both Hotaru and Havik alot. They both want to survive, so they sign a peace treaty and unite armies. Desperate times call for desperate measures.
I used to like Liu Kang. He's been overused and now he's stale(Mr. Hero 4 times in a row, dies, comes back). It's time to pass the torch to Kung Lao. Some more bios are coming on the way. See you later.
I like both Hotaru and Havik alot. They both want to survive, so they sign a peace treaty and unite armies. Desperate times call for desperate measures.
I used to like Liu Kang. He's been overused and now he's stale(Mr. Hero 4 times in a row, dies, comes back). It's time to pass the torch to Kung Lao. Some more bios are coming on the way. See you later.
EvanjiAxu •07/04/2006 10:53 PM (UTC) •
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But...but...but Kung Lao can't make turkey noises!
MortalKombatRedemption •07/05/2006 06:29 AM (UTC) •
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Here are a few more...
MortalKombatRedemption •07/05/2006 06:43 AM (UTC) •
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5.BARON
Place of origin-Realm of Chaos
Status-Chaosrealm army general.
Alignment-Good
Age-3,238
Allies-Havik, Hotaru, Bo Rai Cho, Rain
Enemies-Baraka, Sektor
Height-6'4''
Weight-240
Fighting Styles-Liu Shing Chuan, Capoeira
Weapon- Otsuchi
Havik has summoned me to help him with the Chaosrealm armies. We will sneak attack the Tekunin . We have Seido, Edenia, and Outworld armies on our side. After we defeat the Tekunin, We will move on to Shinnok's right hand man, Drahmin
6.ERMAC
Place of origin-Outworld
Status-Soul Warrior
Alignment-Good
Age-1,469
Allies-Kung Lao, Raiden, Kenshi
Enemies-Shao Kahn, Shinnok, Reiko
Height-6'
Weight-220
Fighting Styles-Hua Chuan, Choy Lay Fut
Weapon-Axe
We predicted this would happen. We had haunting dreams that Shinnok would seek domination. We must find a weakness in Kochal. We must work together. We must stop Damnation.
Place of origin-Realm of Chaos
Status-Chaosrealm army general.
Alignment-Good
Age-3,238
Allies-Havik, Hotaru, Bo Rai Cho, Rain
Enemies-Baraka, Sektor
Height-6'4''
Weight-240
Fighting Styles-Liu Shing Chuan, Capoeira
Weapon- Otsuchi
Havik has summoned me to help him with the Chaosrealm armies. We will sneak attack the Tekunin . We have Seido, Edenia, and Outworld armies on our side. After we defeat the Tekunin, We will move on to Shinnok's right hand man, Drahmin
6.ERMAC
Place of origin-Outworld
Status-Soul Warrior
Alignment-Good
Age-1,469
Allies-Kung Lao, Raiden, Kenshi
Enemies-Shao Kahn, Shinnok, Reiko
Height-6'
Weight-220
Fighting Styles-Hua Chuan, Choy Lay Fut
Weapon-Axe
We predicted this would happen. We had haunting dreams that Shinnok would seek domination. We must find a weakness in Kochal. We must work together. We must stop Damnation.
RaisnCain •07/05/2006 02:14 PM (UTC) •
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MortalKombatRedemption Wrote:
Jerrod has Blue eyes.
I like both Hotaru and Havik alot. They both want to survive, so they sign a peace treaty and unite armies. Desperate times call for desperate measures.
I used to like Liu Kang. He's been overused and now he's stale(Mr. Hero 4 times in a row, dies, comes back). It's time to pass the torch to Kung Lao.
Some more bios are coming on the way. See you later.
Jerrod has Blue eyes.
I like both Hotaru and Havik alot. They both want to survive, so they sign a peace treaty and unite armies. Desperate times call for desperate measures.
I used to like Liu Kang. He's been overused and now he's stale(Mr. Hero 4 times in a row, dies, comes back). It's time to pass the torch to Kung Lao.
Some more bios are coming on the way. See you later.
Why pass the torch to Kung Lao, Kung Lao is already a hero? When all fails, Liu Kang should be passing the torch to Taven. Liu Kang has no need to pass the torch to Kung Lao, because Kung Lao is a great fighter, Liu should pass the torch to a young fighter, like Taven. But, I look for Kung Lao to become supreme hero, if Liu dies, and Taven to become what Kung Lao was in the classic games, sub-hero.
MortalKombatRedemption •07/05/2006 05:00 PM (UTC) •
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7.BO RAI CHO
Place of origin-Outworld
Status-Martial Arts Master, Outworld General
Alignment-Good
Age-7,658
Allies-Rain, Kung Lao, Li Mei, Havik, Hotaru
Enemies-Shao Kahn, Baraka
Height-6'
Weight-310
Fighting Styles-Five ancestors, Drunken Fist
Weapon-Jojutsu
Place of origin-Outworld
Status-Martial Arts Master, Outworld General
Alignment-Good
Age-7,658
Allies-Rain, Kung Lao, Li Mei, Havik, Hotaru
Enemies-Shao Kahn, Baraka
Height-6'
Weight-310
Fighting Styles-Five ancestors, Drunken Fist
Weapon-Jojutsu
MortalKombatRedemption •07/05/2006 06:19 PM (UTC) •
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I'm going to stop writing bios because I'm not good at writing 1st person...
8.HOTARU
Place of origin-Seido
Status-Seidan Guard General
Alignment-Good
Age-2,047
Allies-Havik, Dairou, Bo Rai Cho, Rain
Height-6'3''
Weight-230(Without Armor)
Fighting Styles-Fan Zi Quan, Pi Gua
Weapon-Naginata
9.SUB-ZERO
Place of origin-Earthrealm
Status-Lin Kuei Grandmaster
Alignment-Good
Age-26
Allies-Smoke, Scorpion, Raiden
Enemies-Noob Saibot, Sektor, Shinnok
Height-6'2''
Weight-240
Fighting Styles-Shotokan,Dragon
Weapon-Kori Blade
Sub-Zero is still searching for Noob Saibot.
10.SMOKE
Place Of Origin-Earthrealm
Status-Lin Kuei
Alignment-Good
Age-29
Allies-Sub-Zero
Enemies-Noob Saibot, Sektor
Height-6'1"
Weight-225
Fighting Styles-Mi Tzu, Choy Gar(Rat Kung Fu)
Weapon-Kama
11.NOOB SAIBOT
Place of Origin-Netherrealm
Status-Brother of the Shadow
Alignment-Evil
Age-1,000
Allies-Shinnok, Drahmin, Sektor
Enemies-Sub-Zero, Smoke
Height-6'4''
Weight-240
Fighting Styles-Tien Shan Pai, Monkey
Weapon-Scythe
Strange things are beginning to happen inside Noob Saibot. Ever since he saw the younger Sub-Zero, the older Sub-Zero's soul is starting to revolt inside of Noob. He can feel older Sub-Zero's soul slipping. Noob's kind are light-hating demons that usually walk the earth by posessing an old corpse. Noob took over older Sub-Zero's spirit body, but now the dormant soul of older Sub-Zero wants out...
8.HOTARU
Place of origin-Seido
Status-Seidan Guard General
Alignment-Good
Age-2,047
Allies-Havik, Dairou, Bo Rai Cho, Rain
Height-6'3''
Weight-230(Without Armor)
Fighting Styles-Fan Zi Quan, Pi Gua
Weapon-Naginata
9.SUB-ZERO
Place of origin-Earthrealm
Status-Lin Kuei Grandmaster
Alignment-Good
Age-26
Allies-Smoke, Scorpion, Raiden
Enemies-Noob Saibot, Sektor, Shinnok
Height-6'2''
Weight-240
Fighting Styles-Shotokan,Dragon
Weapon-Kori Blade
Sub-Zero is still searching for Noob Saibot.
10.SMOKE
Place Of Origin-Earthrealm
Status-Lin Kuei
Alignment-Good
Age-29
Allies-Sub-Zero
Enemies-Noob Saibot, Sektor
Height-6'1"
Weight-225
Fighting Styles-Mi Tzu, Choy Gar(Rat Kung Fu)
Weapon-Kama
11.NOOB SAIBOT
Place of Origin-Netherrealm
Status-Brother of the Shadow
Alignment-Evil
Age-1,000
Allies-Shinnok, Drahmin, Sektor
Enemies-Sub-Zero, Smoke
Height-6'4''
Weight-240
Fighting Styles-Tien Shan Pai, Monkey
Weapon-Scythe
Strange things are beginning to happen inside Noob Saibot. Ever since he saw the younger Sub-Zero, the older Sub-Zero's soul is starting to revolt inside of Noob. He can feel older Sub-Zero's soul slipping. Noob's kind are light-hating demons that usually walk the earth by posessing an old corpse. Noob took over older Sub-Zero's spirit body, but now the dormant soul of older Sub-Zero wants out...
^NoobSaiboT^ •07/06/2006 06:09 PM (UTC) •
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dude your story's kick ass.
dimpthepimp •07/06/2006 07:27 PM (UTC) •
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i agree but u need new charecters
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I've got Jerrod fully colored, but I won't scan him until tomorrow.
Why?
BECAUSE I DON'T FEEL LIKE IT.
Why?
BECAUSE I DON'T FEEL LIKE IT.
MortalKombatRedemption •07/06/2006 09:48 PM (UTC) •
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To dimpthepimp- I'm starting on new characters. Baron and King Jerrod are two new ones I'm finished with. Time to make more...
MortalKombatRedemption •07/06/2006 09:53 PM (UTC) •
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12.KING JERROD
Place of Origin- Edenia
Status- Fallen Edenian King
Alignment- Good
Age-20,456
Allies-Rain, Havik, Bo Rai Cho, Hotaru
Enemies-Shao Kahn, Drahmin, Baraka
Height- 6'7"
Weight- 265
Fighting Styles- Pao Chui, Leopard
Weapon- Tiger Fork
Shao Kahn has taken my life, my queen, and my kingdom. For this, he will pay dearly. An insane man with no face resurrected me. His name is Havik. Havik is working with Edenia, Orderealm, and Outworld's armies
to stop the Damnation army of the Netherealm and they need my help. Alongside Rain, I will lead Edenia's armies. We will stop Damnation at all costs.
13.REPTILE
Place of Origin-Outworld
Status-Warrior, General
Alignment-Good
Age-25
Allies-Bo Rai Cho, Havik, Rain, Hotaru
Enemies-Shao Kahn
Height-6'
Weight-220
Fighting Styles-Cha Chuan, Hung Gar
Weapon-Axes
Reptile has learned that Shao Kahn killed his race. Havik resurrected his race and now Reptile will lead them in the war against the Damnation Army.
Place of Origin- Edenia
Status- Fallen Edenian King
Alignment- Good
Age-20,456
Allies-Rain, Havik, Bo Rai Cho, Hotaru
Enemies-Shao Kahn, Drahmin, Baraka
Height- 6'7"
Weight- 265
Fighting Styles- Pao Chui, Leopard
Weapon- Tiger Fork
Shao Kahn has taken my life, my queen, and my kingdom. For this, he will pay dearly. An insane man with no face resurrected me. His name is Havik. Havik is working with Edenia, Orderealm, and Outworld's armies
to stop the Damnation army of the Netherealm and they need my help. Alongside Rain, I will lead Edenia's armies. We will stop Damnation at all costs.
13.REPTILE
Place of Origin-Outworld
Status-Warrior, General
Alignment-Good
Age-25
Allies-Bo Rai Cho, Havik, Rain, Hotaru
Enemies-Shao Kahn
Height-6'
Weight-220
Fighting Styles-Cha Chuan, Hung Gar
Weapon-Axes
Reptile has learned that Shao Kahn killed his race. Havik resurrected his race and now Reptile will lead them in the war against the Damnation Army.
MortalKombatRedemption •07/07/2006 05:03 PM (UTC) •
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NEW FEATURES
1-3 fatalities for each character.
2-3 costumes for each character
3-Every character has a unique advantage(I read the thread about that, and it sounded like a good idea.
4-Must fight 12 opponents before boss instead of 6 or 7.
5-2 hand-to-hand and 1 weapon again, now more in-depth.
1-3 fatalities for each character.
2-3 costumes for each character
3-Every character has a unique advantage(I read the thread about that, and it sounded like a good idea.
4-Must fight 12 opponents before boss instead of 6 or 7.
5-2 hand-to-hand and 1 weapon again, now more in-depth.
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