Mortal Kombat: Devastation
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posted07/02/2007 08:05 PM (UTC)by
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Dawn64
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05/02/2007 03:27 PM (UTC)
Mortal Kombat: Devastation

Prologue:
"I heard of great stories of the history of Mortal Kombat from my grandmother, from The Great Kung Lao and Goro to the Resurrection of the Dragon King." But now thanks to that, the situation has gotten devastating."

*Scene showing the pyramid, Taven vs. Blaze*

“Taven, protector of Edenia challenge Blaze into Mortal Kombat. Hope of the realm will soon be restored. But victory falls short until Daegon appeared”

*Scene showing Daegon coming from behind and impaled Blaze with his sword*

“Without being notice, Daegon impaled the sword what was given by Argus into Blaze. Blaze has been defeated”

*Blaze being erupted*

“The kombatants stopped their fatal battle and looked upon the firespawn.”

*Scene showing Shinnok smiling as he walking up the pyramid and Taven ready to pounced Daegon, but Shang Tsung and Quan Chi put a grip on Taven. And then, Shinnok makes it to the top of the pyramid. Daegon bowed before him.*

“Shinnok was giving Daegon the gratitude he deserves and retrieve the firespawn power. But until........”

*Daegon hit Shinnok to the floor*

“Daegon deceived Shinnok.”

*Shinnok fighting Daegon, but when Shinnok use his amulet to stop him, Daegon grabbed his wrist, squeezed it until the amulet was no longer in his hand, impaled him with the sword as well and thrust kicked him off the sword and pyramid.*

“Forces of Darkness have succeeded the Armageddon, even if the fallen god has been deceived by Daegon. But if you that’s worst, look again.”

*Daegon rise his foot above the amulet. While Quan Chi was screaming ‘NO!’, Daegon stepped and crushed the amulet, and then a green and red aura soaring around Daegon and all of the sudden, Daegon went berserk.*

“There was also a story I heard about The Amulet, that it may control the Dragon King’s army, but it’s also contains an evil monster that The One Being sealed in the amulet before his battle against the Dragon King.”

*A cloud of green and red aura absorbed and fused in Daegon body. Everyone looks surprise. He was no longer Daegon.*

“Gei-Mo, Master of Chaos and Destruction, has been resurrected by the amulet and the body of Daegon”

*Raiden and Kahn made to the top and looked terrified as he walked toward them*

“Gei-Mo was the main fear of all realm especially the Elder Gods and the One Being

"Now, they found the main reason for Mortal Kombat."

*Gei-Mo put up his fighting stance.*

"To survive"

*Shao Kahn and Raiden both attacked him, but no affect on him. Raiden and Shao Kahn jumped back and Kahn pulled out his hammer and attacked him. Gei Mo stopped the hammer with his bare hand and grabbed it; he smacked Shao Kahn around with the hammer and pull out Kahn head. Now everyone attacked.*

“Gei Mo annihilated majority of the kombatants one by one and suddenly, everyone who still survived their retreated.”

*While everyone retreated from the pyramid, a mysterious kombatant went up the pyramid. And meanwhile, Taven, Kung Lao, and Fujin fighting Gei-Mo. Gei-Mo knocked Kung Lao off the pyramid, but while falling, the mysterious person have saved him and continue to the pyramid. When Fujin is down, Taven was now 1 on 1 against, but Taven was nearly defeated. Gei-Mo was going for the kill, but the mysterious person kicked Gei-Mo making him stubble.*

“My name is Dawn, Son of the One Being and Champion of the Elder Gods.”

*Dawn vs. Gei-Mo; Afterward Gei-Mo hit the ground*

“I was victorious at the moment, but suddenly.....”

*Gei-Mo sealed Dawn into the broken amulet until it was attached.”

“I was sealed into the amulet.”

*Gei-Mo picked up the amulet, but Taven attacked Gei-Mo, swiftly picked up the amulet and threw it off the pyramid*

“When Gei-Mo got up, Taven surrendered knowing it was hopeless to defeat him without the power of Blaze. Now, Gei-Mo has now enslaved Edenia.”

“500 years later, a young monk found the amulet, accidentally broke the amulet and set me free. Now that I am free, I am ready to stop this madness; I’ve failed to stop defeat Onaga, but I will defeat Gei-Mo. Devastation will soon be ended.”
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JunFan
05/26/2007 05:56 PM (UTC)
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Very Interesting, but I hate the name 'Dawn', sounds boring, I would rather have an already Mortal Kombatant to be the Hero, not a New one.

Mabye if someone stood next to Daegon and absorbed some of the power, Like some Hero like Kung Lao or Liu Kang or Shujinko or mabye even a New Warrior but a cooler one then you described.

Not the Son of the One Being (because I dont see how thats possible), and not a Champion of the Elder Gods,

A warrior with long brown Hair and a Head band and a Sword, A lone warrior
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DairouRulez
05/26/2007 06:31 PM (UTC)
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i agree, i dont like the name Dawn, or the name Gei-Mo besides that it sounds good to me
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Vapor
05/26/2007 06:51 PM (UTC)
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Great title. But the story is very weak.
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Dawn64
05/29/2007 10:33 AM (UTC)
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Thanks 4 tha C&C but I'm keeping except the Son of the One Being here is the bio of Dawn (Deadly Alliance to Armageddon)

Name: Dawn
Age: 18
Weight: 215 lbs.
Origin: Earthrealm/Edenia
Clan: Mysterious Clan: Shung Hei Warrior
Alignment: Good
Allies: Raiden, Scorpion, Taven, Byran, Gust, Brea, Mika,
Enemies: Quan Chi, Onaga, Baraka, Chang, The Brotherhood Of Shadows
Fighting Style: Ki Serpent, Tae Kwon Do
Weapon: Kris and Serpent Chain *similar snake whip from Ivy in SC3*
Special Move: Tele-Flurry, Grasshopper, Carnival Spin, Wind Teleport, and Chain Constricted (something like Jarek move but he pull ya and thrust kick)

Fatalities:
Chain Reactions:
1) He pull out his Serpent Chain and impale it to your leg 2.) Lift you up in the air and slam you on the ground 2 twice. 3.) Dawn will now pull out his Kris and pull you toward him while you in the air and slash your one of your arms and the leg that is not impaled. 4.) he will whirl you in the air above him with the serpent chain and stick his arm where the Kris is and pull his serpent chain down and you'll be impale in the chest with the Kris 5) FATALITY

Palm of Serpent:
1.) Dawn will take his glove off and charge his hand up 2.) Swift towards you and press his hand on your chest 3.)Wait 3 seconds 4.) A serpent spirit will come out of your back; blood and gore will come as well
5.) When the serpent is out he will kick your head off in the air and the serpent eat the head. 6.) FATALITY


Story:
I was once nobody. No friends, no respect, the one I loved betrayed me. Not knowing my past, my family, or my life. The only person who took care me is my grandmother, Li Xiang she taught me Tae Kwon Do for protection, when I was 17, she died by the hands of Quan Chi and stole the amulet, I had no other place to go, until then an elder monk name, Master Jiang Yukashi, Master of the Shung Hei Warrior, aid me to Edenia. A year later on my graduation of becoming a Shung Hei Warrior apprentice, Quan Chi and the brotherhood of shadows attacked my village and annihilated everyone who stands in their way, sparing no one, not even the young ones. Many of us escape through battle, but Master Yukashi and my little sister, Hinari, who was already dying from the poison, died by The Brotherhood of Shadows. I wanted revenge, later on then, it was only me, and Mika, Byran, Brea, Chang, and other warriors were traveling to find salvation and a new home. Chang was leading us, but I found out that Chang was working for Quan Chi and he lead the warrior into war with the brotherhood of shadows, Mika and many other did not make it. When I defeated Chang, he gave me the truth of why Quan Chi is attacking us; to annihilate me because my mother disobeyed him and escaped from netherealm, he said my mother name is Ashrah; Warriors had no choice but to exile me for their protection. A years later, when I was still exiled, I was driven by rage oni within because a sorceress named Lin Woo deceive of helping me defeating Quan Chi by unleashing my new power, but she put a demon spirit in my body, but I’d managed to control it, barely, but it can be unleashed simply by rage near death experience. When I made it into Outworld, I heard of Quan Chi and Shang Tsung is combating against Raiden, I wanted to help but these things called Tartakan attacked me, so I have no choice but to defeat these monsters. All of the sudden, a light wave flashed from the Chamber to the environment and I was caught in it, nearly died, but I was in a long sleep. Until then I woke in the deserted area of Outworld, now knowing there is a war in Edenia with good vs. evil. I’d immediately go back to Edenia to stop the war.
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frostrockz23
05/30/2007 12:32 AM (UTC)
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i like the idea an lot of action but what is mortal kombat if some one dies no
one dies in mortal kombat thats what i dont get
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Dawn64
05/30/2007 01:06 AM (UTC)
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well you see i heard the next MK game will kill off many characters
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Dawn64
05/31/2007 04:43 AM (UTC)
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Name: Brea
Age: 17
Height: 5’6”
Weight: 158 lbs.
Origin: Edenia
Clan: Mysterious Clan: Shung Hei Warrior
Alignment: Good
Allies: Byran, Dawn, Mika, Yukashi, Sub-Zero
Enemies: Quan Chi, Onaga, Baraka, Tanya, The Brotherhood Of Shadows
Fighting Style: Ki Cheetah, Kenpo
Weapon: Shung Hei Sickle (A golden Sickle)
Special Move: Tele-Flurry, Pretty Kick, Icy Wind *clap her hands 2gther to form a icy wind to freeze the opponent, Wind Teleport

Fatalities:
Cheetah:
1) She formed into a gold-glowing cheetah 2.) Slash your body off 3.) Eat your head off 4.) Transform back 5) FATALITY

Frozen Ice sickle:
1.) Perform the icy wind 2.) Pull out the sickle 3.)Rapidly slash your body 4.)Thrust kicks the body 5.)Everything breaks 6.) FATALITY

Story:
Since the death of my father, Master Yukashi, and Dawn deportations, I had agreed to take my father as Master place as leader, even thought my father despise me of being leader because of my intimidating weakness and my past of disobeying the rule of the Shung Hei Warrior. Byran and I heard about Dawn death by the explosion of Raiden while fighting the Tartakan, and then I heard about the war in Edenia near my home. I feared of taking the warriors to war to help the Forces of Lights, I feared of losing my more of my people. I continue to ignore the process of going to war and let everyone also continue their training. Then, while I was meditating, a sign came to me that Dawn is still alive and going to stop the war without anyone else. And Dawn encourages me to not give up like him, so I decided to aid the Forces of Lights. But, I was too late the firespawn pyramid has been revealed and the forces of good and evil scrambled down the pyramid. And in my view, I had seen Dawn fighting a dark figure with green eyes. Afterward, Byran grabbed me and told me Dawn is fighting The Master of Chaos, Gei Mo and I did turned for a mere second and I did not seen Dawn but only Gei Mo. I had figure Dawn was defeated and I was terrified, lost my self-confidence, and retreated from the theatre of war. Now 500 years, my people has been enslaved, no mortal or any of The Elder Gods’ chosen one has defeated Gei Mo and I am sitting with the warriors hiding, this is the fear I had 500 years ago and now it came true. Then I thought about who gave their live for us, who died in the pyramid, Liu Kang, The Great Kung Lao, Mika, Dawn, and my father. I have had it of sitting here watching my people suffer and while other die in vain, so I had told Byran I am going to stop Gei Mo for my friends and famiy and for the hope of my people.
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Dawn64
06/29/2007 03:44 PM (UTC)
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Name: Byran
Age: 20
Height: 6’3”
Weight: 208 lbs.
Origin: Edenia
Clan: Mysterious Clan: Shung Hei Warrior
Alignment: Good
Allies: Brea, Dawn, Mika, Yukashi, Nancy, Chang, Kung Lao
Enemies: Shang Tsung, Onaga, Baraka, Hotaru, The Brotherhood Of Shadows
Fighting Style: Ki Dragon, Moi Foh
Weapon: Shung Hei Hammer
Special Move: Tele-Flurry, Grasshopper , Hammer Drop *like Tombstone Drop , Wind Teleport

Fatalities:
Dragon Breath:
1) His eyes turn red 2.) Blow fire at you 3.) FATALITY

Fatal Ki Force:
1.) Run up 2.)Palm force your body 3.)Rapidly thrust your body 4.)Jump back 5.)Thrust your body and skeleton came from the back of the victim 6.) FATALITY

Story:
Damn...now I am stuck in the middle of encourage Brea to war or help Dawn in Mortal Kombat. Unlike Dawn, I dont fight in Mortal Kombat, because of the rule of the Shung Hei; Not to confront in Mortal Kombat, but only protect our society from invasion. I am loyal to that rule, Dawn on the upper hand refuse to take part of the rule, and told me we wasnt good enough when we failed to stop Shao Kahn from invading Edenia and I agreed it was a good thing for his deportation. But now, When I seen Dawn being defeated in battle against Gei-Mo, I realize that Dawn is far more competetive than I ever can be. No matter how much I dislike his ways of breaking the rules of the of Shung Hei, he was still much of a good fighter to me. Later on, when Brea told me she going to fight Gei-Mo. I told her if Dawn can't do it. What make you think you can. She didn't answer and leave, she is more stubborn than Dawn. My guts got into me, so decided to join her. I still want my revenge for my grandfather death by the hands of Shang Tsung, once a good warrior, now thanks to Shao Kahn, he was driven mad with power. I will get my revenge as well, if I continue this unpleasant journey.
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The enemy of my enemy of my enemy is my enemy.

07/01/2007 05:26 AM (UTC)
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I gotta a quick question. Who died and who didn't? could you post the list please? Other than that I do like that idea. I like how it ties in with armageddon.
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Dawn64
07/02/2007 08:05 PM (UTC)
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hmm...
good question
Good: died
Johnny Cage
Sonya
Jax
Shujinko
Jade
Maybe Lei Mei
Cyrax
Kai
Ashrah
Kenshi
Stryker
Mokap
Dariou

Evil:died
Daegon
Shao Kahn
Shinnok
Jarek
Kira and/or Kobra
Meat
Sektor
Drahmin
Kentaro
Onaga
Reiko
Moloch
Hsu Hao
Darrius

Who turn Good/Evil/Neutral:
Shang Tsung *Neutral*
Nitara *Good*
Liu Kang *Evil*
Raiden *Neutral*
Motaru *Good*
Sindel *Evil*

Who will be old:
Kung Lao
Nitewolf
Bo Rai Cho

New Character:
Dawn-G
Mika-N
Nancy-G
Lin Woo-E
Byran-G
Gust-G
Brea-G
Hook-E
Gavian-N
Chang-E
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