Zero Degree Glacier
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Zero Degree Glacier
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Sub-Zero and Glacius team up.
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GhostDragon "Tis true my form is something odd, But blaming me is blaming God. Could I create myself anew, I would not fail in pleasing you. If I could reach from pole to pole, Or grasp the ocean with a span, I would be measured by the soul, The mind's the standard of the man."
-Isaac Watts •11/02/2005 12:30 PM (UTC) •
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This has to be your best work to date!
However, I have two issues with it.
>| The elbow pad on Sub's left arm is too tight. It should be wraping around that area. I think continuing the bicep contour into it was a bad idea cause it looks as if it's translucent and thin. Also, his left forearm is a bit larger than it should be in contrast to the right one, which is perfect IMO.
>| If you look at the "ice border" you gave the drawing, you'll see that there's more white space on the left side. The framing of Glacis and Sub is a bit off due to this added space. They stand out for sure, however they're not dominating the space that you gave them with the border. Perhaps if the left border was an 1in to 1.5in closer in, they would be framed better.
My advice in the future concerning borders would be, once you have your dominant element(s) finished, lightly in pencil(I use 6H pencils for this) measure in where you think you'd want to have the border. Afterwards, stand the drawing up somewhere and look at it from a distance. You'll want to make sure that your figure dominate the entire space you give them. You would have gotten away with it if you had Glacius directly over Sub instead of to the right. Planning the positioning of characters in relation to where you'd want a border is also something you could think about.
Otherwise, I think it's still a good piece. Keep up the good work, man.
Rating: 4.5/5
Ghostdragon
However, I have two issues with it.
>| The elbow pad on Sub's left arm is too tight. It should be wraping around that area. I think continuing the bicep contour into it was a bad idea cause it looks as if it's translucent and thin. Also, his left forearm is a bit larger than it should be in contrast to the right one, which is perfect IMO.
>| If you look at the "ice border" you gave the drawing, you'll see that there's more white space on the left side. The framing of Glacis and Sub is a bit off due to this added space. They stand out for sure, however they're not dominating the space that you gave them with the border. Perhaps if the left border was an 1in to 1.5in closer in, they would be framed better.
My advice in the future concerning borders would be, once you have your dominant element(s) finished, lightly in pencil(I use 6H pencils for this) measure in where you think you'd want to have the border. Afterwards, stand the drawing up somewhere and look at it from a distance. You'll want to make sure that your figure dominate the entire space you give them. You would have gotten away with it if you had Glacius directly over Sub instead of to the right. Planning the positioning of characters in relation to where you'd want a border is also something you could think about.
Otherwise, I think it's still a good piece. Keep up the good work, man.
Rating: 4.5/5
Ghostdragon
UltimateRyu •11/02/2005 04:05 PM (UTC) •
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This is def my fave teamup that youve drawn. 5/5
SmokeNc-017 art by fear-sAs •11/02/2005 07:21 PM (UTC) •
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My only problem is that it seems Sub-Zero is showing too much forehead. In the game that "fin" if that's what you wan't to call it reaches down to just where the top of his eyes start, and the tip of his mask reaches up, almost connecting with it. Other then that this is a great piece of work. 5/5
Brodeur -M K 5.org's ..err.MKOnline's Karakter Tournament Kreator <img src="http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v333/brodprod/brodanu.bmp?t=1170999154" •11/02/2005 10:24 PM (UTC) •
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Yup, you're getting better.
I also like the icy border, and i think glacius looks better than Subby.
i gave you 5 ;)
keep it up.
I also like the icy border, and i think glacius looks better than Subby.
i gave you 5 ;)
keep it up.
Thanks everyone for the awesome comments. Glacius looks better because he's my favorite character from Killer Instinct. I don't like Sub-Zero's "shredder" look either, but I wanted to draw each character with their most recent look. Chrome, I just don't know what the hell you're talking about.
bleed •11/03/2005 03:30 PM (UTC) •
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Very nice work!
Your anatomy and proportions are getting much better.
Your anatomy and proportions are getting much better.
darth_tyrael •09/13/2006 11:28 PM (UTC) •
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I LOVE GLACIUS!!!
tommystockley •12/12/2006 04:16 PM (UTC) •
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Hey, I'm a big fan of MK and KI. I was thinking about doing an MK vs. KI comic recently and I'm looking for an illustrator. The comic will include every character for both franchises, depicting the Killer Instinct tournament as having better warriors but evenly matched due to Mortal Kombat's sheer number. Due to all the characters it would be a mini-series and a new episode would be posted online every 1-2 months. Specifics are obviously negotiable because i suspect your as much a fan of both franchises as me. It's only for the hell of it and we might get some credit on the net from weirdos like myself. If your interested, write me an email at tommystockley@hotmail.com or add me to ur msn (I suggest both cuz I don't check my email much, ).
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