Perfect for a rpopagana picture and as an actual character picture.

I would rather change Za Chuan for Kuntao (indonesian gong-fu) what would be more logical and fitting for a character of Indonesian origin.

I had problem with my PC in the last few weeks and kinda busy too so i just able to join the forum today

I've been thinking about this character and his story since MK2, i thought it would be cool to have an elemental god of wind that will be a rival match to Raiden but then come Fujin in MK4 and developed stories in later MK series so i guess i have to do some changes.

Anyway... Thank a lot for your comment, i really appreciate it

i love it. its like a real characters bio.

I like how you set this picture up. With the bio and stuff. Thats all great but the character itself looks very bland. I like the concept but I think you could have maybe done a bit more to it. The face looks great. Im not sure whats on his head. If hes wearing a sort of hat or if he just has red hair. I like the other type of jewelry going around his forehead. His upper body attire has a nice start but you should have added more to it. Same goes to the lower body. Make it looks appealing, make the character more memorable. Overall I think you did a nice job though. 4/5.

This character based on ancient Indonesian Silat fighter, and No!!!... he don't have red hair, it is dark green in fact, he just use some sort of red "bandana" (i don't know it's English or not lol) to cover his forehead then i put the jewelry on top, he also have black eyeball with tiny white pupil, u should see the bigger image.

I am still far far away to be an expert in photoshop or digital draw so some part maybe not look realistic enough . The cloth look plain, u are right on that... i just couldn't find a perfect pattern to apply yet. The skin in his hands and feets are little bit green something like Sub Zero's blue hands (alternate costume), He also use some kind of root around both hands and knees,and i think he'll be more suit to be a god of earth, isn't he?

thanks for the critics

He looks like a icon of royalty. I think he fits perfectly as one of the gods because he looks like someone people would look up to and respect. I really have nothing negative to say about this. Without looking at his profile, I figured he would be someone of high importance, and that's definitely what the gods in Mortal Kombat are.

I think you accomplished something here. When a viewer looks at a character concept and can sort of guess who or what it is without having to look at the profile, that means it's a great picture. 5 out of 5. You earned it with this...with or without clothing details. Good job.

Thanks a lot...

I also already have images of the other elemental gods on my mind... i've planned to draw them in the near future but perhaps unlike this one... they'll be only sketches... hope they won't be disapointing

i've tried to add a little bit more... how does he look now?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v631/keranjang/soma.jpg

somebody tell me how to make a link here please