The Fall Of King Jerrod
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03/28/2009 07:34 PM (UTC)by
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MKHIZANK
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10/18/2008 07:07 PM (UTC)
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03/21/2009 06:12 PM (UTC)
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Pretty good, though Shou Kahn seems a bit too insane.
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MKHIZANK
03/22/2009 01:50 PM (UTC)
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lol, was just kinda goin with what i thought he'd be like, he is after all described as being maniacal and what not, this isn't a canon description so why not make him completely bat-shit lol.
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MK-4-LIFE
03/24/2009 09:18 AM (UTC)
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The rape seemed unnecessary. I've never seen/heard sex of any kind associated with MK.

Other than that, pretty good. I liked it.
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03/24/2009 04:37 PM (UTC)
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I'm impressed; that's some really nice stuff you wrote. As odd as this may sound I do believe that some parts could be a bit more details, and some of the language was too simple (the soldiers "looked to take him out" doesn't sound fun to read).
Keep up the good work.
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MKHIZANK
03/28/2009 07:34 PM (UTC)
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Yeah this is one of the shortest i've done, it was kinda rushed, but i could probably make a more detailed, better worded one when i get in writing mode again.
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