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.........2/5 sorry it's just .....wtf-ish.....

Cyrax looks like a dog. The concept is pretty cool though.

^ Agreed. I don't really like Sonya's face much though. You did an excellent job on Kenshi and Jax is okay.

Nice job though. 3/5

Sonya looks pretty good. The face is a little weird - around where the nose is it doesn't look right. Other then that tho, the pose is awesome and the hair is done well. I also like her clothes - they are coloured nicely and have turned out good.

Jax is also good. His arms are done really well, and so is his body. The face is a little small and flat, but he still looks pretty good. I liked how you made his arms locked with Sonyas.

Cyrax does kinda look like a dog, lol. I think it is the way that he is just draped upon Jaxes lap that gives him that look. His face is a little squarish tho. But overall, nice job with Cyrax. You put quite a bit of detail into him, especially the arms, and he turned out okay.

Kenshi is probably the best of the lot. The only problem I can find with him is that he looks a little bit too tall. I think that is to do with his leg tho. But his hair looks awesome and the clothes are really detailed and good.

Overall I rate it 3.5/5. You put quite a bit of effort into it and it looks pretty good. Just work mainly on your faces because other then with Kenshi, the faces were the reason I thought people looked a little strange. But good job overall.

Also, Sonya's left hand was drawn on the wrong side. The thumb should be facing the body, not outwards.

Thanks for your input, guys. I'm thinking about maybe drawing a Sonya portrait.
I had the idea for bald eagle earrings and I just couldn't pass it up

Now we know Cyrax is gay.

Well I can't say I like it but I can't say I dislike it either.I think this is an exellent concept.Because it's the special forces just chilling after a hard day of kicking ass.Like I said the concept is good but the picture itself has flaws I will discuss.

Sonya has a very irregular shaped head.And I can see what you have tried to do to the hair but you havent done it right at all because you went for the hair shining effect but the aspects of it don't seem to be right.A simple attire she has some lines are un-certain and get rather wobbly.The aspects of the shading you have done for Sonya around the lower abdominal region seem to be right.


Now you have appeared to do Kenshi better that you have Sonya.I like the hair concept he has because its more casual to his current hair.I think you could have given Kenshi a much more casual attire because I don't think he would wear that for chilling with his fellow collueges.One eyebrow is way bigger and thicker than the other.


Now I am going to comment on Cyrax and Jax together.First of you could have made Jaxs legs slightly smaller because if you compare the size of Cyrax to Jaxs legs it doesnt look right at all.I've said this about a few other characters but Jax doesnt look to casual I mean hes wearing the head phone set and the "500" dollar/pound glasses.You appear to have done the right think with Jaxs abdominal area.I havent much to comment on Cyrax.He is to small.The expression on his face looks incerdibly strange.And you could have done the gdgets on his body.


So overall I rate this submission 2.5/5


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Eh..seems I have a bit of work to do. And I'm not much good at drawing profile faces.

And light sources are my BANE.

Thank you for your comments again, ego-deflating as they may be D:

Poor Jax. You do realize that Cyrax weighs 650 pounds, right?

You did a pretty good job with this. There are some wrong points though. So I'm going to give it a 3/5.

I wonder what Jax is smiling about...

pretty cute.

What is cyrax doing to jax? Black on Black crime.

Thay all look like dogs, and they all look stoned.

It looks good though.