nice pic, the smoke coming off him is a nice touch, although you drew his pelvis / crotch too small, you can't notice it too easily under his clothes, overall it's definately not a bad pic, i'll give it 3/5 when the vote button stops saying i alrdy voted and lets me vote.

yes. this wasnt my best of art it was just a simple sketch i drew up and just added things. Ill be doing some good ones soon tho.

Hmm... well this is pretty interesing. I really like the smoke and how you drew it, its very nice. Though, I think this personally needs more detail. Something to make this "Smoke", because without that smoke effect, this could have just as easily been a Scorpion sketch. Maybe some designs on his costume, or you could drop the ninja suit and go with something different, as I am fairly sure you have enough talent to do that. Also, Smoke seems to be standing to 'straight', he would look cooler with some sort of position in my opinion. Good drawing, just needs something more to make him not another Scorpion clone.

Hmm, pretty nice, but I have seen better from you. The shading is a bit weak and the concept looks a bit too much like Scorpion. The proportions a re a bit off and the chain in his hand isn't quite as detailed as it could be. I say nice attempt though. 2/5

Well, I can't say much about slight proportions etc. in drawing, I can't draw to save my life, lol.
However, I do like this.
However, as somebody else said, it does look a little too much like Scorpion still. Also, I find his belt, which holds his cloth below his waist, not so easy to notice.
I like the effects of the smoke you added very much, but it seems like Smoke's only real trait to identify it as Smoke, as opposed to Scorpion.

Nice job though.