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SEKTOR SEVEN
SEKTOR SEVEN SECURITY REPORT NO. 234786
Subject: SECURITY ALERT ALL STATIONS! SPECIMENS ESCAPED!
ALERT!: There has been a breach of containment in Sektor Sevens Space Pirate Moutain Research Complex. All personel are to be on the lookout for 4 escaped tarkatan specimens. They have no biochip implants so we have no clue where they are. These are their identa-codes:
1357-XY36-AK47-11ZY
M16A-57XY-3794-V8D5
ID45-NO12-1984-1776
R456-F0X0-I40V-D007
They are human test subjects that were samurai captured from the Wartoro clan during the Shinsin wars. We took them to the Red Dragon clans moutain stronghold which is also a top secret Sektor Seven research facility. There we injected some of Barakas DNA into them and then infused them with micro amounts of mutigen strain 776-V AKA Phazon strain Vertigo.
This was to enhance their power and strangth and other atributes too.
But the results were unstable and we had to isolate them in biohazard containment and 6 days later they became too powerful. They broke out of their containment lockdown cells and through our security and containment systems. Now we have an all points bulletin for the 4 tarkatan escapees. A 1000000000 koin reward goes to anyone with information leading to the capture of them. And as for the captureing itself terminal force is autherized however is not recommended. We want these things back alive.
Also a state of emergancy is declared for all the realms too due to the subjects transdimentional traval abilites and unstable insettiable hunger for human flesh and blood.
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This is a story based on the picture feast of the tarkata by Aculeus. Thx for the insperation Aculeus.
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| User Likes | User Ratings | 5 | Score |
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"If it is alive it can feel pain. If it has eyes it can see it own suffering. If it has blood you can make it bleed. If it has a mouth you can make it scream." Darth i forgot his name.
"Thats the best thing about you humans. You bleed." a tarkatan warrior.
I do like it a lot. It might take a few reading overs to Fully understand what you getting too
I think what you are saying is, that these humans were captured by a clan under the name of... "Wartoro." Correct? This all took place during the "ShinSin," war right? They were then in this lab where they had this stuff injected in them that was made from Baraka's DNA? It made them bigger, faster, and stronger? Then in the long run they got too powerful and over-took the... whole world, or just the lab (I'm not really clear right there.)
So if anyone could capture them they would get...WHAT?!...hang on let me C&P and see how much this is. "1000000000" that Is alot of Koin bro:P
**1,000,000,000**
So I added in the comma's and that is 1 billion koins. I really wonder how much that is worth in the MK Universe haha.
All n' all I do like the concept of the story. They're a few reasons I didn't give 5/5 DP's. I think the story wasn't quite long enough, Next time maybe elaborate on things in your story a bit more. And next time also take your time a bit more too... Go into the Notebook on your computer and type it up there first so you can read over and observe where you made your mistake, I mean... MKO will still be here after you make your story. I also hope that you can take constructive criticism because some people here may be less kind than I was. I tried to find the BEST in your work and I think I succeeded. Keep posting and I will keep Giving you my opinions
Nice work SektorSeven
I look forward to seeing more of your work
"If it is alive it can feel pain. If it has eyes it can see it own suffering. If it has blood you can make it bleed. If it has a mouth you can make it scream." Darth i forgot his name.
"Thats the best thing about you humans. You bleed." a tarkatan warrior.
"If it is alive it can feel pain. If it has eyes it can see it own suffering. If it has blood you can make it bleed. If it has a mouth you can make it scream." Darth i forgot his name.
"Thats the best thing about you humans. You bleed." a tarkatan warrior.
"If it is alive it can feel pain. If it has eyes it can see it own suffering. If it has blood you can make it bleed. If it has a mouth you can make it scream." Darth i forgot his name.
"Thats the best thing about you humans. You bleed." a tarkatan warrior.
