This is a banner I made for Shin Iori Yagami from the Maiden Masher forum. I know the effects may be a little bit overdone, but at least it doesn't suck all to much. Comments and Crits please.
"Goddamn the torpedoes. It's time to run away with the sideshow. Full speed, right ahead. Don't stop, you can sleep when you're dead."
•11/08/2003 12:37 AM (UTC) •
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i like it, you got skills, though, the only thing i see wrong with it is the little kori shock thingy on sub-zero's arms, but besides that this is a very very nice picture, character selection and place are a nice choice, and the background is lovely, and the power special effects you added are very cool, all in all this is a nice piece of art, 4 and a half dragons is my vote, keep this up and you should get full 5's
this looks pretty good, some of the effects could be done on better pictures, like Shang Stung. His energy coming out of the top hand looks good, but it doesnt flow with the bottom. I like the pic of Quan Chi you have though, it goes pretty good. I don't like the eyes you put on scorpion, the glow seems to stop at the edge of his mask instead of going over it, but the spear looks like its really moving because it is kind of blurred. I cant decide if you did that on purpose or not lol, but it looks really good anyways. SUb zero looks cool, with the frost coming out of his mask, but his hands could be done a little better, nice job overall. 3.5/5
Awesome quality and details. I like that Tsung Soul thing on his hands and Scorpion eyes red, very nice. The only thing I don't like is the bg it doesn't seen to match but nonethless that could really make a good site banner.
Thank you all for your comments. I really apreciate it. This shows that it's not only Crow that can do good crits. I changed the banner and I think it looks even better than it did before.
I like it. Especially the effects you put on Scorpion's eyes. I would have liked to see more of those effects done on Sub-Zero, maybe putting the effect you did with Scorpion except blue. Also, maybe put less of an effect on Shang Tsung's arm because it looks a bit like he's holding a lightsaber or some other weapon. Other than that, very nice job.
I think I like the eyes from the second one and the effects on the first one. The second's are just too blah. "What does that mean?" They are just a big cloud, whereas the first had some velocity to it. Looked like something bad was about to happen.
