Reptile In MKI
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03/05/2007 03:54 AM (UTC)by
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Mystika
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03/04/2007 01:15 AM (UTC)
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Where's the photo?
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Reptilefanatic
03/04/2007 01:45 AM (UTC)
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ITs not a story, its a fanfic.

And i think it is very well done. A nice little story, and i especially like how Kang and Reptile couldn't really overpower eachother, and went their seperate ways. I liked how you made Reptile have a personality too.
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03/04/2007 02:09 AM (UTC)
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I like this a lot, although I found some of the language you used to be repetitive (surprisingly shocked for example). I recommned using a thesaurus to avoid those little things.
I like how oyu portrayed Reptile as a serious warrior, and the bit of fun you poke at concerning the shaps across the moon. The fact that he and Liu Kang didn't kill each other was also awesome, as you not only modified the story a bit, you kept it true in that they both didn't wind up having a great affect on each other to change the entire canon. Awsome stuff, 5/5 from me.
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03/04/2007 06:33 AM (UTC)
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Jerrod Wrote:
I like this a lot, although I found some of the language you used to be repetitive (surprisingly shocked for example). I recommned using a thesaurus to avoid those little things.
I like how oyu portrayed Reptile as a serious warrior, and the bit of fun you poke at concerning the shaps across the moon. The fact that he and Liu Kang didn't kill each other was also awesome, as you not only modified the story a bit, you kept it true in that they both didn't wind up having a great affect on each other to change the entire canon. Awsome stuff, 5/5 from me.


I am going with Jerrod on this. This is very good ; I like it alot.
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Kombosus
03/05/2007 03:54 AM (UTC)
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Great material the writting was kind of robotic otherwise I loved it.
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