Wow, Acj wasn't lyin' when he said this was nice. ^_^ Great work, but my one thought would be his feet are too short to carry his gurth. They seem proportionally the same size as his forearms, but.... I can't see them supporting his size. :|

Wow...

That certainly really looks like a warrior's armor. That's for sure. I like the way you made him look like this Samurai/Ninja type person. It really blends with the story on how Rain's father was killed by Kahn. Nice.

Dragon points: 5/5

i like the costume it is amazing as it always is, the swords are a nice touch but they rimind me a little of scorpion, but that isnt a bad thing. I like how you gave him his own personality with the chain mail armor over his head(i think thats what it is) that looks very well done. I never saw this in the index though, i think it got bumped by spoon . great work yet again, though i would have liked to see some else done with his boots they look plain.
4/5

I like it, it's real contour and clean looking. Good job. :)

In a way the swords are like Scorpion but he has a total of four swords and one short sword(on his leg). The only reason I gave him so many is because soldiers in war(in the past) usually end up breaking their weapon because of the damages it sustains during battle. He carries them because his father was a warrior and he would fight in wars and all that other bullshit.

Very nice. This is probably one of the best Rain concepts I've seen, which I haven't seen one in quite some time. I especially like the mesh, I've always wanted to see some character in MK with a mesh, or even fishnet type design. Given your story, Rain could be the first. I also like how you gave him alot of importance, making him the lone representive on Edenia was a pretty interesting twist.

As always, everything appears to be basically in proportion. I like his pose, the idea is nice. The four swords on his back would form an X if they were all in their sheaths, which would look pretty nice I think. The short sword is also cool, and the reason for him carrying so many weapons was well explained. His mask is pretty original, unlike any other MK character that has worn a mask in the past. Of course, the helmet adds alot to it, but even the mask itself isn't just plain. The arm accessories are nice, very 'general' like I think. The cloth that hangs down had really good form, it seems very light. And the designed one that is on the top of it see somewhat more solid. Good use of textures here I think.

The legs were drawn good, and again the accessories were a nice touch; giving him more depth as a character. Perhaps the boots are a bit simple, but that could have been the way to go on this particular drawing. Nice job, and great concept.

Excellent as usual.

Wyatt

that is nice work, it does give off that rain feel, and the swords are great, 5 dragons most certainly

This is absolutely amazing. I have loved every single one of your works, and this one is right up there. I like the way you made him very different, yet similar to the other ninjas, and I think the double swords idea was great. Overall this guy looks badass.


PS - do you color your pics? Ive seen coloring of one of your pics done by someone else, it looks real cool. It would be cool to see all of your amazing works in color.