its ok, u need to try and add more detail to her cloths and stuff. She looks so plain and doesnt really remind me of frost. 3/5

No no no and no!
I mean, you CAN draw, that's for sure!
But when we change the look of a character, we have to be original and be creative... this is too simple... and god does it look like those Chineese cartoons.
Keep up the good work!

Yeah, it's a very anime/manga like drawing as that's what I'm best at drawing.

I don't know, I just tried to give her clothes that would look like a cross between modern street wear and ninja like clothes. This was inspired quite heavily by Ayame from Tenchu, particularly from Wrath of Heaven. And rather then sticking the hair straight up I parted the hair...

I would also try doing more detail/coloring if I had a better editing program on my comp then Paint lol.

Ah well, thanks for your comments and opinions though

Well it's a good drawing, but to me, it doesn't remind me of Frost that much. Nevertheless, I give you 3 Dragons and I would like to see another Frost design, one that will resemble more like Frost, but have differences....(you know what I mean...)

That's a really good drawing, but I don't see there Frost...;)

I really do appreciate all the feedback!

Ok, this afternoon I sat down and drew the absolute best picture I could of a similar Frost design to this one...

I took all of your criticism to heart and made her look like Frost but gave her a new and fresh style. I kept the parted hair from this sketch as I thought it was cute though

I drew her with her mask and a psuedo Lin Kuei ninja get up that is like a variation of her normal costume in DA. It's also much more detailed then this one and just blows this drawing out of the water. I just submitted it not too long ago so give your opinions as soon as it comes up! Thanks!