Mortal Kombat: Living Armageddon
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11/25/2006 05:17 AM (UTC)by
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DigitalDebaser
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About Me
art by fear-sAs
11/22/2006 09:21 AM (UTC)
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Agh! Dude. I can't read this. You need paragraphs. This is nothing but a sloppy mess. Redo it, and then resubmit it. That's my suggestion. Then I can give you some feedback on the actual material.
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RyanRaiden
11/25/2006 05:17 AM (UTC)
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Awesome story!! I would love to see your future chapters, man!! 5/5.

-RyanRaiden.
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