MK Vendetta - The MK3 Novelization - Chapter 8: Homesick
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09/02/2005 11:45 AM (UTC)by
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brandog72
08/29/2005 03:11 PM (UTC)
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another great chapter to an awesome story.
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08/31/2005 10:56 AM (UTC)
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Apologies to those who have read this about the bolding and italicizing - I really don't know what the hell happened. Crow tells me that the fanfic sub system has been really buggy of late - we'll see how this develops.
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jason06
09/02/2005 11:45 AM (UTC)
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I just wanted to say that I like the story so far. Johnny cage is written perfectly, and the chapter with Sonya chasing Kano is great. Kano seems really evil, even though you don't really see him do much, which makes me look forward to seeing him in later chapters. Doesn't he become one of Kahns generals? I hope something happens with Johnny and Sonya, by the way.
The only two things I think you could improve on our, one, Shao Kahn doesn't seem evil enough, I'm not exactly sure why, and parts of the fight between rain and reptile come off as kind of flat and overly technical. Is the fight even nesisary at all?
I like the story a lot and can't wait for more.
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