its pretty good.... some suggestions: 1. make the drawing bigger and in the middle of the page 2. make her teeth bigger 3. maybe work on the porpotions of the face
viktor Wrote: its pretty good.... some suggestions: 1. make the drawing bigger and in the middle of the page 2. make her teeth bigger 3. maybe work on the porpotions of the face
I Have Become as the Wastelands of Unending Nothingness. Now Shall the Night Things Fill Me with their Whisperings, and the Shadows Reveal their Wisdom.
•03/08/2005 09:26 PM (UTC) •
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You should work on the hair. No offense, but it doesn't even look like hair, IMO. Also, draw an outline of her chin under the veil.
It looks like you tried to do some shading on her face by the ear. It doesn't work; it seems completely out of place. I think the hair has the same problem.