liu kang vs. reptile
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liu kang vs. reptile
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this is just a drawing i made in ms paint.
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Stahlgeist •10/09/2007 03:29 AM (UTC) •
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I rate this a 1.5/5 (Rounded up to two in the vote I submitted.). You have potential, because you at least have to seem a bit of a grasp on how anatomy should look, although there are still multiple errors. Proportionally, Liu Kang's right arm is a bit too large, particularly around the forearm. There's no perspective used on his right leg to show it's bent inwards at the knee slightly, making it look somewhat malformed.
One of Reptile's legs - his right one - is too long, especially in comparison to the other.
As for the stage, I'm not sure about how it looks in the original, but is the carpet heading towards the distant wall supposed to stop so suddenly? Someone correct me if I'm wrong, but I think it's supposed to go all the way to the wall. The floor tiling is uneven and appears crooked, and each tile looks to be a different size. The two pillars are the same one copied and pasted from the looks of it, as well as the two statue heads. This would not be so bad, if you had added individual details to each one to differentiate them and have them fit properly within the stage. As well, the statue head on the left is set lower down the wall than the other across from it.
The "window" cutout in the background has uneven dividing solid pieces of wall between each cutout. It's also quite evident to me that you probably did one half of the window, and copied and flipped it to make the other half, which doesn't bother me - just curious as to if I'm correct on that? Anyway, the window could use some features behind it, such as a sky and clouds, to make it more interesting.
The placements of the room's features also appear to be off. The pillars do not have the window centered between them, which isn't essential, but perhaps would've appeared more appropriate aesthetically. The overall set-up does seem to make things appear to be be off-center or misplaced.
The main complaint, however, is lack of detail. You need to add shadows, shading, details to the outfits and stage features. There are truly amazing things people have done to paint, and they have managed to convey much detail and variety of color within a program many would consider quite limited.
However, since you did managed to accomplish with something in Paint that doesn't look entirely horrible, and shows you have potential, I give you a 1.5/5. Hopefully the mini-novel I just wrote helps you out.
One of Reptile's legs - his right one - is too long, especially in comparison to the other.
As for the stage, I'm not sure about how it looks in the original, but is the carpet heading towards the distant wall supposed to stop so suddenly? Someone correct me if I'm wrong, but I think it's supposed to go all the way to the wall. The floor tiling is uneven and appears crooked, and each tile looks to be a different size. The two pillars are the same one copied and pasted from the looks of it, as well as the two statue heads. This would not be so bad, if you had added individual details to each one to differentiate them and have them fit properly within the stage. As well, the statue head on the left is set lower down the wall than the other across from it.
The "window" cutout in the background has uneven dividing solid pieces of wall between each cutout. It's also quite evident to me that you probably did one half of the window, and copied and flipped it to make the other half, which doesn't bother me - just curious as to if I'm correct on that? Anyway, the window could use some features behind it, such as a sky and clouds, to make it more interesting.
The placements of the room's features also appear to be off. The pillars do not have the window centered between them, which isn't essential, but perhaps would've appeared more appropriate aesthetically. The overall set-up does seem to make things appear to be be off-center or misplaced.
The main complaint, however, is lack of detail. You need to add shadows, shading, details to the outfits and stage features. There are truly amazing things people have done to paint, and they have managed to convey much detail and variety of color within a program many would consider quite limited.
However, since you did managed to accomplish with something in Paint that doesn't look entirely horrible, and shows you have potential, I give you a 1.5/5. Hopefully the mini-novel I just wrote helps you out.
BloodSplatter-ChainsawMan •10/09/2007 08:49 PM (UTC) •
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Meh. Pretty good despite the limitations of MSPaint.
TheSilverSurfer •10/16/2007 09:33 PM (UTC) •
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It looks a bit cheesy.
1/5.
1/5.
It looks okay for an ms Paint work. I think it would be better if you have added some shadows, to make it a little bit more 3D looking. Even though its hard to do in paint, but if you had added some shadows with dark colors. I think it would have given it more depth to it.
MortalMushroom •10/29/2007 01:15 AM (UTC) •
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hey
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I'm working on a remake and more art, but there's a problem with my computer and I can't submit fanart anymore
Darklord_Xel :D •10/29/2007 05:13 PM (UTC) •
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Drawing in MSPaint can be really difficult, but the results (if done well) can be a 1000x better then what a person could make in Photoshop/Gimp/etc. This, however, is awful. 0/5
NEST1 Wrote:
1/5...
I think it's impossible to do anything nice with Paint.
1/5...
I think it's impossible to do anything nice with Paint.
1st i have no idea why im even in this forum or in this thread, im a bit bored right now.
anyway some times i dont get this site, this is actually pretty impressive. its not as if it took him 2 mins to make, he/she clearly put time into it and he gets no DP's. weird
well very nice work guy.
ok now its time for me to get the hell outta this forum im scared.
MortalMushroom •03/22/2008 02:43 AM (UTC) •
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Yeah, looking back, This is pretty bad. Maybe you should check out the remake I did.
XTREEMIST •03/22/2008 03:44 AM (UTC) •
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johnny1up Wrote:
Yeah, looking back, This is pretty bad.
Yeah, looking back, This is pretty bad.
Yep, I couldn't agree more. That's why I just gave it zero dragon points.
Jerrod •03/24/2008 06:21 PM (UTC) •
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johnny1up Wrote:
Yeah, looking back, This is pretty bad.
Yeah, looking back, This is pretty bad.
The rules for bumping your own thread in this forum still apply, so please refrain from doing so in the future.
Anyway, it does need a lot of work (shadows, realistic body part sizes, various background element sizes and shapes...).
illu§ion •03/24/2008 06:25 PM (UTC) •
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I didn't even realize how old this thread was which is why I marked the skull as unfair. Sorry, Jerrod.
Jerrod •03/28/2008 02:07 PM (UTC) •
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illu§ion Wrote:
I didn't even realize how old this thread was which is why I marked the skull as unfair. Sorry, Jerrod.
I didn't even realize how old this thread was which is why I marked the skull as unfair. Sorry, Jerrod.
It's okay... Now I have to make sure that Darque or CCShadow doesn't see it, otherwise I'll receive a long lecture about it... And if I get demoted, it'll be because of this poor rating I received, so it'll all be on YOU!
Don't worry about, it's no big deal.
MortalMushroom •09/26/2008 12:59 AM (UTC) •
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At the time I didn't know how forums worked and I just wanted to reply to people's comments so that's why I bumped it. No big deal now though, righ?
johnny1up Wrote:
Dude I have no idea what you're talking about. I'm just responding to people's comments. I'm not trying to bump my forum or anything like that
By the way, you can find a remake of this on fanart central under the name johnnyshroom221. (this site won't let me submit anymore.
Dude I have no idea what you're talking about. I'm just responding to people's comments. I'm not trying to bump my forum or anything like that
By the way, you can find a remake of this on fanart central under the name johnnyshroom221. (this site won't let me submit anymore.
But... you just bumped.
ermac1314 •10/13/2008 12:05 AM (UTC) •
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Nice It looks sweet!
therealmk •11/23/2008 02:40 AM (UTC) •
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childish, looks like a grade one made it
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