It's well done. I give it a 5 out of 5 stars.

2 thumbs up and 4 from goro very nice work i love it

The individual drawings are good, the composite is not so good. Most notably the ninjas, the drop shadow gives them a paper-thin appearance. The coloring on Li Mei seems a little rushed. Dunno, maybe it's an effect your going for.

Wyatt

Awsome.

It is almost awesome, but not quite. It looks rushed in some areas. Like the ink lines are too dirty looking, and in some places on Li may, there are too many little hatch lines, that make her look like she is wrinkled like an old woman. You need to work on your coloring, it looks rushed, and you need to have a definite light source, and have objects casting shadow on other objects. For example, put a shadow on her leg from the Sai in her hand.

She looks paper thin right now, so I suggest rounding her out with shadow. Example, the right side of her hip should be a lot darker than the left side of her hip. Because light is being cast on the left side of her hip, and shadow from her arm, and torso would be making the right side of her hip darkened by shadow.

I have noticed, that when drawing women, less is more. By less, I mean the ink, and pencil lines. Too much can make them look old.

With men it doesn't really matter as much.

You should look up some tutorials on inking, and coloring.

And what program are you using? It looks like Photoshop to me. That texture you put on the floor is a Photoshop filter.

By the way I like your art.

I like it a lot! The scenario as well as the style shown in your work is great.
Hope to see more soon!

True, tis an awesome pic on the whole...but the inks look rushed and same with the ninjas in the background.

I agree with you all that this isn't the best work that Ive done. Sometimes you need to walk away from you artwork for a period of time to notice the flaws, but instead I hit the sumbit button too soon.
I did use Photoshop for this Bleed. I have been wanting to ask you what programs you use. Your lines are so clean and consistant in your artwork. Your version of Rain rocks by the way.

Dude that "kick the Baby" is hilarious, where did you get that?

Ace21 Wrote: 2 thumbs up and 4 from goro very nice work i love it

HOT

Next time you reply to an old thread. Do it with more constructive criticism.

awesome

Oh my...

Now that's a hott Li Mei. Nice drawing there :) I like the drawing a picture with in a picture method. This is kind of like the famous artist from the 16th or 17th (forget which one) century that used oil for his painting and had picture within a picture.