Konquest: For Earthrealm
Shao Kahn's screams echoed throughout the room as his body began to glow a brilliant green. Liu Kang, satisfied with his victory, let a slow smile come over his face as he fell to his knees with weariness. Not only was he able to avenge the death of his comrade Kung Lao, he also ensured that with Kahn's humiliating defeat, Earthrealm would be safe from Outworld. These thoughts had only a moment to last as he was quickly swept off the floor by a jovial Raiden. Shao Kahn could no longer contain himself and released massive amounts of his magical energy along with the billions of souls he absorbed from Earthrealm, all of which were ripping through the tower like tissue paper. Raiden and Liu needed to make a hasty retreat before being crushed.
"Congratulations, champion," Raiden said hurriedly flying towards the blocked doorway, "you've made me proud to put my faith in you. You have a gift, Liu, and once this is over, I'll show how to harness your true power. Now we must get out of here before the realms separate and we are trapped in Outworld."
Liu Kang was honoured... Being trained by a God was no small reward to the Shaolin Monk. Before he could imagine all the possibilities of this training, he caught a glimpse of Kung Lao's motionless body before they teleported out of Kahn's Pit Arena and into the more stable hallway. "We cannot leave Kung Lao there," exclaimed Liu, "he needs to be buried!"
"If we go back for his body, we will all be buried in Kahn's tower; besides, he has found peace, what happens to his body will not affect his soul. Your life is more important than a burial rite."
Liu could not fight Raiden on this; he could barely move after using so much power. Liu Kang had always known he had hidden potential when it came to fighting, but after seeing Kung Lao fall against Kahn's might, Liu felt a surge of power grow within him, fueled by the desires of Raiden, Noob Saibot, and several other warriors hoping for Shao Kahn's defeat. Oddly enough, Liu Kang even felt this hope come faintly from Kung Lao, and even from Shao Kahn himself... Whatever the case, Liu Kang would have to ask Raiden about it later.
As Liu Kang pondered this, Raiden, tightly holding Liu in his arms, flew hastily through the crumbling corridors of the tower, searching for an exit and hoping Kung Lao escaped in time... It was Kung Lao's choice to pretend to die, to escape the demands of saving the world and lead a peaceful life; Raiden needed to respect his wishes. He would let Kung Lao reveal himself in due time.
Liu Kang looked desperately for signs of Johnny Cage, Sonya Blade, or Noob Saibot, who all followed the monks and God to help fight any warriors blocking them from reaching Shao Kahn. Though Noob was originally working for Kahn, Liu could tell that Noob wanted Kahn defeated and the war to end, so he had some trust in the Shadow Demon. Seconds later, a black mist encircled him and Raiden. Liu recognized this as Noob's signature for his teleportation abilities and felt good knowing that at least Noob Saibot had not been killed while defending the entrance to Shao Kahn's Pit. Once again, Raiden knew more about what Noob's intentions, and was not happy to see him. He sensed a familiar essence in Noob and it worried Raiden about who Noob Saibot may have been working for. Raiden heard Noob Saibot teleport after him when Raiden confronted Shao Kahn personally. Noob watched him try to reason with Kahn before they fought, even mention Reiko having an influence, so he made sure not to say anything incriminating. Shao Kahn's truth and origin would remain Raiden's burden to bear.
Sonya and Johnny Cage emerged from the collapsing structure first. Johnny, struggling to remain on his feet, took in all the horror he saw as he stared at the gruesome war at its peak. The earth was stained with the blood of hundreds of slaughtered warriors, turning the ground into a dark red sludge that oozed with every step Johnny took. He could not see faces in the crowd... All he saw were anger-filled bodies throwing themselves into the chaos and reveling in the destruction. Johnny could not stop staring at the carnage out of pure fear... Not of the images of the war before him, but fear of the sick enjoyment he felt for what he saw. Joining the fray for the sole purpose of satisfying this interest drowned his pain and lulled him into a trance, thinking of seeking the one warrior he met that understood his growing anger and darkness... Noob Saibot.
"Are you okay over there? Do you see anyone who needs help?" Johnny's trance was broken as he looked at Sonya behind him. He tried to respond with a witty catchphrase, but instead let out a moan of anguish. He experienced tremendous pain since Liu Kang won the fight, but now his legs collapsed beneath him. With the realms separating, he became vulnerable to death and felt the full affects of the laceration on his spine from fighting the Centaurians alone, and was completely paralyzed. He died during that battle, but his soul was blocked from entering the Netherealm when Earth and Outworld merged and was forced to return to his body, completely healed and indestructible. With the realms separating, his time had run out and his soul would be judged a second time. His eyes searched wildly for Noob Saibot, who Johnny believed understood the darkness he had to embrace to make it through life. Noob Saibot belonged in the Netherealm as much as Johnny Cage, and Johnny needed guidance to know how to survive in the next life.
Sonya ran to his side as he fell, and from the look in her eyes - the faintest glimmer of a deep respect and friendship - it became clear to Johnny that she would not leave him and would ruin any chance he had at being found by Noob. Johnny ignored the pain enough to plead, "Sonya, help the others... I just need to rest a bit, I'm fine. Just find Nightwolf and get yourself healed."
Sonya looked sternly at Johnny and said, "John Carlton," to subtly remind him that she knew everything about his life, "if there's one thing I can honestly say about you, it's that your acting blows. Now I'm helping you up and you're going to take it like a man."
"Jesus Christ, bitch, leave me behind! It's my curtain call here, m-my final performance, and I won't have you ruin your chance to get out of here alive just so that you could take care of me. Go, now!"
"Johnny, I'm a soldier first and your friend second, and if there's anything I've learned, it's never leave a man behind. The only reason I'm not there with Liu is because he's still with Raiden, and you need more help than either of them. For fuck's sake, you already died alone out there, and I refuse to let you die again in this fuckin' Hellhole. I'm taking you back to Earth and that's that!"
The ever-stubborn lieutenant picked up and carried the film star on her back. Without enough power to carry the disabled Cage and fly them to safety, Sonya used her Nejin technique to boost her physical strength and stamina to plough through Shao Kahn's minions. Not wanting to feel completely useless, Johnny funneled his shadow abilities to Sonya, enshrouding her in green shadows and propelling her forward into the onslaught. This would increase her strength and speed, and offer protection from oncoming attacks.
The rest of the Earthrealm warriors fought outside of the tower, holding out with all their might and struggling to survive against the Extermination Squads. Nightwolf could only heal their wounds so many times and his Raiden transformation no longer fooled and frightened their enemies. They were thankful that Sindel, Kitana, and Jade were able to lure away Shang Tsung and his personal army, otherwise they all would have been overcome by his sorcery. Sindel herself faced Shang Tsung, demonstrating her Goddess-like powers through paralyzing the great sorcerer with her deafening screams and resisting his life-stealing spells. Kitana proved herself as Sindel's daughter by subduing her opponents with every wave of energy that her steel fans emitted. She led her own small army of men still loyal to the fallen Edenian kingdom, and willing to fight to save Earthrealm and someday restore the fallen Edenia to its former glory. Jade had been preoccupied for some time with Reptile, who had become invisible during their bout, but even through his tricks, she overcame her former partner and gave him enough head trauma to damage his psyche for years to come.
This was the only time where one would think Reptile was in two places at once, for another being mimicked him on the battlefield to lure another opponent. He knew the script, knew the directions, and knew that he would eventually be ambushed by Khameleon. He would play the role of Reptile until the Raptor was captured by Sindel's men and when it would be too late for Khameleon to reveal the truth of their species.
The unexpected threat posed by Sektor and Cyrax was incredible and the duo alone dealt a devastating blow to Outworld's forces. Ermac fought against Sektor himself, the enigmatic ninja enjoying the challenge of facing a warrior with such destructive capabilities and pushing Ermac's souls to a degree they rarely channeled, while Cyrax dispatched cocky Outworlders who did not understand the danger of Earthrealm technology. Ironically, only Sektor logically considered Outworld a threat to the Lin Kuei and his pursuit of Sub-Zero, while Cyrax was forced to obey the new objective programmed into him by his former target.
Sub-Zero, slowly losing his ability to freeze from overuse, came face to face with several blood-thirsty Tarkata. "HUMAN," shouted a bold creature, "you covered in blood and smell of Baraka! Was smart, cunning, brave, noblest of us! You die slow from us!" Sub-Zero was unfortunate enough to be covered in Baraka's blood after witnessing his demise at the hands, or rather hat, of Kung Lao, but in any case, these instinctive creatures had an insatiable bloodlust fueled by revenge. Scorpion interrupted by harpooning a spear into a weakened Tarkata's head and setting it ablaze. Sub-Zero jumped back as the ninja pulled his spear and ripped off its head, swinging it like a fiery flail and smashing it against the head of a Centaur warrior, exploding and killing the creature. Sub-Zero, though thankful for the assistance, kept his distance from Scorpion, since the Hell-spawned ninja was very chaotic and changed sides in the heat of battle often enough.
Mavado directed orders to his men, leading the Red Dragon as a focused unit to attack the numerous Tarkata and Centaurians. Only few of them had been spared from Shao Kahn's magic, but those who survived the Extermination Squads fought with a determination unexpected from a group of mobsters and bandits without magical powers or mystical family ties. Hsu Hao's bionic heart could effectively kill Centaurians, a tremendous advantage for the Red Dragon warrior, making him an asset to the group and to Earthrealm. He pushed his body to its full potential to battle on.
The rest of Earth's fighters grew weary as their battles dragged on. There was only so much they could do against an army of inhuman monsters and they were all reaching their breaking points. Just a little bit longer, they all thought, just needed to hold out a little more to get a signal from Liu Kang or Raiden...
A tremor violently shook the ground as Kahn's screams echoed in the night. The spiraling energy on top of the tower had expanded and was now filling the sky with Earthrealm's souls. Every fighter felt comfort knowing Shao Kahn lost and that Earth's spirits were saved, and from this, felt rejuvenated to continue their fight. They were rewarded with Raiden, holding the tired Liu in his arms, soaring as fast as he could in mortal form, screaming, "GETTOTHEPORTAL!"
The kombatants saw the once open wasteland now as a massive section of an American city, covered in a blue haze and with a gigantic border of energy that shrank as more souls went through. The sight of home was enough motivation for Jax and Nightwolf; "Nightwolf man, I need you to cover me with the biggest shield you can make. I need to send some mother fuckers to Hell." With a quick chant and a wave of his hands, Nightwolf created a reflective shield to surround them both, and Jax used his remaining power to grow into a giant. He fell to his knees and smashed his great, metal arms into the ground, crushing hundreds of Tarkata and Centaurians and leaving a direct path to the portal. Their enemies could hardly fight with their projectiles useless against this duo, but one well-placed Centaurian kick to Nightwolf's head was more than enough to drop the shield and leave Jax more vulnerable. He only had time to brush away dozens more with his hands before shrinking back to his normal size; the damage he sustained was minimal, but he used what little energy he had left to carry the badly hurt Nightwolf and dash through the new path he made. He felt a powerful wind gust almost throw him off balance, but he ignored it, since he needed to help Nightwolf; had he paid more attention, he would have seen three people pass him at once.
Kabal, the fastest human alive, ran towards freedom, carrying Smoke and Stryker on his back. Because Smoke could alter his mass to become as light as air, Kabal was able to carry both heroes with little difficulty, despite the fatigue he had from all the fighting. He braced himself for Smoke to develop enough energy to teleport them through the portal, but their destinies would now diverge, as a well-placed enemy blast launched the three kombatants into the air, separating them. At the intense speed they travelled, all three were sent in different directions, with only Kabal flying painfully through the portal to Earthrealm, ironically, the first to be saved.
Raiden, flying above the heads of the Extermination Squad, dodged blades and blasts and rushed to get Liu Kang, who had lost consciousness, to the safety of the other side. The portal would only allow Earth's inhabitants to pass through so there was no danger from the Extermination Squads pursuing them, and none of their enemies were close enough to block it thanks to Jax's intervention, so Raiden saw no threat from the Squads. He felt his power increase as he neared the portal, and within moments, was on the other side, catching a brief glimpse of Kabal encircling the portal in hopes of seeing Smoke and Stryker. Raiden could sense the warrior's pain, and as a sign of support, laid Liu Kang onto the ground and threw lightning at various Tarkata, using every ounce of his slow-building power to keep a clear path. He tried to walk and teleport through but this portal's energy blocked him from entering Outworld again. He was unable to pass through now that he was on the other side, so this was all Raiden could do. Not long after this, Jax made it through and laid Nightwolf next to Liu Kang and bandaged their wounds. Kabal recognized Jax and regretfully chose to flee the area; it would do neither him, nor Smoke and Stryker any good if Kabal was arrested for his association with the Black Dragon clan.
Kurtis Stryker awoke on the ground, repeatedly stepped on by Tarkata as they made their way to kill the fleeing humans. Stryker grabbed his machine gun and fired wildly into the air, surprising several Tarkata and killing even more. He got to his feet quickly and scanned the crowd for the cyborg's trademark smoke bellowing from his body, but he sadly saw none. He turned his attention to surviving and escaping, but judged that the blast sent him too far away from the rapidly shrinking portal. He knew he had no chance to make it in time, but made the rational decision to search for any indication that either Smoke or Kabal were alive and still fighting somewhere in Outworld. When he saw two humans kicking and spinning into a crowd of Centaurians, Stryker joined the fray and lobbed a grenade into their direction. From the confusion following the small explosion, Stryker jumped on the back of a four-legged behemoth and strapped explosives to its head. As the Centaurian screamed, Stryker jumped away and signaled at the young kombatants to run away. Kai and Jarek shielded their eyes as the Centaur warrior disintegrated and more grenades around them went off and killed surrounding Tarkata and injured Centaurians. Jarek fell to his back and created a shockwave that forced the Centaurians off balance, giving Kai a chance to summon fireballs from the ground. The fireballs forced the Centaurians to rear up onto their hind legs, giving Stryker ample opportunity to spray the monsters with bullets at their weak undersides. As Kai helped Jarek off the ground, Jarek, noticing Stryker was still firing, called to him, "Yo pal, we're gettin' outta here, come on with us."
"Two of my buddies are still fighting out here, go on without me." Stryker had already made his decision, so he continued his search and left them. Jarek grabbed and held Kai in his arms, and using his mentor Kano's skills, cannonballed his way towards the portal and crossed through, noticed only by Raiden. Jarek quickly saw Jax treat Liu and Nightwolf, and decided it was time to leave. "Hey, look man, I gotta run," he told Kai. "Good luck with the whole 'warrior-monk' deal. If you ever need a safe spot to hide out or whatever, find the Black Dragon and tell `em Jarek sent ya."
"Thank you, Jarek," replied Kai, "I will not forget you and hopefully the next time we meet won't be with horsemen chasing us." They saluted each other and Jarek ran off before Jax could turn around and recognize him. Kai then went to Jax and asked if there was anything he could do to help.
Sub-Zero remained surrounded by Centaurians, unable to match them in strength and with his freezing ability useless against them. Desperate to get away, he resorted to using his brother's legendary Polar Blast technique, a massive ice blast that froze everything within a one kilometer radius for a short time. Sub-Zero concentrated the power to ensure it only hit and froze the Centaurians immediately surrounding him. Since these creatures showed remarkable resilience to his mastery of the cold, he had to invest more power than he ever had before to make sure they froze completely. Scorpion continued to attack the non-frozen ones to lure them away from Sub-Zero and allow him to slide away. As Sub-Zero turned his head to see how the ninja faired, Scorpion exploded into ashes and fire. His soul was forcibly removed from the Netherealm by Shao Kahn, and with Kahn's power fading, the path to the Netherealm was no longer blocked by the merging realms; Scorpion had to return to his lair in Hell while in the heat of battle. In any case, Sub-Zero needed to escape, and continued sliding under his opponents until he neared the portal, freezing a few Tarkata to help several other Chosen Warriors get to the portal to Earth, including a handful of Red Dragon members.
As Mavado and Hsu Hao led the Red Dragon clan to the rapidly shrinking portal that most of Earth's forces were using, another portal broke off from the bigger one, leading to Australia. As they approached that portal, Mavado halted Hsu Hao and pointed out Sonya Blade approaching. ``I saw Major Jackson Briggs of the Special Forces enter that pathway, and heading our way is a struggling Lieutenant Sonya Blade... Both of them have been vital in capturing the traitorous Black Dragons, so perhaps it is time one of us infiltrate their ranks... Wouldn't you agree?"
Hsu Hao nodded with understanding. He charged his cannon and attacked any opponents that neared Sonya and Johnny Cage. Mavado smiled, and crossed through the portal. To better appear as a defender of justice, Hsu Hao made sure to help any humans cross by attacking surrounding enemies. This was a great help to Kenshi, who had failed in his quest to find Shang Tsung, and since he had not mastered the gifts of his ancestor kings yet, struggled to keep the enemies at bay as he entered the same portal used by the Red Dragon, moments before it closed. Despite his selfish reasons, Hsu Hao saved many lives, an act of kindness he would never repeat.
Sonya, growing more exhausted with every step she took, and without enough power to use her Nejin boost again, continued towards the portal with Johnny Cage on her back. Johnny used every ounce of his shadow skills to fuel Sonya's stamina and delved deep into the darkest pits of his soul to extract the very limits of his demonic powers. For only a few seconds, the shadows and aura surrounding the two fighters changed from a bright green to a blood red, and Sonya felt a boost of terrible power flow through her veins as she tore through enemy lines and devastated all who crossed her path. She traveled so quickly and easily, she almost collided with the thundering Raiden and the few remaining Chosen Warriors who stayed alive throughout the whole war with Outworld, including Hsu Hao. When she made it to the other side, she quickly placed Johnny Cage on the ground near Jax, feeling unusually disgusted and sad for herself. The red aura remained around Johnny, growing larger as he howled with a rage never thought possible from the actor.
Jax could not awaken Nightwolf for help so he turned to Raiden for guidance. Raiden continued throwing lightning at the Kahn's militia, using more energy than he was gaining from the separation of the realms. He did not want to fight with anything less than his full power, but in the mortal realms, Raiden had his limits. As he saw the last few humans run through, followed closely by Sub-Zero, he turned his attention to Johnny Cage and his exuding demonic power.
Sub-Zero crossed through the portal, only to hear a mechanical voice shout ``SUB-ZERO!'' The voice was unfamiliar but he turned around and saw a purple Lin Kuei cyborg jumping above the Tarkata and Centaurian warriors. It only took a moment for Sub-Zero to realize that this cyborg had smoke coming from his body. "SMOKE!" Sub-Zero called to his closest friend. He held back tears of guilt at the thought that Smoke had sacrificed himself to lure Sektor away and paid the price with his humanity. Now it was Sub-Zero's turn to save his friend and bring him home.
Like the other two cyborgs, Smoke's programming was set to destroy Sub-Zero, but since his transformation had failed to repress his soul, he was not a slave to the machines within him. He launched his grapple harpoon at Sub-Zero, and with luck, Sub-Zero caught it in midair and used his icy grip to hold it for all his life was worth. Smoke would normally pull others towards himself, but concentrated on being pulled to make it to the portal. To make this much easier, Smoke modified his mass to become extremely light so that he would not drag on the ground.
While the other warriors tried to calm Johnny and revive Nightwolf, Sub-Zero continued to hold the spear. The portal rapidly shrank, and he could feel the intense pull of the harpoon... He was already tired with the fighting so to make sure he remained completely focused and unflinching, Sub-Zero willed his own arms and his legs to freeze to keep their grip and to keep them from buckling under the strain. "SMOKE," he shouted at the top of his lungs, "HURRY UP!"
Smoke could not move any faster and did not have enough energy to teleport through the portal, but still hoped against all odds that he would make it through, since the portal was already very small. He got closer and closer, nearing his friend and nearing absolute freedom from Outworld, but the last he saw of his home realm was the horrified, sad look Sub-Zero had on his face. The last thing any of the Earth warriors heard before the portal closed was Smoke calling out to Sub-Zero one last time over the sounds of the murderous Extermination Squads following close behind.
Sub-Zero stood paralyzed in front of where the portal once was, still clutching Smoke's spearhead. frozen in his grip. A single tear shed from hisa160;unscarred eye and froze as it rolled down his cheek. His arms and legs were covered in ice from how much strain he was under to hold onto the spear tightly. Cage's screams had finally subsided and his aura reduced in size, so more attention was given to Sub-Zero.
Kai, Sonya and Jax walked up to the former assassin, but before they could say anything, Sub-Zero lifted his heavy, frozen legs and stomped each of them onto the ground to remove the covering ice. He shrugged the rest of the ice off his arms, still clutching Smoke's spearhead,. He then brushed passed them to find Raiden, who was still transfixed on the red-glowing Johnny Cage.
Cage was growing delirious with fear and anger. He rarely used his full powers, only unleashing them accidentally in the second tournament, but this had become too much for him. His brief encounter with Noob, their silent understanding, was enough to trigger something in Johnny Cage and he needed to release all of it. The rage he had built for decades was finally coming out, and as the energy dissipated, he felt okay... He took one look at everyone standing around him and thought with satisfaction that he died with dignity, amongst friends, and as a human. He closed his eyes and waited for his sentence...
Raiden and the others were somber as they studied their poor friend's body. Liu Kang was still not awake, and Nightwolf was only now beginning to regain consciousness, not aware of what had transpired. Sonya held strong, but even she had cried a little. Another entry for her journal, or possibly her report to her superiors if they were still alive. Hsu Hao himself played the part of the grieving stranger well by reciting a prayer to honour passing souls. This did not go unnoticed by Sonya and Jax.
As both these agents asked Hsu Hao who he was, Kai asked Raiden what happened to this man who died. "That man," replied Raiden, "needed to set himself free of the original sin his family harboured over millennia. His family origins resided in the Netherealm, and only in death was he able to learn that his lineage did not change who he was. He may not have lived as a man to emulate, but he died a hero, and that in itself speaks volumes of the real Johnny Cage."
All of them looked at Raiden, then at Johnny's body with wonder. As each of them opened their mouths to ask Raiden more, he waved his hand and stated, "you'll all understand in due time, friends..." He trailed off and picked up Liu Kang's exhausted body, "but I'll have to answer those questions another day. We've all experienced great losses, and now we must help rebuild the world, and I must leave before the humans wake up and see me. I will contact you shortly so that we can all figure out what to do in a world where a160;people now know there are other worlds to explore." With those words, Raiden flew into the air with Liu Kang's body. He would be treated well in the Heavens and resume his training, but amongst Gods and heroes of legend. Raiden would first have to wake him up, then deal with the Elder Gods about how they need to be more involved when rules are bent and...
"Can you hear me, Raiden?"
Raiden stopped in mid-flight, lingering in the bright, cloud-like tunnel that lead to the Heavens. A voice came into his head, one he had never heard before. "Yes," he thought, "I hear you."
"Good," continued the mysterious voice, "because you need to listen to me. I've not been paying much attention for the past few years of my life, but I finally understand all. It was destiny for me to find out the truth about my life this way. A kaleidoscope of images and stories had to converge before this moment, and I wanted you to know I will become a key player once everything is straightened out."
Raiden was puzzled by this being, and had to ask, "who are you? What are you trying to tell me and why?"
"Like you, I can't help but be a little vague, even going so far as to say I don't understand it all myself, but it's safe to say I know what I was, I know who I am, and I know who I will become."
"And what will you become?"
"Your saviour... And that of the whole universe. The pieces of the puzzle just need to be nudged into the right places. For now, I will continue my own internal journey, and when I finish it, I will bring with me a New Dawn."
Raiden began to worry about this; the voice sounded like a fanatic, and no good could come from it, "maybe I can help you learn more about your true potential-"
"Nothing personal Raiden, but I've seen the help you offer, the lies you've spread, and the damage you've done with your kindness. Just ask the Scrivener... But that is enough from me. I will contact you in the future when I'm needed. Take care... Grandfather."
A nerve was struck within Raiden, and a sharp pain was in his head. He saw images of ghastly beings fighting, Raiden among them in his true form, battling a horrible creature that threatened to consume him and all he loved... A bolt of lightning lit up the sky and Raiden awoke from his trance, refreshed and curious. He did not know who this being was, but he felt somewhat reassured about what he had just seen. He felt a new sense of hope that made him as happy as one could be, which was what he needed for a long time. As Liu Kang awoke in his arms, Raiden continued towards the Heavens, renewed, refreshed, and ready to take on whatever would come his way.Author's Remarks: | |
A story based on what may have happened at the end of MK3. I wrote it to help establish links between the characters and help explain details and connections that will appear in future fanfics.
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Been working on it for a long while, glad that someone liked it. I'll be submitting a biography this week, maybe even two if I can re-read one and re-write the other.
But Hsu Hao's supposed to have been an informant for the Special Forces for as long as they've been hunting the Black Dragon, like all the way back to before MK1.
Continuity complaints aside, though, it's obviously very well written and I'm intrigued to see where some of the hints and mysterious elements go if you continue.
I dunno how concerned you were with following the canon since you're already going "Hey, why not have Kai, Jarek, etc. be spared from getting their souls stolen and fighting off the invasion too"...
But Hsu Hao's supposed to have been an informant for the Special Forces for as long as they've been hunting the Black Dragon, like all the way back to before MK1.
Continuity complaints aside, though, it's obviously very well written and I'm intrigued to see where some of the hints and mysterious elements go if you continue.
To be honest, I was hoping you'd read it, because I am very concerned about the canon in my fanfictions, it's the main reason why this one took me almost a year to finish.
I like adding and fleshing out much of the story that never was brought out, but with only minor changes, which is why I added Kai and Jarek. They only appeared in two games, and they were pretty forgettable, so making them participate in the war without encountering the other heroes gives them more importance because it implies they were Chosen like Sonya, Jax, and the other favourites, survived the Extermination Squads, and makes their appearances in later games that much more meaningful. It gives them more purpose and allows me to make them deeper than the way they were in MK4. Basically, I want to make it so that every character in the MK series has a purpose for being there, which is why to date, my Meat biography is the longest. Generally though, my writing doesn't follow the canon, as most of the stories I write are based on some short fanfiction bios I wrote before anything was known about MKD.
I hadn't read up on Hsu Hao for a while, didn't think his story was more fleshed out and that he and the SF were in contact prior to MK1. To be honest, that Red Dragon bit was a part I added within the last few weeks, just to tie in the importance of the Red Dragon clan. Big mistake on my part... I'll most likely re-write it when I can submit it to fanfiction.net, as well as some of the Kenshi part.
Ah. Well also, I wouldn't have used Kai because he was supposed to be a young and inexperienced student of Liu Kang's, new to the White Lotus, so he probably wouldn't have been a worthy fighter before MK4. But other than that, I suppose others who are obviously quite capable and powerful kombatants like Kenshi and the Red Dragons being secret chosen ones makes sense.
I had thought about that too, but then I thought just because he's not skilled now, doesn't mean he can't be considered important enough to be Chosen, which is why I thought he could be paired with a more experienced warrior to survive (Jarek [even though it's an unlikely pair, I will build on it]). I even thought of throwing Frost into the mix as a child, surviving the squads with her parents, but I doubt she was even old enough to be born at that point.
And it would probably come off as contrived if whichever parent she inherited her powers from actually knew about them and was made into some sort of noteworthy character. Raiden shouldn't just throw chosen one status at every single person on Earth with even the slightest inkling of metahuman power. It cheapens it. Raiden was using the last of his authority as a god to give his world a fighting chance, picking the absolute best fighters in the realm...not Joe Smith who could've had heat vision if only he'd discovered it sooner and trained more.
And it would probably come off as contrived if whichever parent she inherited her powers from actually knew about them and was made into some sort of noteworthy character. Raiden shouldn't just throw chosen one status at every single person on Earth with even the slightest inkling of metahuman power. It cheapens it. Raiden was using the last of his authority as a god to give his world a fighting chance, picking the absolute best fighters in the realm...
I never got the impression that Raiden himself picked who was to help save the world, just that these handful of beings were the lucky ones. I also never got the impression that Kai couldn't fight before joining the White Lotus, I figured it'd be better if he already knew how to do some things, and it was his goal to join the White Lotus.
As for the Frost thing, I had originally tried coming up with a lot of scenarios to make it work, including having her and her parents trying to survive by getting to the portal, or that Hsu Hao saves the girl to look good in front of the Special Forces, or that Mavado does it to show he's a more honourable person than, let's say, Kano (just to add to his character, not to trick anyone). I even thought about having her family at the time all have Kori powers and fighting, but being killed, and so Frost has to get by on her own... But you can already see that most of these ideas suck and don't have any logical way of working. Ultimately, it was just easier to not put her in.
It's not flat-out stated, but it does imply that Raiden personally picked out the ones who were spared, especially since his own bio/ending explicitly state the Elder Gods refuse to interfere and he has to keep taking matters into his own hands. Nobody was "lucky" or immune just out of some random chance, they wouldn't be called "chosen ones" unless someone had actually...y'know, chosen them. And every single Chosen One was picked because they were someone who had real power and potential to help end the invasion, in most cases because they were already an ally of Raiden's from MK1 or 2.
Also, Nightwolf used shaman magic to protect his entire reservation from the soul stealing and that place became the basecamp for the good guys, with Nightwolf himself or Raiden leading them there one by one to form a party.
It's not flat-out stated, but it does imply that Raiden personally picked out the ones who were spared, especially since his own bio/ending explicitly state the Elder Gods refuse to interfere and he has to keep taking matters into his own hands. Nobody was "lucky" or immune just out of some random chance, they wouldn't be called "chosen ones" unless someone had actually...y'know, chosen them. And every single Chosen One was picked because they were someone who had real power and potential to help end the invasion, in most cases because they were already an ally of Raiden's from MK1 or 2.
Also, Nightwolf used shaman magic to protect his entire reservation from the soul stealing and that place became the basecamp for the good guys, with Nightwolf himself or Raiden leading them there one by one to form a party.
That's a problem I have (and I have to admit, exploit), when it comes to the vagueness of some of these biographies/endings. I don't like making implications with regards to stuff that isn't outright stated, like in this case, Raiden choosing who Shao Kahn can't steal the soul of. I sort of like the idea that some people are just naturally chosen because they have something that puts them above the other people in the world, like the fact that they have "superpowers". Kind of what I was getting at with Johnny Cage (he was chosen was because his bloodline is special and unique, not just because he's one of Raiden's chums). It sort of puts more importance on the fact that these individuals are there for a reason that not even Raiden can control or understand. It's also a part I'm working on with the Scrivener concept.
I don't think I contradict the Nightwolf bit in this story, just have it so that while they are fighting at Kahn's Tower, they are technically on a more Outworld area that divides with Kahn losing his power.
But outside of that, I don't personally believe that chosen one-ness being random or a destiny that the gods have no say in makes any plot sense in this instance, because it's not like Shang and Kahn can't steal their souls EVER, it's just that someone had to take action and spare some warriors from the initial purge to be the rebellion and prevent Kahn from winning in a clean sweep.
I also wouldn't have given Cage's powers a "heritage" explanation. I believe most individuals in Mortal Kombat got their abilities by training in the martial arts and learning to tap into chi, and this is something any human can do if they work hard enough at it, and that the ones like the Lin Kuei whose abilities are genetic are the exception, not the rule. I do see why you would think of it though, looking to explain the "red shadow" moves. It's certainly a creative take. I'm not sure if Cage's powers being rage-fueled fits such a laid-back guy though.
Well, I don't personally believe that chosen one-ness being random or a destiny that the gods have no say in makes any plot sense in this instance, because it's not like Shang and Kahn can't steal their souls EVER, it's just that someone had to take action and spare some warriors to be the rebellion and prevent Kahn from winning in a clean sweep.
I also wouldn't have given Cage's powers a "heritage" explanation. I believe most individuals in Mortal Kombat got their abilities by training in the martial arts and learning to tap into chi, and this is something any human can do, and that the ones like the Lin Kuei whose abilities are genetic are the exception, not the rule.
Oh yeah, I'm not denying that some kind of action was taken, but with the way I'm writing these stories, I'm having it so that it's not Raiden responsible for said action. I'm making it so that even as a God, Raiden can't control who lives or dies, and has to work with what he gets. He's a puppet to fate, but he can see the strings.
As for the heritage versus training bit, meh. I got to be honest, I don't like the idea that anybody can learn how to fly like Sonya, or cause minor earthquakes like Jax, or create a trail of shadows with attacks like Cage with martial arts training. It makes the characters seem less special and unique if what they can do is something that any human can do with practice. Also, with the Cage bit, it makes him a more complex character. When we see him in the games, we think he's the happy, funny guy, but he's also an actor, he can be whatever suits his purposes. I wanted more depth for him.
Just a note, I'm not having it so that all the characters have Demon origins or something, as that'd be boring. I'm trying to make them all stand out in their own ways.
Anyone can be a surgeon too in theory, but that takes a full decade of training and a lifelong dedication, and some people just aren't smart enough for all that study or dexterous enough to handle a scalpel. Same thing with learning magic. (Or becoming Batman, lol)
It's more like...the comic book characters Iron Fist and Dr. Strange. They're not mutants, their parents weren't special, they're ordinary men who spent major portions of their life learning secret techniques and completing magical rites of passage to acquire powers. That's what I equate the likes of Liu Kang and Johnny Cage to.
Chi is, after all, supposed to be the inner power all men possess and martial artists who are very dedicated and spiritual like the real world Shaolin Monks do train to unlock the energy within themselves for various, albeit more mundane, uses. And Cage's bio in MK1 does state he's "trained by great masters around the world."
"Anyone can learn it" doesn't mean it's an easy thing to do so.
Anyone can be a surgeon too in theory, but that takes a full decade of training and a lifelong dedication, and some people just aren't smart enough for all that study or dexterous enough to handle a scalpel. Same thing with learning magic. (Or becoming Batman, lol)
It's more like...the comic book characters Iron Fist and Dr. Strange. They're not mutants, their parents weren't special, they're ordinary men who spent major portions of their life learning secret techniques and completing magical rites of passage to acquire powers. That's what I equate the likes of Liu Kang and Johnny Cage to.
Chi is, after all, supposed to be the inner power all men possess and martial artists who are very dedicated and spiritual like the real world Shaolin Monks do train to unlock the energy within themselves for various, albeit more mundane, uses. And Cage's bio in MK1 does state he's "trained by great masters around the world."
The issue I have with the whole they learned the attacks after many years bit is that during the first parts of MK, the characters are in their early to mid 20s, all with the exception of Kano who's 35. It's entirely possible that intense training and harnessing chi can make guys like Liu Kang powerhouses compared to people who haven't mastered it, but he defeats a 2000 year-old Shokan warrior, and the most-likely older sorcerer who trained him. Liu Kang was 24 when he beat them both. Even if Liu had started his training at a ridiculously young age, I find it hard to believe that just harnessing his chi would allow him the kind of skills and strength to deal with people who've most likely been mastering their chi for centuries. It's just too far-fetched, even if he was trained by Bo' Rai Cho.
Though Cage's bio does state he trained with martial artists around the world, he's still performing feats that no martial artist has ever been documented doing before. And besides, the only other characters who're documented as even having shadow abilities like Cage are Nightwolf, who delves in magic, Shao Kahn, an evil warlord sorcerer monster thing with great magical powers, and to some extent Liu Kang (Red Bicycle Kick), and it was only in one game.
I liked playing with the idea that maybe Johnny Cage and Shao Kahn have similar abilities because they are both dark characters, and perhaps the reason some of these characters can do shadow-based attacks is because they have some darkness they can channel, something deeper than we see in the games. Of course, I'm not doubting you're right about some of the stuff being as "simple" as they've trained and mastered techniques for years, but as the writer of these fanfictions, I find that that's not enough to explain some things in the MK mythos.
But Cage, Sonya, and the other "regular" humans aren't nearly powerful enough that they need an "excuse" for why they can use chi. I hate to use a Dragonball Z reference, but to me, they're all the Krillins. They can handle the henchmen but they'd be no match against a boss (which is exactly what happened in DA/Deception, even the leader-type heroes, Kung Lao and Kitana, couldn't beat Shang and Quan) Krillin wasn't an alien and he didn't have to train until he was an old man to get there, but by being taught by the right master, he learned to fly and shoot energy blasts, albeit he was far, far less powerful than the truly special characters. That's just the rules of magic in that world, and MK basically works the same.
I'm not saying that the secrets of chi are common knowledge or that every single monk at the Shaolin Temple should know how to make fireballs, mind you. I'm still talking about techniques that are "secret", that only a Bo' Rai Cho or a Raiden can teach you and only if you prove yourself worthy to learn...but still. It's a matter of knowledge and discipline, not time spent. And you don't have to be born special, that would just result in everyone having an origin story that revolves around who their ancestors are, and while it works for Liu and Kung Lao and the Sub-Zeros, it would be contrived if everyone had one.
Also, personally, I think of Shadow moves as a "super-speed" effect, not some sort of Akuma-style "evil power" effect, so I guess I don't really see a need for those who do it to have anything in common. And like I said, I just don't see Johnny as a "bottled rage" kinda guy.
Speaking of which, Nightwolf does a Shadow charge too, but he's about as pure and peaceful as you can get. And while his power source, using shaman magic to tap into the spirit world, is similar to Kahn's power source, stolen souls...neither is similar to "my ancestors were demons"...so I'm not sure I see the connection to Johnny you were going for?
Cage, Sonya, and the other "regular" humans aren't nearly powerful enough that they need an "excuse" for why they can use chi. I hate to use a Dragonball Z reference, but to me, they're all the Krillins. They can handle the henchmen but they'd be no match against a boss (which is exactly what happened in DA/Deception, even the leader-type heroes, Kung Lao and Kitana, couldn't beat Shang and Quan) Krillin wasn't an alien and he didn't have to train until he was an old man to get there, but by being taught by the right master, he learned to fly and shoot energy blasts, albeit he was far, far less powerful than the truly special characters. That's just the rules of magic in that world, and MK basically works the same.
That's my problem with some of the aspects of the story, and it's one that is repeated in a lot of stories. We have to either assume that the heroes are super strong and Raiden only asks for their help because he doesn't need more than a bunch of strong Earth warriors to take on an army of Tarkata (excluding Raiden himself, they were 5 people against an army and two sorcerers), or we have to assume that their enemies are weak and less skilled despite being trained militias/four-armed Dragon based creatures/bullet-proof behemoths/psychotic bladed monsters and can always be defeated by people who are basically only just strong enough to overcome a bunch of them. It's this imbalance that bothers me a lot because it's cheap and it makes it seem like nobody knows what they're doing. It also makes it seem like either Raiden overestimates his and his allies's strengths or underestimates his enemies. It always bothered me that even Raiden couldn't beat Quan Chi and Shang Tsung despite his being a God, so I'd much rather have it in my stories that these people are the best of the best that the Earth has to offer and that they are facing the best and most dangerous enemies they can only imagine. It's either that, or I have to make do with the fact that without Liu Kang, they stand no chance, like they did in the Deception story.
With that being said, none of my bios/stories take into account anything after MKDA because I started writing most of them before Deception came out, and I was thoroughly disappointed with how Deception and beyond turned out.
I'm not saying that the secrets of chi are common knowledge or that every single monk at the Shaolin Temple should know how to make fireballs, mind you. I'm still talking about techniques that are "secret", that only a Bo' Rai Cho or a Raiden can teach you and only if you prove yourself worthy to learn...but still. It's a matter of knowledge and discipline, not time spent. And you don't have to be born special, that would just result in everyone having an origin story that revolves around who their ancestors are, and while it works for Liu and Kung Lao and the Sub-Zeros, it would be contrived if everyone had one.
Oh yeah, like I said, I won't have that done for everyone, just a select few. I like the idea of being able to explain how and why they have specific special abilities, but don't think I'll make everyone a Harry Potter or Goku.
Also, personally, I think of Shadow moves as a "super-speed" effect, not some sort of Akuma-style "evil power" effect, so I guess I don't really see a need for those who do it to have anything in common. And like I said, I just don't see Johnny as a "bottled rage" kinda guy.
I never saw it as a super-speed thing, but it's entirely possible that it is just that. I just thought I'd play up the fact that maybe Johnny Cage isn't the happy-go-lucky guy we think he is, especially after facing the tortures of war, and being killed (obviously despite that retcon, I used it in writing his biography). I wanted to emphasize that he is a good actor and can be whatever he wants us to believe.
Speaking of which, Nightwolf does a Shadow charge too, but he's about as pure and peaceful as you can get. And while his power source, using shaman magic to tap into the spirit world, is similar to Kahn's power source, stolen souls...neither is similar to "my ancestors were demons"...so I'm not sure I see the connection to Johnny you were going for?
Think back to what we knew about Nightwolf back in MK3. All we knew from his biography is that he's a historian and knows Shaman magic. Like I said, these stories ignore MK Deception, and there's no mention of Nightwolf in DA Konquest (that I can recall at least), so aside from his MK3 bio and ending, we don't know much about his character except that he wanted to help his own people and the other good guys. Heck, in his ending, he and the Native Americans wind up ruling the world (peacefully, I know), you have to have a lot of ambition to go from wanting your land back to becoming a global leader. Does that make him evil, or even slightly evil? Of course not, but it doesn't mean he's an altruist either. I'm just showing that in my works, nobody is perfectly good or completely evil, because life isn't black and white.
But there's logically going to be a huge gap between "best human" and "best Outworlder" because the two societies are so different. Earth is the modern world, people stopped believing in magic and embraced science and technology, so magic became rare. Learning it at all is what makes them so special as fighters. But in Outworld, the supernatural is part of everyday life. It's simultaneously a more primitive culture and a more powerful one, and hell, most of Jax's story has been trying to catch his science up to be the equal of magic, inhancing his strength, inventing portal tech, etc.
Some characters can jump that gap. Sonya and Johnny Cage do not deserve to be among those characters in my opinion. If nobody's the Krillin, then nobody's the Goku either. You gotta have main cast and you gotta have supporting characters.
Now Raiden, Liu Kang, Sub-Zero, maybe Kung Lao with the right buildup, these are the guys who do have something more to their origins than just "I can throw chi", and could logically take down boss characters, and should have defeated the Deadly Alliance in theory...but sometimes the best just isn't good enough. Why should the good guys win every time? You have to look at the circumstances.
Quan Chi had the amulet, a magical artifact containing the power of an Elder God. Albeit, he can only use a portion of that power, that's still a big deal.
Shang had stolen Liu's soul, and he was cheating by having constant access to the soulnado to restore himself.
Sub-Zero couldn't even make it to the battle because Frost's betrayal interrupted the trip.
It came down to a two-on-one and why can't sorcery at a level as high as Shang and Quan are be the equal to lesser godhood? Raiden's nowhere near omnipotent, he's not THE god, he's A god. All the word means for him is he doesn't age, people worship him, and he has control over one measly element.
As far as Nightwolf's political aspirations, I'm not quite sure how that answers my question about him, Cage, and Kahn all having Shadow moves.
Y'know, I feel awkward arguing this long about something as inconsequential as Johnny Cage's origin story in a fan fic, though. You're welcome to your opinion, I was just wondering about the motivation behind it and I know that now, so it's like...that's that. Anything more feels redundant.
Well of course they're the best fighters on Earth. That's right there in the plot, that's how the first seven got invited to the tournament.
But there's logically going to be a huge gap between "best human" and "best Outworlder" because the two societies are so different. Earth is the modern world, people stopped believing in magic and embraced science and technology, so magic became rare. Learning it at all is what makes them so special as fighters. But in Outworld, the supernatural is part of everyday life. It's simultaneously a more primitive culture and a more powerful one, and hell, most of Jax's story has been trying to catch his science up to be the equal of magic, inhancing his strength, inventing portal tech, etc.
Some characters can jump that gap. Sonya and Johnny Cage do not deserve to be among those characters in my opinion. If nobody's the Krillin, then nobody's the Goku either. You gotta have main cast and you gotta have supporting characters.
Now Raiden, Kung Lao, Sub-Zero, these are the guys who do have something more to their origins than just "I can throw chi", and could logically take down boss characters, and should have defeated the Deadly Alliance in theory...but sometimes the best just isn't good enough. Why should the good guys win every time? You have to look at the circumstances.
Quan Chi had the amulet, a magical artifact whose true power is that of an Elder God.
Shang was cheating by having constant access to the soulnado to restore himself.
Sub-Zero couldn't even make it to the battle because of Frost.
It came down to a two-on-one and why can't sorcery at a level as high as Shang and Quan are be the equal to lesser godhood? Raiden can't rewrite reality. The word "god" doesn't automatically mean he should be invincible, all it means is he doesn't age, people worship him, and he has absolute control over one measly element.
As far as Nightwolf's political aspirations, I'm not quite sure how that answers my question about him, Cage, and Kahn all having Shadow moves.
Y'know, I feel awkward arguing this long about something as inconsequential as Johnny Cage's origin story in a fan fic, though. Like, it doesn't hurt anything to just have a difference of opinion and drop the whole thing.
Never thought about it like that for the Deadly Alliance against Raiden, or that Raiden may not be as powerful as what I would assume a God should have, so that's an interesting take on it. When I think God, I really do think highly of the kind of power he should have, even in mortal form.
As for the Nightwolf, Cage, and Kahn thing, I was just referring to stuff for my stories, nothing that could actually explain why they have similar abilities in the canon, so let's just not get into that anymore, as there's no point. How I interpret the shadow abilities already differs drastically from your view, so let's just agree to disagree? It's also something I don't want to outright say, as it is part of an eventual fanfic I'm writing that explains everything from the beginning, including the war for Earthrealm between Shinnok and Raiden.
And if you want to stop the discussion, that's cool. Never thought of it as a heated argument or anything, and I enjoyed this talk with you. Perhaps I can use something from these posts to have my stories make more sense in the future for the guys who know the story as well as you.