Its actually pretty good, but you should of added blood. It would of been more awesome. And yea, the whole action render thing, just with kitanna, she should of been in a better position of throwing something. But its not bad. Maybe you could also showed a better angle.

the render itself don't need gore, as sonya is dodging the fan [bad backflip pose]

Is that the ship from Tomb Raider Underworld? Is this done in XNA? Anyway, it's a very cool render - perhaps the fan should be gone past Sonya a little to make it more obvious that she's dodging it? Good work anyway.

^yes , it is Natla's Ship from Tomb Raider Underworld and yes it is XNA lara

Sonya should have been stretching out, as if she was to make a backwards cartwheel. The way she has her legs bend like that looks like she is being knocked over.

However, a nice piece. Kitana's pose looks good. ^^

I love this art, though I must say it does like like Sonya is being hit by the fan.

Either way, great work JV.

i should have put sonya's model a little lower

This is awesome! I really Kitana's pose. The way Sonya's posed, if she is jumping, it looks like she's still jumping up, so it looks like she did, or is about to get hit by the fan. Usually for 3d characters, it's best to use reference for the character's poses, I think a good place is gettyimages.com . that place has a huge stock of images and movies that could help you with a backflip pose. Good job, nice render.