See my comment on your Rain design.

This doesn't scream "Havik" to me at least. It screams "Scorpion at GWAR concert."

The completely exposed skull takes away from what made Havik unique, which was that only his nose and mouth are was eaten away. It gave him a very unique look in both costumes. I can see the clothing screaming something along the lines of "chaos" or "anarchy" but it's a real stretch. His clothes are too earthly, and look like he robbed a Hot Topic.

The leather jacket, the pants, the boots, it doesn't work for him. He's supposed to be something like a cleric (read: battle priest/paladin) of chaos. So his outfit should reflect that with more loose garments, bell sleeves, sashes, and over all a bit looser clothing. Skin tight doesn't do it.

Keep in mind this is just my opinion. You're always free to dismiss it. It's a nice try though.

This is real nice, As a picture this gets a 5/5

But as a Havik design it does not, like the above said, its not raely havik over exposting the skull and all.

Clothes are sweet though, Me likey. 4/5