Game Concept: Mortal Kombat Unleashed
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12/09/2006 09:46 PM (UTC)by
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CrispyDragon
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04/18/2006 04:34 PM (UTC)
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DarkRyder80
05/04/2006 04:24 PM (UTC)
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Really good 5/5. I like the story. You killed off alot of people though. Dont think Armaggedon gonna cut that much off.wink
thanks glad you liked it, wink

i admit i killed alot of characters off but i only kept the ones that i could fit into my story or even more would've died tongue
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DarkRyder80
05/04/2006 07:49 PM (UTC)
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Yeah. Like how you did the Arcade Version with the Bosses.
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Hikari715
05/04/2006 08:10 PM (UTC)
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Wow, pretty cool. 5/5
Hikari715 Wrote:
Wow, pretty cool. 5/5


Glad to see you liked it, but do you mind telling me what you liked or anything you would change?
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RaisnCain
05/04/2006 11:27 PM (UTC)
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FRIKKING YES! Awesome CrispyDragon, very through I love it, I like the idea of Attack of the Realms and TAG Kombat how awesome is that! That is one of the best ideas ever. All of this hard work will catch the eye of a Mortal Kombat maker if they ever run by this! wink On a scale of 1-10 I give it a 10!
thanks for the awesome review RaisnCain, i've been aching to see an MK game that features an extra mode such as my 'Attack of the Realms' concept.

NE1 else got an opinion on my game concept?
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mioshi
05/15/2006 04:51 PM (UTC)
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Yeah... idiot try not to kill all the good girls and all the black paople how in the world did Jax, Kai, and Tanya die you idiot.., ugh you guys make me furious..confused
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Yeah... idiot try not to kill all the good girls and all the black paople how in the world did Jax, Kai, and Tanya die you idiot.., ugh you guys make me furious..confused


It wasn't a race or a sexist thing, that thought never occurred to me, i only kept the characters i could fit into my story and am a little disappointed that i had kept too many. This is after armageddon where i forsee alot of characters dying or ending their stories. I wanted to show people were moving on with their lives and spent alot of time on the bios expanding their stories the way i wanted them to.

Also i added 25 new characters and can assure you quite a few are female and/or 'black' -( though i dislike that description as i greatly detest labelling of any kind). i haven't written any of their bios and don't plan to now that it has become obvious that MK:A is going a different course than i predicted.

I find it kinda insulting how your effectively accusing me of racism and this has affected your opinion of my work. I would rather you judged it for its content as opposed to the superficial aspects of it. I spent alot of time on it and it's evident you haven't read it for what it is (a game concept) but read into irrelevant parts of it.

If you have an opinion on my actual idea than i greatly look forward to hearing it but don't call me an idiot based on false facts.
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RaisnCain
05/17/2006 10:30 PM (UTC)
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Hey stop being mean to CrispyDragon, he worked hard on this . . . and it is a masterpiece . . . don't listen to anything they say CrispyDragon . . . I would like to see you write something like this mioshi . . . grin
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TIPSY
05/30/2006 08:45 AM (UTC)
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Very well done, I liked your story and the classic Arcade style. I didn't mind some of the characters being killed off, some of them were gay anyways. Great job, and keep at it.
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NickScryer
05/30/2006 02:14 PM (UTC)
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Emperor Reptile!!
I like this idea very much!!
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sc0rpion4ever
06/10/2006 02:58 PM (UTC)
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CrispyDragon, you have clearly crossed the line with this MK game concept... What I meen is you have clearly taken this game to the next level. Though agreed that you did knock off quite a few characters, I beleive the new characters will make up for all their deaths. The story is unbeleivably good, I can't help but anticipate this games arrival if it where to launch. Also the character bios are very good, this would be history in the making amongst all MK games. very well done. Clearly deserves 5/5. furious



It was good. I could tell you put alot of effort into this. 5/5
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theshredder13
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how many kookie kould a good kook kook if a good kook kould kook kookie?

07/25/2006 08:13 PM (UTC)
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very good there alot of love in your story lol 13/13wink
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Psyko
09/04/2006 05:05 AM (UTC)
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I really liked what you did with some of the less popular characters. You have a great knack for storytelling and getting in your characters' head. My only gripe would be that a lot of what happens contradicts what we know to have happened so far in the mythos. But other than that, great work!!!
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09/04/2006 10:31 AM (UTC)
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contains some enormous typos..cantaurians and not centaurs,
blapshemous not blaphemes (or if as a verb-to-noun process blasphemers, blasphemees), -sigh. onto story.

the plot revolves around the most handy, and obvious concepts. This is bad, makes the whole thing predictable. And if the bios are predictable,
and only then do the plot twists come, it will feel awkward. if you want a good lpot twist, signify it with something relevant beforehand.


a visual example would be the old MKA render, with Reptiles chest-eye. Later we had to click the eye of the dragon to access the rednder content.
Dunno if it was intentional by Midway, but such small nichés can save a
good piece of art.

So far I can only rate it 2/5
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themkwarrior
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I made this! Yay!

Guess who's back!

09/04/2006 08:28 PM (UTC)
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That is a good idea, but i dont think you should kill that many characters.
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RaisnCain
09/05/2006 12:14 AM (UTC)
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themkwarrior Wrote:
That is a good idea, but i dont think you should kill that many characters.


You would be shocked at how many characters will die after MKA.
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ETHER
09/05/2006 05:31 AM (UTC)
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Good work Crispy. I really like the character bios. Better than what Midway puts out.
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Depikt
12/05/2006 12:23 PM (UTC)
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I like the idea of MK Unleashed that you've posted here. I honestly think it would be a great continuence from MK Armageddon. However, I think that some of your ideas need more confining. Eg. With the tag team set up, me and my Brother have thought along the lines of that since noob-smoke from Mk Deception, since depending on your alliances (evil, neutral, good) and with the rest of the Mortal Kombat History, I think it would be more appropriate if only certain characters could 'team up'. This would also allow to make moves for those teams. Eg. Smoke / Sub-Zero (according to your storyline). This would make the gameplay rather chaotic and more-so fun. I hope you get back to me on this because I would love to help you finalise MK Unleashed.

-Depikt
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Arctic
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12/08/2006 02:35 AM (UTC)
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CrispyDragon wrote:New:

Artic Neushing


LOL! tongue
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SickFreak
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Why don't you have a seat?

12/08/2006 02:43 AM (UTC)
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Dong Shuey

Is he like a donkey?
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Dong Shuey
Is he like a donkey?


Actually guys, those are two seperate characters, just messed up in the submission.

Abacus
Amy Harman
Artic
Bawli
Bing
Carly
Cassius
Dong
Hinoka
Jann Fu
Jyr Shyu
Kumari
Lauren
Meizen
Mongju
Neushing
Ohana
Pebble
Scott Lee
Shany Ang
Shuey
Shyrtiaw
Woo Chee
Yeh Shoou
Yinhu

But yea I agree some of those names are pretty humorous. I gave up on this concept a long time ago and didn't know it was still receiving replies. If I have the free time later I'll answer some of these replies. =/

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