Pretty good


You should try and not make it look so messy though, with all those colors. It just looks kind of muddy.

So the Drawing is pretty good, but the coloring needs to be cleaner.

i wanted the coloring to be dirty, and dark. i never really intended it to be clean.

buterbals113085 Wrote: i wanted the coloring to be dirty, and dark. i never really intended it to be clean.

Pretty good. I like the color in the backround I think it sets the pic perfectly for the emotional turmoil that Kitana is going through. I really like it. Like the Coat too. I would just work on your figure drawing a bit more. You have potential to be real good. I hope you don't stop submitting. Why? Because you got a few low scores? Don't let it bother you. Your drawings are your own. How you interpret the characters. Everyone has their own style. A pic I did of Sindel that I thought was pretty good a while back didn't recieve a very high score like I expected it to but I didn't quit. I would like to see more from you. 4/5.

TomTaz Wrote: buterbals113085 Wrote: i wanted the coloring to be dirty, and dark. i never really intended it to be clean. Pretty good. I like the color in the backround I think it sets the pic perfectly for the emotional turmoil that Kitana is going through. I really like it. Like the Coat too. I would just work on your figure drawing a bit more. You have potential to be real good. I hope you don't stop submitting. Why? Because you got a few low scores? Don't let it bother you. Your drawings are your own. How you interpret the characters. Everyone has their own style. A pic I did of Sindel that I thought was pretty good a while back didn't recieve a very high score like I expected it to but I didn't quit. I would like to see more from you. 4/5.

Thanks alot i really aprreciate it. Do you think its an improvement on my last piece?

Absolutely. No question.

Nicely done. I think she wouldve looked better without the jacket though. Nonetheless, i still like it.

the reason i gave her the jacket was because that way she could hide herself. She wouldnt want people to recognize her, she kinda feels ashamed. If i didnt draw something to cover her up she wouldnt look that mysterious.

I think you did a good job. You do better than me. I gave you 5/5.

buterbals113085 Wrote: the reason i gave her the jacket was because that way she could hide herself. She wouldnt want people to recognize her, she kinda feels ashamed. If i didnt draw something to cover her up she wouldnt look that mysterious.

The colors are fine with me. The thing is that a coat feels too out of place with the character. A cloak of some kind would have been much better.

When I see a coat I only think Matrix or westerns. A cloak has connotations of mystery and conceilment. You did give it a hood, but it's still a coat.

I like the composition and the color expresses the mood really well. Good job.

Rating: 3.5/5

Le Dragon Fantome

Sonya143 Wrote: I think you did a good job. You do better than me. I gave you 5/5.

Thanks alot! it really means alot to me! Im really happy people liked this way better. .

ghostdragon Wrote: buterbals113085 Wrote: the reason i gave her the jacket was because that way she could hide herself. She wouldnt want people to recognize her, she kinda feels ashamed. If i didnt draw something to cover her up she wouldnt look that mysterious. The colors are fine with me. The thing is that a coat feels too out of place with the character. A cloak of some kind would have been much better. When I see a coat I only think Matrix or westerns. A cloak has connotations of mystery and conceilment. You did give it a hood, but it's still a coat. I like the composition and the color expresses the mood really well. Good job. Rating: 3.5/5 Le Dragon Fantome

Thanks for your great comments.

do i get any dragon points?

Very good drawing. I love the way you put all the colors in. Kitana could look better though. Overall it's excellent.

You did a perfect job with the "dark style". You definitely captured the sad imagine you want so much in Kitana, and the one I enjoy a lot.

I like that STYLE very much. She looks dark and sad. Very good.

5/5!

thats picture is good.jacket or not it still looks good it would be cool to see kitana dark

queve Wrote: You did a perfect job with the "dark style". You definitely captured the sad imagine you want so much in Kitana, and the one I enjoy a lot. I like that style very much. She looks dark and sad. Very good. 5/5!

Queve summed it up for me. I think it's a nice piece and unique in style.

4/5

You should check your replies!!! I PM you already what they wrote. I like the style of this pic. Very nice. 3/5

Kitana looks dark like she was in Mk2. Much better!

Thanks everyone again, for your great comments. Im sure they will help me improve even more. Thanks.