Cool,reminds me of Al's robot armor from Fullmetal Alchemist.

5/5

I don't see the resemblance...

Honestly, you've tried to cram too much detail into this picture. You actually start to lose general shapes (such as a leg or arm) when you go into this much detail. It's not because they disappear, it's that the eye is drawn away from the overall image trying to decipher every little line to figure out what they are. It's sensory overload because there is too much activity to take in.

So while the boots look very cool, or the fact that the left arm is missing the outer covering is a nice touch, thats all you see when you peer at this instead of taking the image in as a whole. When you do try to view the entire picture, it tends to run together and become a jumble of blurry looking lines that outlines the general shape of a humanoid.

My advice if you continue to do your drawings with this much detail is, use a lot of foreshortening so that you can cover up some of that lucious detail and save the viewer the headache of trying to decipher what's going on.

I'm not saying that it isn't good, it's just not the most appealing or appeasing iimage.

Lucious? I think you mean "Ludicrous".

I see what you mean. . .I guess, at least from the scan. It looks much different in person. . .especially since it's bigger and sharper.

Haha, I do mean "lucious" I just spelled it incorrectly.

Luscious - richly adorned; luxurious: luscious furnishings.

The detail looks good. It's just distracting.

It looks positively sharp! Ouch! Great detail. But crappy scanners will ruin the world!

4/5

it looks great, a lot of detail, but unfortunately its hard to see the detail, although there's a lot there.

still, great job. 4/5

Hmmmm its alrtie, it honestly isnt a good picutre of Smoke, but its a good picture. Just not of Smoke. 4/5

it's a little sloppy lookin', but I like your attention ot detail. nice work: 4/5.

4/5. I really like it. It's like a cybernetic Hotaru.

Oh my God! That is about ten times better than fugly Smoke in the games, with the invisible skin, apparently non existent mechanics, and stupid helmet! (Nice one, Beran... Pssshyeah)

And yes! I see a Seidan vibe there!
If only roboto Smoke were captured by Seido, instead of becoming an intangible mass of swirling nano electronics. Then maybe he would've had a chance to be HOT~!!!