I like it.

Yo, can I try coloring your lineart?

It looks good. I like how you added shading to give it depth. It's definitely an improvement over your initial coloring job, and is a good compromise between that and the original sketch. Still, because of the lack of texture, particularly on the spear, I can't shake the feeling that it's actually a step down from the sketch, even if it is so much cleaner. Maybe it's just the fact that hatching seems to take more skill and effort that digital shading.

I still think you should change the color of the fire on his skull. The pale whitish yellow you colored it just doesn't fit for fire.

4.5/5