Chosen Vampire Nitara
I am Nitara, representative of the restored Vampire nation. Before I state my involvement in the Rise of the Dragon King, I would simply like to point out that our males are not Casanovas, our females are not succubuses, we do not magically levitate, we do not transform into bats, cats, or rats, we do not value blood above all else, and our bites do not turn other beings into mindless drones or other Vampires - we are a people, not a disease, and not a movie or novel clicha233;.
Though my kind evolved from monstrous creatures that fed on the flesh, blood, and essence of countless species, we are much more democratic, intelligent beings than one would think we are... We became as such when we began feeding on sentient creatures only. As we drain the blood of our victims, we also drain away some of their essence, allowing us to obtain a limited amount of their knowledge and characteristics; these immediate changes allow us to become more adapted to dealing with our prey and predators, and since these changes are genetic, the next generation benefits from these changes as well. As we progressed to feeding off members of higher food-chains, we became better, smarter predators, reaching our peak when we began hunting the best of species only, until we decided to specialise on Edenians and modern day Humans, the smartest of beings in existence - both seconded only by us.
I demonstrated the Vampire craftiness through careful manipulation; not only did I succeed in helping bring down a corrupt regime, I also gave a Raptor new incite about his kind, and restored my home realm to its former glory thanks to a machine who helped me in return for my sending him back to his home. I may have caused the warrior to be stranded in the first place, but I knew that he was capable of retrieving the orb that bound my realm to Outworld, and my needs surpassed his.
After we began feeding on Edenians, the Vampires were considered the intellectual scholars of the Ancient Worlds, when the realms were ruled by different deities. When these deities passed on their legacy to the current Elder Gods, an eventual war broke out between two of them, who, not realising how much power they were capable of summoning, almost destroyed the entire universe. People are often reminded that the battle was waged because of the new world, Earth, and remember how it was plunged into centuries of darkness, but the stories regarding the affects to the other realms are forgotten. Their documentation exists, but was completely lost when the Vampire realm was invaded by the Outworld dictator Trom and his enforcers, and this knowledge was turned into myth when my people could no longer prove the war ever happened beyond Earthrealm. Apparently, those documents, and even older ones that contained the information about the Ancient World, are still in Outworld... In any case, we managed to recuperate some of this knowledge and create new documents, but without our ancient libraries, there will always be gaps, and the story will always focus on Earthrealm, the Humans, and the Raptors.
Several Vampires were surprised when their crystals brought them back to lands that they had not set foot on for thousands of years - too long had we teleported from realm to realm, in order to avoid harmful sun rays created by the various yellow and red stars of other worlds. Our home world's sun was special, as it was a large, blue star, one with rays that our kind had specifically adapted to, so we all took in moments to bask in the only sunlight we've ever seen in our entire lives. We knew that we had a lot of work ahead of us, and decided to at least enjoy the warmth before we proceeded to rebuild our world.
We tracked down and informed our kind that our realm was restored and that it needed our help to become as great as it once was. Our priorities were in restoring our libraries and re-evaluating everything we have learned over the last millennia, then re-establishing hospitals and food stores for times of hardship. Even Khameleon, an ally I made years before Shinnok tried to take Edenia, came to our aid, and remained in our realm to help. Normally, she would have been a decent meal, as Raptors and other Zaterran creatures were once considered a tasty delicacy, but her knowledge about Shao Kahn and how he merged the realms was enough to grant her asylum and my protection from any of her enemies, including my fellow Vampires. Weeks passed as we worked hard to rebuild one primary city, and things were going extremely well for us, until a portal opened and the mechanical man, Cyrax, stepped foot onto our soil.
At first, the other Vampires, curious of the stranger, flocked around him, but when Cyrax used his explosive teleport to reach me, he sent my people scurrying away faster than an army of ants in a rain storm. Cyrax stood in front of me and bowed the same way he when last we saw one-another, and he explained to me the peril that Earthrealm, Outworld, and Edenia are in now thanks to the resurrection of the Dragon King, who was once a just ruler, but is now making allegiances with demons and machines.
My people saw this as an opportunity for the Vampire nation to re-establish itself as a power once again by aiding the winning side of the war... But aiding which side would be more in our favour? My Vampire brethren looked to me for advice, and using what knowledge remained about Onaga and his ever-changing character, we decided that it would be in our best interest to side with Earthrealm, Outworld, and Edenia. Onaga has taken to keeping Oni and machines under his employ, and if what Cyrax says is true, leaving those two races in power would equal the complete extinction of our main food sources; the machines changing other beings into machines would cost us our only means of sustaining ourselves, and with the voracious hunger of the Oni, we would have to compete with them for any food. We could feed off of Oni and other demons, but without a balanced diet of Humans and Oni, that would mean a radical change in our appearance and mentality, and the eventual degradation of our kind, going from superior scholars, strategists, and fighters to dumb warriors with minds only on our stomachs instead of our long-term survival.
I told Cyrax that we would help him and his people, but for a price. Cyrax proposed a deliciously wonderful idea that would benefit my people for a generation and would help us in rebuilding our realm. We all readily agreed to join Earthrealm in the fight against Onaga.
The elite of my kind and I chose to go with Cyrax to help in the war while the rest were to rebuild the city as best as they could for the moment. Khameleon chose to come as well, hoping that her skills would be of use in the war. Considering we had not eaten much while reconstructing our realm, Cyrax teleported us to a high-security prison somewhere on Earth to dine on some of the sleeping individuals in order to remove the temptation of feeding on our brothers in arms, namely the Humans, Centaurians, Shokan, and Edenians.
Sunlight is poison to us, so we could only battle in realms during the night, so for the coming battle, we are to remain in Outworld, fighting an army predominantly composed of Mummified soldiers, who we cannot feed on thanks to their bodily fluids being dried out. To prepare ourselves, we have learned to harness the power of our crystals to enhance our teleportation skills in order to no longer need incantations for them to work, which is essential to allow us to leave the battlefield briefly to feed off other creatures in safety, and then return to fight. It is my goal to battle with Onaga personally; he holds ancient knowledge and secrets that could mean the restoration of the Vampire nation, and it is my goal to help my kind as much as possible. Even if I fail in obtaining anything useful in draining some of Onaga's essence and killing him, his death would mean the destruction of the Mummified soldiers (who are only able to live now as a result of his magic), and a significant decrease in the opposing army's power. In either scenario, the Vampires will be rewarded, and we will be better off now than we have ever been since Trom's existence.
Author : Jerrod Therace
Creation date: 2007-7-4-12-15
Modification date: 2007-7-4-12-15
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Nitara's bio in my alternate MK6 story. I did not name her realm because it was only revealed recently, and since I'm only using info that was available from MK:DA and before, the name won't ever be used. I went into the Vampire past to add story to her species, as well as have it go along with Meat's, Mavado's and eventually Onaga's bios. I also brought Khameleon in because she was mentioned in Nitara's Konquest; expect a full bio to explain her! Nitara being "chosen" will be explained in the last bio.
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I really like this. Especially since the fact that you don't want Midway's bio to interfere and you're going on MKDA info. Well established bio. 5/5.
Thanks. I've been trying to make the stories my own, and have been avoiding using anything that was revealed after MK:D's release, like how Noob Saibot is Sub-Zero's brother and all that stuff. I'm really trying to bring more creativity with this without having to make up my own story, and without having to change it to the point that it;s no longer recognizable as an MK fanfic series.
SmokeNc, you should continue writing.
-Ryan C.
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I really like this. Especially since the fact that you don't want Midway's bio to interfere and you're going on MKDA info. Well established bio. 5/5.
Thanks. I've been trying to make the stories my own, and have been avoiding using anything that was revealed after MK:D's release, like how Noob Saibot is Sub-Zero's brother and all that stuff. I'm really trying to bring more creativity with this without having to make up my own story, and without having to change it to the point that it;s no longer recognizable as an MK fanfic series.
SmokeNc, you should continue writing.
I do like your Noob Saibot story than Canon Noob Saibot story.
5/5.
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Best-intro-ever (after with Sonya’s of course)!
I really enjoyed her matter-of-fact kind of indifferent kind of annoyed voice/attitude when saying they weren’t silly clichés. And the movie reference actually suits her quite well.
You know, I’ve noticed you have a talent and a plan to always start your bios with impressive remarks. Its an excellent tactic because it hooks the reader and it makes the interest grow. So far, all your intro’s have been fantastic, and I see that as good and intelligent writing.
Its like you really know what you are doing, and why you are doing it as well.
Back to the bio, I loved the “sun part”, their “blue star”, it was quite a poetic approach imo. It really did feel like they were all getting their lost hope and faith back, it was great.
Those documents of which Nitara speaks are quite interesting, and you mentioned a dictator call Trom, I wonder if he will play any significant role beyond this bio.
I enjoyed the Khameleon part, it was a nice inclusion, specially considering it could be a small bit of trivia since she appeared in Nitara’s MKDA konquet.
I also like to note that I liked the well-thought info on vampires food and how they evolve and became greater and better, feeding on humans and edenians. Nitaras suggestion that they, the vampires, are the better of the 3 best races was also very cool, it reinforced her attitude.
“At first, the other Vampires, curious of the stranger, flocked around him, but when Cyrax used his explosive teleport to reach me, he sent my people scurrying away faster than an army of ants in a rain storm.”
LOL! That was quite fun!
I can already picture the funny bat-like beings flying around in panic.
I LOVED the way Nitara and her people analyzed the situation of the war. While reading the bio I was trying to think of why they would choose to side with the good eyes, it hadn’t even occurred to me that with Onaga in power, that would mean the extinction of their favorite food and the degradation of their race. Nice job!
Nitara is a bitch after all. A manipulator of all kinds, and a realistic strategist of course.
“Cyrax proposed a deliciously wonderful idea that would benefit my people for a generation and would help us in rebuilding our realm.... Cyrax teleported us to a high-security prison somewhere on Earth to dine on some of the sleeping individuals”
*shivers*
Poor prisoners. Hostel is coming back to my mind once again.
*shakes head trying to forget images*
You’ve got me very interested with the “chosen” bit. I hadn’t noticed it could actually mean something deeper. Cant wait to find out!
You’ve overall done an excellent job with her character. She sounds mysterious, intelligent, sadistic (but in a very eloquent way) and scary.
I loved it!
(I insist, the killing prisoners part is horrifying)
Its kind of late now. Im very interested in the outcome of the story and you’ve certainly captured me with all this awesome fan fic bios, that I will most definitely be reading the other bios that I haven’t finished pretty soon.
Its such a shame not many people read the fan fic submissions of the forums. I think some, like your work, disserve some attention.
LMAO!!!!!!
Best-intro-ever (after with Sonya’s of course)!
I really enjoyed her matter-of-fact kind of indifferent kind of annoyed voice/attitude when saying they weren’t silly clichés. And the movie reference actually suits her quite well.
lmao, thanks a lot! A funny story behind that, my friend for whatever reason, kept on bugging me with information on how much he loved Anne Rice's vampire novels, and considering how oftne he would talk to me about Lestat and all that garbage, I just got really annoyed with it and decided to trash those beliefs with this biography in case anybody wanted me to do some sort of typical vampire thing. Everything I wrote in that first paragraph is a common or obscure myth related to vampires, and I didn't want any of those things to interfere with how I envisioned Nitara.
You know, I’ve noticed you have a talent and a plan to always start your bios with impressive remarks. Its an excellent tactic because it hooks the reader and it makes the interest grow. So far, all your intro’s have been fantastic, and I see that as good and intelligent writing.
Thanks a lot! I basically write these with the understanding of how I would want to read something. I know that that first paragraph is important in grabbing a reader, so I do what I can to make it as interesting as possible.
Trom is a significant secondary character and is featured in more than one biographyy (he makes an appearence in Meat's and the upcoming Reiko & Shao Kahn bios). You'll figure out the rest when you get to Meat's though.
Poor prisoners. Hostel is coming back to my mind once again. (...) (I insist, the killing prisoners part is horrifying)
Don't think that badly about what happens to the prisoners; Nitara's not a complete monster, it's just that she views Humans and Edenians as we view cows and sheep.
Wow, I also just noticed that this bio was submitted exactly one year ago... lol, thanks for reading my work and for bumping it on its anniversary!
Wow, I also just noticed that this bio was submitted exactly one year ago... lol, thanks for reading my work and for bumping it on its anniversary!
WOW!! Now thats a very cool coincidence. lol!